[edk2-devel] [PATCH 46/79] NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe: Fix various typos

Rabeda, Maciej maciej.rabeda at intel.com
Fri Dec 6 16:02:31 UTC 2019


Reviewed-by: Maciej Rabeda <maciej.rabeda at intel.com>

Thanks!
Maciej

-----Original Message-----
From: Philippe Mathieu-Daude <philmd at redhat.com> 
Sent: Tuesday, December 3, 2019 17:15
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Cc: Antoine Coeur <coeur at gmx.fr>; Wu, Jiaxin <jiaxin.wu at intel.com>; Fu, Siyuan <siyuan.fu at intel.com>; Rabeda, Maciej <maciej.rabeda at intel.com>; Philippe Mathieu-Daude <philmd at redhat.com>
Subject: [PATCH 46/79] NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe: Fix various typos

From: Antoine Coeur <coeur at gmx.fr>

Fix various typos in documentation, comments and debug strings.

Cc: Jiaxin Wu <jiaxin.wu at intel.com>
Cc: Siyuan Fu <siyuan.fu at intel.com>
Cc: Maciej Rabeda <maciej.rabeda at intel.com>
Reviewed-by: Philippe Mathieu-Daude <philmd at redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Philippe Mathieu-Daude <philmd at redhat.com>
---
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.h  |  2 +-
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.h    |  2 +-
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.h  |  2 +-  NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.h |  2 +-  NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.c  |  4 ++--
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.c    | 10 +++++-----
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.c  | 14 +++++++-------
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Rrq.c     |  8 ++++----
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.c |  6 +++---
 NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Wrq.c     |  6 +++---
 10 files changed, 28 insertions(+), 28 deletions(-)

diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.h b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.h
index c90e69018629..6637c5a93ee5 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.h
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.h
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Mtftp4ServiceBindingCreateChild (
   @param  This                   The service binding instance
   @param  ChildHandle            The child handle to destroy
 
-  @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parameter is invaid.
+  @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parameter is invalid.
   @retval EFI_UNSUPPORTED        The child may have already been destroyed.
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS            The child is destroyed and removed from the
                                  parent's child list.
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.h b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.h
index 33393d42472c..b16ac0a4a483 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.h
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.h
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ Mtftp4WrqStart (
   Start the MTFTP session to download.
 
   It will first initialize some of the internal states then build and send a RRQ
-  reqeuest packet, at last, it will start receive for the downloading.
+  request packet, at last, it will start receive for the downloading.
 
   @param  Instance              The Mtftp session
   @param  Operation             The MTFTP opcode, it may be a EFI_MTFTP4_OPCODE_RRQ
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.h b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.h
index 7bfe706f88c6..5f37b0f7b9e6 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.h
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.h
@@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ typedef struct {
   @param  OptionList             The point to get the option array.
 
   @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parametera are invalid or packet isn't a
-                                 well-formated OACK packet.
+                                 well-formatted OACK packet.
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS            The option array is build
   @retval EFI_OUT_OF_RESOURCES   Failed to allocate memory for the array
 
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.h b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.h
index cfa7582faa4b..95e9bad43ef1 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.h
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.h
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ typedef struct {
 
   RRQ and WRQ have different requirements for Start and End.
   For example, during start up, WRQ initializes its whole valid block range
-  to [0, 0xffff]. This is bacause the server will send us a ACK0 to inform us
+  to [0, 0xffff]. This is because the server will send us a ACK0 to 
+ inform us
   to start the upload. When the client received ACK0, it will remove 0 from the
   range, get the next block number, which is 1, then upload the BLOCK1. For RRQ
   without option negotiation, the server will directly send us the BLOCK1 in diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.c
index 06c4e202d3ef..a795d262473e 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Driver.c
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ EFI_SERVICE_BINDING_PROTOCOL  gMtftp4ServiceBindingTemplete = {
   @param SystemTable    The system table.
 
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS  The handles are successfully installed on the image.
-  @retval others       some EFI_ERROR occured.
+  @retval others       some EFI_ERROR occurred.
 
