install-guide fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml, 1.22, 1.23 fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml, 1.17, 1.18

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv19469

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml 
Log Message:
Trivial style edits


Index: fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.22
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.22 -r1.23
--- fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 17:51:38 -0000	1.22
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000	1.23
@@ -293,8 +293,9 @@
         <firstterm>netboot</firstterm>) is a standard that enables PCs
         to use files on a server as a boot device. &FC; includes
         utilities that allow it to function as a PXE server for other
-        computers. This option enables you to install &FC; entirely over
-        the network connection, using no physical media at all.
+        computers. You can use this option to install &FC; on a
+        PXE-enabled computer entirely over the network connection, using
+        no physical media at all.
       </para>
     </section>
 
@@ -396,7 +397,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
-      This facility enables you to install &FC; on machines without
+      You can use this facility to install &FC; on machines without
       using installation discs. For example, you may install &FC; on a
       laptop with no CD or DVD drive by booting the machine with a USB
       pen drive, and then using a hard drive as an installation source.


Index: fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 17:51:39 -0000	1.17
+++ fedora-install-guide-other-instmethods-en.xml	10 Dec 2005 22:54:33 -0000	1.18
@@ -156,9 +156,9 @@
       Once you have booted your computer, you may use ISO image files of
       the &FED; discs to continue the installation process. The ISO
       files must be located on a hard drive that is either internal to
-      the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. This option
-      enables you to install &FC; on computers that have neither a
-      network connection, nor CD or DVD drives.
+      the computer, or attached to the machine by USB. You can use this
+      option to install &FC; on computers that have neither a network
+      connection nor CD or DVD drives.
     </para>
 
     <para>