Fedora 11 Beta release banner

[Paolo Leoni]

2009/3/13 Máirín Duffy <mairin at linuxgrrl.com>

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> It still looks like your bottom row of text could be a bit tighter. The
> first 'F' and the last 'w' look like they are gasping for air from the
> corners. I think the top row of text could be kerned just slightly tighter
> as well. Also, I think it might be better to push the '11' to the left a
> little to add a little balance from the temple.
>

Thanks a lot for your feedback. I've posted on the wiki the third version
for both, I think that these can be considered almost definitives:

<https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/5/5d/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1b.png>
https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/9/98/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1c.svg
https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/5/5f/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1c.png

https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/0/03/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.svg
https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/d/d3/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.png



> Other than that, this is fantastic. Thank you for being so great about
> being on top of the web banners!! This is extremely good work; you've
> followed our general banner format / font / etc to a T.
>


Thank you for Mo your appreciations, and thanks to all in general for the
positive feedbacks. They make me very happy! :-)


-- 
Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org
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