install-guide fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.33, 1.34

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu Dec 22 14:54:24 UTC 2005


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8372

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
Log Message:
- More work on Management Options section.




Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	22 Dec 2005 01:47:35 -0000	1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions-en.xml	22 Dec 2005 14:54:15 -0000	1.4
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     <title>Boot Options</title>
 
     <para>
-      <remark role="FIXME">Almost all of the options listed here have NOT yet been tested. 
+      <remark role="FIXME">Many of the options listed here have NOT yet been tested. 
       </remark>
     </para>
 
@@ -56,9 +56,34 @@
 
       <para>
         You may configure the installation system without affecting the
-        final &FED; system.
+        final &FED; system. The
+        <prompt>boot:</prompt>
+        prompt enables you to configure the following:
       </para>
 
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Display resolution
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Interface type
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Installation method
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>
+            Network settings
+          </para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+
       <para>
         You may force the installation system to use the lowest possible
         screen resolution (640x480) with the <option>lowres</option>
@@ -83,23 +108,30 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        You may also configure the installation method and network
-        settings at the
+        Use the <option>askmethod</option> option to display additional
+        menus that enable you to specify the installation method network
+        settings. You may also configure the installation method and
+        network settings at the
         <prompt>boot:</prompt>
-        prompt itself, without using <option>askmethod</option> to
-        display menus. To specify the installation method from the
+        prompt itself.
+      </para>
+
+      <para>
+        To specify the installation method from the
         <prompt>boot:</prompt>
-        prompt, use the <option>method</option> option.
+        prompt, use the <option>method</option> option. Refer to
+        <xref linkend="tb-installmethods"/> for the supported
+        installation methods.
       </para>
       <table id="tb-installmethods">
         <title>Installation Methods</title>
         <tgroup cols="2">
-          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Method"/>
-          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Format"/>
+          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Installation Method"/>
+          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Option Format"/>
           <thead>
             <row>
-              <entry>Method</entry>
-              <entry>Format</entry>
+              <entry>Installation Method</entry>
+              <entry>Option Format</entry>
             </row>
           </thead>
           <tbody>
@@ -178,7 +210,7 @@
 
       <para>
         This example configures all of the network settings for an
-        installation syste that uses the IP address 192.168.1.10:
+        installation system that uses the IP address 192.168.1.10:
       </para>
 <screen>
 <userinput>linux ip=<replaceable>192.168.1.10</replaceable> netmask=<replaceable>255.255.255.0</replaceable> gateway=<replaceable>192.168.1.1</replaceable> dns=<replaceable>192.168.1.2,192.168.1.3</replaceable></userinput>
@@ -192,29 +224,17 @@
         You may access the interface for the installation system from
         any other system. Access to a text mode display requires
         <command>telnet</command>, which is installed by default on
-        &FED; systems. To remotely access a graphical display for the
-        installation system, you must install client software that
-        supports the VNC (Virtual Network Computing) display protocol.
-      </para>
-
-      <para>
-        To enable remote access to a text mode installation, use the
-        <option>telnet</option> option at the
-        <prompt>boot:</prompt>
-        prompt:
+        &FED; systems. To remotely access the graphical display of an
+        installation system, you must use client software that supports
+        the VNC (Virtual Network Computing) display protocol.
       </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>linux telnet</userinput>
-</screen>
-      <para>
-        You may then connect to the installation system with the
-        <command>telnet</command> utility. The <command>telnet</command>
-        command requires the name or IP address of the installation
-        system:
-      </para>
-<screen>
-<userinput>telnet computer.mydomain.com</userinput>
-</screen>
+      <tip>
+        <title>Installing a VNC Client</title>
+        <para>
+          To install the <application>vncviewer</application> VNC client
+          on &FED;, use the package <filename>vnc</filename>.
+        </para>
+      </tip>
       <para>
         To enable remote graphical access to the installation system,
         enter two options at the prompt:
@@ -247,21 +267,22 @@
 <screen>
 <computeroutput><![CDATA[Starting VNC...
 The VNC server is now running.
-Please connect to server.example.com:1 to begin the install...
+Please connect to computer.mydomain.com:1 to begin the install...
 Starting graphical installation...
 Press <enter> for a shell]]></computeroutput>
 </screen>
-      <tip>
-        <title>Installing a VNC Client</title>
-        <para>
-          To install a VNC client on &FED;, use the package
-          <filename>vnc</filename>. To run the
-          <application>vncviewer</application> client, choose
-          <menuchoice> <guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
-          <guisubmenu>Accessories</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>VNC
-          Viewer</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
-        </para>
-      </tip>
+      <para>
+        To run the <application>vncviewer</application> client, choose
+        <menuchoice> <guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
+        <guisubmenu>Accessories</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>VNC
+        Viewer</guimenuitem></menuchoice>, or type the command
+        <application>vncviewer</application> in a terminal window. Enter
+        the server and display number in the <guilabel>VNC
+        Server</guilabel> dialog. For the example above, the
+        <guilabel>VNC Server</guilabel> is
+        <systemitem>computer.mydomain.com:1</systemitem>.
+      </para>
+
       <para>
         Alternatively, you may automatically connect the interface for
         the installation system to an active VNC client, with the
@@ -287,11 +308,33 @@
       <para>
         On &FED; systems, use the <option>-listen</option> option to
         start the <application>vncviewer</application> VNC client in
-        listening mode:
+        listening mode. In a terminal window, enter the command:
       </para>
 <screen>
  <userinput>vncviewer -listen</userinput>
 </screen>
+      <para>
+        To enable remote access to a text mode installation, use the
+        <option>telnet</option> option at the
+        <prompt>boot:</prompt>
+        prompt:
+      </para>
+<screen>
+<userinput>linux telnet</userinput>
+</screen>
+      <para>
+        You may then connect to the installation system with the
+        <command>telnet</command> utility. The <command>telnet</command>
+        command requires the name or IP address of the installation
+        system:
+      </para>
+<screen>
+<userinput>telnet computer.mydomain.com</userinput>
+</screen>
+      <para>
+        <remark role="FIXME">No password option for telnet ? 
+      </remark>
+      </para>
     </section>
 