 **/
 EFI_STATUS
@@ -632,7 +632,7 @@ ON_ERROR:
   @param  This                   The service binding instance
   @param  ChildHandle            The child handle to destroy
 
-  @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parameter is invaid.
+  @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parameter is invalid.
   @retval EFI_UNSUPPORTED        The child may have already been destroyed.
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS            The child is destroyed and removed from the
                                  parent's child list.
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.c
index 70bd693e4e3a..990a9ef03027 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Impl.c
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ Mtftp4OverrideValid (
   @param  UdpCfgData             The UDP configure data to reconfigure the UDP_IO
 
   @retval TRUE                   The default address is retrieved and UDP is reconfigured.
-  @retval FALSE                  Some error occured.
+  @retval FALSE                  Some error occurred.
 
 **/
 BOOLEAN
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ Mtftp4ConfigUnicastPort (
   write file, and read directory.
 
   @param  This                   The MTFTP session
-  @param  Token                  The token than encapsues the user's request.
+  @param  Token                  The token than encapsules the user's request.
   @param  Operation              The operation to do
 
   @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  Some of the parameters are invalid.
@@ -601,9 +601,9 @@ EfiMtftp4GetModeData (
                                  2.MtftpConfigData.UseDefaultSetting is FALSE and
                                    MtftpConfigData.StationIp is not a valid IPv4
                                    unicast address.
-                                 3.MtftpCofigData.UseDefaultSetting is FALSE and
+                                 3.MtftpConfigData.UseDefaultSetting is 
+ FALSE and
                                    MtftpConfigData.SubnetMask is invalid.
-                                 4.MtftpCofigData.ServerIp is not a valid IPv4
+                                 4.MtftpConfigData.ServerIp is not a 
+ valid IPv4
                                    unicast address.
                                  5.MtftpConfigData.UseDefaultSetting is FALSE and
                                    MtftpConfigData.GatewayIp is not a valid IPv4 @@ -946,7 +946,7 @@ EfiMtftp4ReadDirectory (
   or ICMP ERROR packet. Retries occur only if no response packets are received
   from the MTFTPv4 server before the timeout expires.
   It is implemented with EfiMtftp4ReadFile: build a token, then pass it to
-  EfiMtftp4ReadFile. In its check packet callback abort the opertions.
+  EfiMtftp4ReadFile. In its check packet callback abort the operations.
 
   @param  This                   Pointer to the EFI_MTFTP4_PROTOCOL instance
   @param  OverrideData           Data that is used to override the existing
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.c
index 013fe008eee8..21c1e421392b 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Option.c
@@ -18,13 +18,13 @@ CHAR8 *mMtftp4SupportedOptions[MTFTP4_SUPPORTED_OPTIONS] = {
 
 
 /**
-  Check whether two ascii strings are equel, ignore the case.
+  Check whether two ascii strings are equal, ignore the case.
 
   @param  Str1                   The first ascii string
   @param  Str2                   The second ascii string
 
   @retval TRUE                   Two strings are equal when case is ignored.
-  @retval FALSE                  Two string are not equal.
+  @retval FALSE                  Two strings are not equal.
 
 **/
 BOOLEAN
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ NetStringToU32 (
   Convert a string of the format "192.168.0.1" to an IP address.
 
   @param  Str                    The string representation of IP
-  @param  Ip                     The varible to get IP.
+  @param  Ip                     The variable to get IP.
 
   @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The IP string is invalid.
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS            The IP is parsed into the Ip
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ NetStringToIp (
     Addr = (Addr << 8) | Byte;
 
     //
-    // Skip all the digitals and check whether the sepeator is the dot
+    // Skip all the digitals and check whether the separator is the dot
     //
     while (NET_IS_DIGIT (*Str)) {
       Str++;
@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ Mtftp4FillOptions (
   @param  OptionList             The point to get the option array.
 
   @retval EFI_INVALID_PARAMETER  The parametera are invalid or packet isn't a
-                                 well-formated OACK packet.
+                                 well-formatted OACK packet.
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS            The option array is build
   @retval EFI_OUT_OF_RESOURCES   Failed to allocate memory for the array
 
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ Mtftp4ExtractMcast (
   UINT32                    Num;
 
   //
-  // The multicast option is formated like "204.0.0.1,1857,1"
+  // The multicast option is formatted like "204.0.0.1,1857,1"
   // The server can also omit the ip and port, use ",,1"
   //
   if (*Value == ',') {
@@ -461,7 +461,7 @@ Mtftp4ParseOption (
     } else if (NetStringEqualNoCase (This->OptionStr, (UINT8 *) "multicast")) {
       //
       // Multicast option, if it is a request, the value must be a zero
-      // length string, otherwise, it is formated like "204.0.0.1,1857,1\0"
+      // length string, otherwise, it is formatted like "204.0.0.1,1857,1\0"
       //
       if (Request) {
         if (*(This->ValueStr) != '\0') { diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Rrq.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Rrq.c
index 8e1338221b12..f1d456a6122d 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Rrq.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Rrq.c
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Mtftp4RrqInput (
   Start the MTFTP session to download.
 
