translation-quick-start-guide/en_US Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml, 1.2, 1.3 rpm-info.xml, 1.16, 1.17

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4833/en_US

Modified Files:
	Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml rpm-info.xml 
Log Message:
Fix some language and flow, but incorporate sense from diegobz's changes


Index: Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	4 Sep 2007 13:27:41 -0000	1.2
+++ Accounts_And_Subscriptions.xml	4 Sep 2007 23:40:03 -0000	1.3
@@ -17,21 +17,16 @@
       <title>Making a SSH Key</title>
 
       <para>
-	If you do not have a SSH key yet, generate one using the
-	following steps:
+      If you already have an existing SSH key, you can use it for Fedora
+      work.  In that case, proceed to <xref
+	linkend="st-change-permissions"/> in the following procedure. If
+      you do not have a SSH key yet, start with the first step below:
       </para>
 
-	  <important>
-	    <title>You can use your existing SSH key</title>
-	    <para>
-	      If you already have a SSH key, jump to the next step.
-	    </para>
-	  </important>
-
       <procedure>
 	<step>
 	  <para>
-	    Type in a comand line:
+	    Enter the following command:
 	  </para>
 
 <screen>
@@ -43,14 +38,14 @@
 	    (<filename>~/.ssh/id_dsa</filename>) and enter a passphrase.
 	  </para>
 	  <caution>
-	    <title>Don't Forget Your Passphrase!</title>
+	    <title>Remember Your Passphrase</title>
 	    <para>
 	      You must have your passphrase to access to the CVS
 	      repository.  It cannot be recovered if you forget it.
 	    </para>
 	  </caution>
 	</step>
-	<step>
+	<step id="st-change-permissions">
 	  <para>
 	    Change permissions to your key and <filename>.ssh</filename>
 	    directory:
@@ -58,6 +53,8 @@
 
 <screen>
 <command>chmod 700 ~/.ssh</command>
+<command>chmod 600 ~/.ssh/id_dsa</command>
+<command>chmod 644 ~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub</command>
 </screen>
 
 	</step>
@@ -70,24 +67,6 @@
       </procedure>
     </section>
 
-    <section id="sn-ssh-use-key">
-      <title>Using an existing SSH key</title>
-      <para>
-        If you want to copy your SSH key from another location, you must to make sure to set it
-        permissions properly.
-      </para>
-      <para>
-           Setting the proper permissions:
-      </para>
-	
-<screen>
-<command>chmod 700 ~/.ssh</command>
-<command>chmod 600 ~/.ssh/id_dsa</command>
-<command>chmod 644 ~/.ssh/id_dsa.pub</command>
-</screen>
-
-    </section>
-
     <section id="sn-accounts-trans">
       <title>Accounts for Software Translation</title>
 
@@ -219,3 +198,9 @@
 
   </section>
   
+<!--
+Local variables:
+mode: xml
+fill-column: 72
+End:
+-->


Index: rpm-info.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-quick-start-guide/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- rpm-info.xml	4 Sep 2007 13:37:57 -0000	1.16
+++ rpm-info.xml	4 Sep 2007 23:40:03 -0000	1.17
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
   <changelog order="newest-first">
     <revision date="2007-09-04" number="0.3.9">
       <author worker="DiegoZacarao"/>
-      <details>Add section to use an existing SSH key</details>
+      <details>Add information on using an existing SSH key</details>
     </revision>
     <revision date="2007-08-23" number="0.3.8">
       <author worker="NorikoMizumoto"/>