     <section id="sn-automating-installation">
@@ -308,19 +351,19 @@
 </screen>
       <para>
         You may use Kickstart files that are located on either removable
-        storage, a hard drive, or a network server. Refer to
+        storage, or a hard drive, or on a network server. Refer to
         <xref linkend="tb-kssources"/> for the supported Kickstart
         sources.
       </para>
       <table id="tb-kssources">
         <title>Kickstart Sources</title>
         <tgroup cols="2">
-          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Source"/>
-          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Format"/>
+          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Kickstart Source"/>
+          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Option Format"/>
           <thead>
             <row>
-              <entry>Source</entry>
-              <entry>Format</entry>
+              <entry>Kickstart Source</entry>
+              <entry>Option Format</entry>
             </row>
           </thead>
           <tbody>
@@ -442,12 +485,12 @@
       <table id="tb-hwoptions">
         <title>Hardware Options</title>
         <tgroup cols="2">
-          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Option"/>
-          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Keyword"/>
+          <colspec colnum="1" colname="Compatibility Setting"/>
+          <colspec colnum="2" colname="Option"/>
           <thead>
             <row>
+              <entry>Compatibility Setting</entry>
               <entry>Option</entry>
-              <entry>Keyword</entry>
             </row>
           </thead>
           <tbody>
@@ -490,7 +533,7 @@
             <row>
               <entry>
                 <para>
-                  Disable monitor detection (DDC)
+                  Disable automatic monitor detection (DDC)
                 </para>
               </entry>
               <entry>
@@ -603,6 +646,10 @@
 <screen>
   <userinput>linux expert</userinput>
 </screen>
+      <para>
+        <remark role="FIXME">May need an explanation of driver disks.
+      </remark>
+      </para>
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-memtest">


Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.33
retrieving revision 1.34
diff -u -r1.33 -r1.34
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	22 Dec 2005 01:47:35 -0000	1.33
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	22 Dec 2005 14:54:15 -0000	1.34
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
 <!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
 <!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.0.9">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.1">
 <!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-12-22">
 <!ENTITY BOOKID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 <!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
 <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
 <!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "5">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0.9"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.1"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
 
 
 <!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">
@@ -206,6 +206,16 @@
           </para>
         </revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+        <revnumber>1.1</revnumber>
+        <date>2005-12-22</date>
+        <authorinitials>StuartEllis</authorinitials>
+        <revdescription>
+          <para>
+            Amended Management Options section.
+          </para>
+        </revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory>
   </bookinfo>
 




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