   It will first initialize some of the internal states then build and send a RRQ
-  reqeuest packet, at last, it will start receive for the downloading.
+  request packet, at last, it will start receive for the downloading.
 
   @param  Instance              The Mtftp session
   @param  Operation             The MTFTP opcode, it may be a EFI_MTFTP4_OPCODE_RRQ
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ Mtftp4RrqStart (
   //
   // The valid block number range are [1, 0xffff]. For example:
   // the client sends an RRQ request to the server, the server
-  // transfers the DATA1 block. If option negoitation is ongoing,
+  // transfers the DATA1 block. If option negotiation is ongoing,
   // the server will send back an OACK, then client will send ACK0.
   //
   Status = Mtftp4InitBlockRange (&Instance->Blocks, 1, 0xffff); @@ -544,8 +544,8 @@ Mtftp4RrqHandleOack (
 
     //
     // Save the multicast info. Always update the Master, only update the
-    // multicast IP address, block size, window size, timeoute at the first time. If IP
-    // address is updated, create a UDP child to receive the multicast.
+    // multicast IP address, block size, window size, timeout at the first time.
+    // If IP address is updated, create a UDP child to receive the multicast.
     //
     Instance->Master = Reply.Master;
 
diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.c
index ad2ff7bf3a3f..6ca4842107df 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Support.c
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ Mtftp4AllocateRange (
 
   RRQ and WRQ have different requirements for Start and End.
   For example, during start up, WRQ initializes its whole valid block range
-  to [0, 0xffff]. This is bacause the server will send us a ACK0 to inform us
+  to [0, 0xffff]. This is because the server will send us a ACK0 to 
+ inform us
   to start the upload. When the client received ACK0, it will remove 0 from the
   range, get the next block number, which is 1, then upload the BLOCK1. For RRQ
   without option negotiation, the server will directly send us the BLOCK1 in @@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ Mtftp4RemoveBlockNum (
     // 3. (Start < Num) && (End >= Num):
     //    if End == Num, only need to decrease the End by one because
     //    we have (Start < Num) && (Num == End), so (Start <= End - 1).
-    //    if (End > Num), the hold is splited into two holes, with
+    //    if (End > Num), the hold is split into two holes, with
     //    [Start, Num - 1] and [Num + 1, End].
     //
     if (Range->Start > Num) {
@@ -649,7 +649,7 @@ Mtftp4OnTimerTick (
     }
 
     //
-    // Retransmit the packet if haven't reach the maxmium retry count,
+    // Retransmit the packet if haven't reach the maximum retry count,
     // otherwise exit the transfer.
     //
     if (++Instance->CurRetry < Instance->MaxRetry) { diff --git a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Wrq.c b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Wrq.c
index bd13244b999b..5d479fad4e7c 100644
--- a/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Wrq.c
+++ b/NetworkPkg/Mtftp4Dxe/Mtftp4Wrq.c
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ Mtftp4WrqHandleAck (
   if (Expected < 0) {
 
     //
-    // The block range is empty. It may either because the the last
+    // The block range is empty. It may either because the last
     // block has been ACKed, or the sequence number just looped back,
     // that is, there is more than 0xffff blocks.
     //
@@ -245,11 +245,11 @@ Mtftp4WrqOackValid (
   @param  Instance              The MTFTP session
   @param  Packet                The received OACK packet
   @param  Len                   The length of the packet
-  @param  Completed             Whether the transmisson has completed. NOT used by
+  @param  Completed             Whether the transmission has completed. NOT used by
                                 this function.
 
   @retval EFI_SUCCESS           The OACK process is OK
-  @retval EFI_TFTP_ERROR        Some error occured, and the session reset.
+  @retval EFI_TFTP_ERROR        Some error occurred, and the session reset.
 
 **/
 EFI_STATUS
--
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