install-guide fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,1.8,1.9

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13088

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	27 May 2005 22:15:15 -0000	1.8
+++ fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:17:50 -0000	1.9
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <para>
     No changes are made to your computer until you click the
     <guilabel>Next</guilabel> button.  If you abort the installation
-    process after that point, the &FED; system will be incomplete and
+    process after that point, the &FC; system will be incomplete and
     unusable.  To return to previous screens to make different choices,
     select <guilabel>Back</guilabel>.  To abort the installation, turn
     off the computer.
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     <title>Aborting Installation</title>
     <para>
       In certain situations, you may be unable to return to previous
-      screens.  &FED; notifies you of this restriction and allows you to
+      screens.  &FC; notifies you of this restriction and allows you to
       abort the installation program.  You may reboot with the
       installation media to start over.
     </para>
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    If your installation requires more than one disc, &FED; displays a
+    If your installation requires more than one disc, &FC; displays a
     list of all discs required to complete the process.  If you do not
     have all of the necessary discs, select
     <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to abort the installation. Otherwise,