fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 22:22:14 UTC 2005
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3915
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
Log Message:
Very minor style edits.
Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 3 May 2005 12:19:44 -0000 1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 9 May 2005 22:22:12 -0000 1.4
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
The default security configuration for &FC; will protect your system
without restricting any of the functions of a desktop or laptop
computer. If you are installing a server then you will need to
- alter the settings in order to enable others to access the system.
+ alter these settings in order to enable others to access the system.
</para>
<para>
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@
</figure>
<para>
- It is recommended that you do not disable the firewall. If it is
- necessary to do so, then select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
+ Avoid disabling the firewall. If you believe that it is necessary
+ to do so, then select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
</para>
<tip>
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