<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 TRANSITIONAL//EN"> <HTML> <HEAD> <META HTTP-EQUIV="Content-Type" CONTENT="text/html; CHARSET=UTF-8"> <META NAME="GENERATOR" CONTENT="GtkHTML/3.6.2"> </HEAD> <BODY> Team--I read the .pdf that was posted on the Talking Points page on the wiki and thought it could use a few edits--I have posted a revised version in Open Office document format at the following location: <A HREF="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/TalkingPoints">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/TalkingPoints</A> Please read and give me detailed feedback--my edits included spelling, syntax, and some content enhancements. //mjb <TABLE CELLSPACING="0" CELLPADDING="0" WIDTH="100%"> <TR> <TD> -- Martin Joseph Brej * Fedora Enthusiast & Missionary mjbrej@sbcglobal.net * mjbrej on irc.freenode.net #fedora-mktg gpg fingerprint 202E 9B0A 2D20 C9B6 D703 1504 51D1 E1E8 14A0 CF3B <A HREF="http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject">http://www.fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject</A> <IMG SRC="cid:1137551859.3002.48.camel@localhost.localdomain" ALIGN="bottom" BORDER="0"> </TD> </TR> </TABLE> </BODY> </HTML>