install-guide fedora-install-guide-en.xml,1.15,1.16

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13157

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
Log Message:
Publication edit, mainly small edits made highly visible by not filling paragraphs, broken into individual commmits.  Some notes about this review:  this is mainly content -not- XML review, although the XML looks prit-near perfect, and I tried not to tweak the XML for the XML-sake; using 'Fedora' to discuss the 'Fedora Core' OS is a little colloquial, so I tried to catch it where I could, i.e., FED -> FC ... this is akin to 'docs' v. 'documentation'; please read and comment back directly to us author/editors -or- the mailing list.


Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	31 May 2005 19:11:54 -0000	1.15
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	9 Jun 2005 00:18:10 -0000	1.16
@@ -4,16 +4,16 @@
 <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY VERSION "0.7.1beta"> <!-- version for this document -->
+<!ENTITY VERSION "1.0rc1"> <!-- version for this document -->
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "fedora-install-guide-en-&VERSION; (2005-05-18)"> <!-- change date here and VERSION entity everytime a change is made-->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "fedora-install-guide-en-&VERSION; (2005-06-08-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- change date here and VERSION entity everytime a change is made-->
 
 <!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../common/legalnotice-en.xml">
 
 <!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
 <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
 <!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "4">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "BETA">
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0rc1">
 <!ENTITY DRAFTNOTICE SYSTEM "../common/draftnotice-en.xml">
 
 
@@ -41,6 +41,7 @@
 <book id="book" lang="en">
   <bookinfo>
     <title>&FC; &FCLOCALVER; &IG; &DOCLOCALVER;</title>
+    <!-- Remove DOCLOCALVER for release -->
     <copyright>
       <year>2005</year>
       <holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder>
@@ -93,6 +94,17 @@
 	  </para>
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>1.0rc1</revnumber>
+	<date>2005-06-08</date>
+	<authorinitials>KarstenWade</authorinitials>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para>
+	    Publication edit and declaration of release candidate
+	  </para>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
+
     </revhistory>
   </bookinfo>