CD faces

[Jayme Ayres]

2008/11/20 Máirí­n Duffy <duffy at fedoraproject.org>:
> Hi Jayme,
>
> Jayme Ayres wrote:
>>
>> Hi folks,
>> I have had some ideas for the DVD label and have done two designs.
>>
>> http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme1.png
>> http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.png
>
> These are very nice! I really like how the flares have been integrated in to
> the design. One glaring issue though is that you can't put a keyline around
> the Fedora logo like that. You have to find another way to make it stand out
> against the background or even remove it (since there is already a fedora
> logo in the center right maybe the 10 could be added there and the top of
> the disc left blank?)
>
> Some other points of critique I hope you'll find helpful:
>
> - The font around the edge of the disc doesn't look like MgOpen Modata.

Now is ok.

> - You might want to tweak the smaller Fedora logo in the center right closer
> towards the flames (or maybe pull the flame in a bit more) so the entirety
> of the Fedora infinity logomark is on top of the light blue and is
> discernable from the background.

Ok I changed it.

> - I wouldn't use the . in "10." I would take it out for the label.

No more dot =)

Updated:
http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme1.png
http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.png

Sources:
http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme.svg
http://jaymeayres.com/arquivos/fedora/f10/fedora10-CD-DVD-jayme2.svg

>
> Also, just as a note, as I had mentioned yesterday on the list, I already
> had the basic designs for the disc labels done - we had decided back during
> F9 to go with a standard label design to simplify printing moving forward.
> However, that design is meant for the professionally-done screen printed
> version of the discs. This design, with the fixes above, would be a fine
> alternative for folks looking to print smaller runs on their own equipment.
>
> ~m
>
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