example-tutorial example-tutorial-en.xml,1.13,1.14

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/example-tutorial
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv7041

Modified Files:
	example-tutorial-en.xml 
Log Message:
Fix a little section guidance, omit superfluous entity declaration... time to get this underway shortly


Index: example-tutorial-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/example-tutorial/example-tutorial-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- example-tutorial-en.xml	14 Jun 2005 20:53:21 -0000	1.13
+++ example-tutorial-en.xml	17 Aug 2005 16:58:18 -0000	1.14
@@ -5,9 +5,7 @@
  <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "example-tutorial-0.12 (2003-08-20)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
-
-<!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/legalnotice-en.xml">
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "example-tutorial-0.13 (2005-08-17)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
 
 ]>
 
@@ -15,7 +13,7 @@
   <articleinfo>
     <title>Example Tutorial</title>
     <copyright>
-      <year>2003</year>
+      <year>2003, 2005</year>
       <holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder>
       <holder>Tammy Fox</holder>
     </copyright>
@@ -41,9 +39,9 @@
     </indexterm>
 
     <para>
-      This is an example section. You can also use sect1, sect2, etc., but those
-      tags will make sections less modular — that is, harder to relocate
-      without changing a lot of other markup.
+      This is an example section. You should not use sect1, sect2, etc., since
+      those tags will make sections less modular — that is, harder to
+      relocate without changing a lot of other markup.
     </para>
     <para>
       Keep text within the <command>title</command> tags on the same line as the
@@ -119,3 +117,9 @@
 
 <index id="generated-index"></index>
 </article>
+
+<!--
+Local variables:
+mode: xml
+End:
+-->