yum-software-management yum-software-management-en.xml,1.32,1.33

[Stuart Ellis (elliss)]

Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/yum-software-management
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv7605

Modified Files:
	yum-software-management-en.xml 
Log Message:

- Added Acknowledgements section.
- Removed note on case-sensitivity as yum is actually only case-insensitive accidently, and this behaviour may not be relied on.
- Added note on FC versions - section on enabling Fedora repositories on FC3 to come. 



Index: yum-software-management-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/yum-software-management/yum-software-management-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.32
retrieving revision 1.33
diff -u -r1.32 -r1.33
--- yum-software-management-en.xml	28 Jul 2005 22:03:12 -0000	1.32
+++ yum-software-management-en.xml	10 Aug 2005 19:11:32 -0000	1.33
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "yum-software-management-0.6.1 (2005-07-27)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "yum-software-management-0.6.2 (2005-08-10)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
 
 <!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/legalnotice-en.xml">
 
@@ -100,6 +100,17 @@
         Experienced Linux users should start with
         <xref linkend="sn-managing-packages"/>.
       </para>
+<!-- SE: Section on enabling yum on FC3 to be added -->
+      <note>
+        <title>Versions of &FC;</title>
+
+        <para>
+          This document describes the configuration of
+          <command>yum</command> on &FED; &FCLOCALVER; systems. You must
+          manually configure <command>yum</command> on &FED; 3 to use
+          the &FED; repositories.
+        </para>
+      </note>
 
       <para>
         Most of the examples in this document use the package
@@ -418,10 +429,7 @@
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-<!-- I'm not sure we need any of this information on architecture.  How -->
-<!-- exactly does this help a yum user?  Note that I'm not being snide, -->
-<!-- I'm pointing out that unless this is hooked to a specific -->
-<!-- procedure, it's out of place in a tutorial. [PWF] -->
+
       <para>
         For clarity, <command>yum</command> itself lists packages in the
         format <filename>name.architecture</filename>. Repositories also
@@ -909,17 +917,6 @@
       installed and available packages.
     </para>
 
-    <note>
-      <title>Searches are not Case-sensitive</title>
-
-      <para>
-        The <option>search</option> and <option>list</option> options of
-        <command>yum</command> are not case-sensitive. A query for
-        <filename>palmpilot</filename> automatically finds
-        <filename>PalmPilot</filename> packages.
-      </para>
-    </note>
-
     <para>
       The format of the results depends upon the option. If the query
       produces no information, there are no packages matching the
@@ -1054,9 +1051,9 @@
         For example, a search query for <filename>shadowutils</filename>
         or <filename>shadow-util</filename> would not produce the
         package <filename>shadow-utils</filename>. This package would
-        match and be shown if the query was either
-        <filename>shadow-util\?</filename> or
-        <filename>Shadow\*</filename>.
+        match and be shown if the query was
+        <filename>shadow-util\?</filename>, or
+        <filename>shadow\*</filename>.
       </para>
     </section>
   </section>
@@ -1633,6 +1630,17 @@
     </note>
   </section>
 
+<!-- SE: This is at the end of the document, since it looks out of place in section 1 -->
+
+  <section id="sn-acknowledgements">
+    <title>Acknowledgements</title>
+
+    <para>
+      Paul Frields edited this document. Timothy Murphy reviewed the
+      beta release.
+    </para>
+  </section>
+
   <index id="generated-index"></index>
 </article>