[Freeipa-devel] [PATCH] 619 more aci target docs

[David O'Brien]

Rob Crittenden wrote:
> I added some more documentation and examples to the aci plugin on targets.
> 
> ticket 310
> 
> rob
> 
NACK

Running behind with reviews, sorry. Just a few minor fixes:

s/targetted/targeted/
s/"This is primarily meant to be able to allow users to add/remove 
members of a specific group only."/"This is primarily designed to enable 
users to add or remove members of a specific group."

(I _think_ I understood that ok, and didn't change the meaning. Further, 
if this target is only designed for this purpose, you don't need 
"primarily". If it does something else, what is it?)

I couldn't grok 100% the "subtree" target description.

s/"... the ACI is allowed to do, they are one or more of:"/"... the ACI 
is allowed to do, and are one or more of:"

For consistency's sake, s/lets/allows/ etc. Also see below:
allows members of the "addusers" taskgroup
lets members of the editors... group?
lets members of the admin group

You might need to review the examples a bit.

cheers
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