Picture Book Mockup

Luya Tshimbalanga luya at fedoraproject.org
Wed Mar 4 07:07:38 UTC 2009

Setting in critic mode:
Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph?
Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph?
Title "Chapter 2: Friends" is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it
might help.

Luya Tshimbalanga
Graphic & Web Design
E: luya at fedoraproject.org

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