mirror-tutorial mirror-tutorial-en.xml,1.7,1.8

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/mirror-tutorial
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17121

Modified Files:
	mirror-tutorial-en.xml 
Log Message:
Add entities and draft notice; bump to 0.30


Index: mirror-tutorial-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/mirror-tutorial/mirror-tutorial-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- mirror-tutorial-en.xml	22 Jul 2005 12:43:58 -0000	1.7
+++ mirror-tutorial-en.xml	1 Aug 2005 21:23:52 -0000	1.8
@@ -5,8 +5,10 @@
 <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "mirror-tutorial-0.29 (2005-07-22)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "mirror-tutorial-0.30 (2005-08-01)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
 
+<!ENTITY BUG-NUM "130125">
+<!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "4">
 ]>
 
 <article id="mirror-tutorial" lang="en">
@@ -136,6 +138,16 @@
 	  </para>
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>0.30</revnumber>
+	<date>2005-08-01</date>
+	<authorinitials>PaulWFrields</authorinitials>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para>
+	    Add entities and draft notice.
+	  </para>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory>
   </articleinfo>
 
@@ -151,14 +163,7 @@
         enhance user experience, adding to the perceived value of
         non-proprietary operating systems and software.
       </para>
-      <note>
-	<title>A note about &FC; and this document</title>
-	<para>
-	  This document applies to &FC; &FCVER;, which may not be the newest
-	  release of &FC;. You can find more information about the newest
-	  version at &FP-URL;.
-	</para>
-      </note>
+      &DRAFTNOTICE;
     </section>
     <section id="sn-audience">
       <title>Audience</title>