QA section written - please check

[Oisin Feeley]

On Sun, 15 Feb 2009 10:53:13 -0800, "Adam Williamson"
<awilliam at redhat.com> said:
> Hi, guys. I've just completed the QA section for FWN. As it's my first
> shot, can people please check it over and make sure I didn't screw
> up? :) Thanks!

It flows very nicely and is very readable.  I think Dale's comments are
useful and would add that it's probably best to specify dates and times
as per the style guide[1]. Apart from the large number of local
variations in how dates are written out the content is archived so it's
easier for people reading it to see 2009-02-19 than "this Thursday,
February 19th".

[1] http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/StyleGuide/DatesAndTimes

Thanks again for taking on this beat Adam!

Best,
-- 
  Oisin Feeley
  http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/OisinFeeley