fedora-docs/install-guide fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4

Stuart Ellis (elliss) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 9 22:22:14 UTC 2005


Author: elliss

Update of /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv3915

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 
Log Message:

Very minor style edits.



Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/fedora-docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	3 May 2005 12:19:44 -0000	1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	9 May 2005 22:22:12 -0000	1.4
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     The default security configuration for &FC; will protect your system
     without restricting any of the functions of a desktop or laptop
     computer.  If you are installing a server then you will need to
-    alter the settings in order to enable others to access the system.
+    alter these settings in order to enable others to access the system.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -59,8 +59,8 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      It is recommended that you do not disable the firewall.  If it is
-      necessary to do so, then select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
+      Avoid disabling the firewall.  If you believe that it is necessary
+      to do so, then select <guilabel>No firewall</guilabel>.
     </para>
 
     <tip>




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