[Fedora-ambassadors-list] Description for Linuxtag Germany

[Thorsten Leemhuis]

Hi Jeffrey!

thx for you help!

Am Montag, den 30.01.2006, 12:23 -0500 schrieb Jeffrey Tadlock:
> Gerold Kassube wrote:
>   > Can please anybody review these words?! We have to fullfinish our login
> > till next week!
> [...]
> > short description English:
> > 
> > Develops together with Red Hat the Linux-Distribution Fedora Core and
> > the LDAP-Server Fedora Directory Server plus packages a lot of software
> > suitable for Fedora Core in the community project Fedora Extras.
> 
> The Fedora Core Linux distribution is developed together with Red Hat 
> along with the Fedora Directory LDAP Server and community developed 
> packages for Fedora Extras.

Well, I really liked the other parts of you mail but don't like this one
-- "Fedora Project" is the Project Name and needs a (short) explanation.
Starting with "The Fedora Core Linux distribution..." is not the best
way to do that IMHO... But maybe that's just my opinion here.

-- 
Thorsten Leemhuis <fedora at leemhuis.info>