install-guide fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,1.6,1.7

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 15 16:02:52 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

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retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	12 May 2005 23:55:58 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml	15 May 2005 16:02:49 -0000	1.7
@@ -4,27 +4,35 @@
   <title>Package Selection</title>
 
   <para>
-    The installation type that you chose earlier in the process is used
-    to select a set of software packages for your final system.  You can
-    simply accept this default set of packages, or customize it to fit
-    your preferences.
+    &FED; uses the installation type to select a set of software
+    packages for your system.  Refer to <xref linkend="ch-installtypes"
+    /> for more information.  You can accept this default set of
+    packages, or customize it to fit your preferences.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-  If you chose the Custom installation type then the screen for
-  <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> is shown automatically.
+    If you chose the <guilabel>Custom</guilabel> installation type,
+    &FED; displays the screen for <guilabel>Package Group
+      Selection</guilabel> automatically.
   </para>
 
   <tip>
-   <title>Installation Choices Are Not Permanent</title>
+    <title>Changing Your Mind</title>
     <para>
-    The installation type and packages that you select do not
-    impose any restrictions after the installation process has completed.
-   </para>
+      The installation type and packages that you select are not
+      permanent.  After you boot your system, use the
+      <application>Package Management</application> tool to make
+      different software selections for your system.  To run this tool,
+      from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
+	<guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	<guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	<guimenuitem>Add/Remove Applications</guimenuitem>
+      </menuchoice>.
+    </para>
   </tip>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-defaultpackages">
+  <section id="sn-defaultpackages">
     <title>Package Installation Defaults</title>
 
     <para>
@@ -50,29 +58,29 @@
 
     <para>
       To accept the default package selection, select <guilabel>Install
-	the default software packages</guilabel>.
+	the default software packages</guilabel>.  Select
+      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to continue, and proceed to <xref
+	linkend="ch-abouttoinstall" />.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       To view or change the packages, select <guilabel>Customize
-	software packages to be installed</guilabel>.  This option takes
-	you to the <guilabel>Package Group Selection</guilabel> screen.
+	software packages to be installed</guilabel>.  Select
+      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to continue, and proceed to <xref
+	linkend="sn-packagegroups" />.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
-      Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.
-    </para>
+  </section>
 
-  </sect1>
 
-
-  <sect1 id="s1-packagegroups">
+  <section id="sn-packagegroups">
     <title>Package Group Selection</title>
 
     <para>
-      The software included with &FC; is divided into <firstterm>package
-      groups</firstterm>, enabling you to specify the systems and
-      functions that you require.
+      &FC; divides included software into <indexterm>
+	<primary>package groups</primary>
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>package groups</firstterm> which make
+      software selection easier.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-package-selection">
@@ -93,29 +101,26 @@
     </figure>
 
     <para>
-      The default groups for the installation type that you chose are
-      ticked. You can select or remove any group of packages at this
-      point, including those for the installation type.
+      The default groups for the chosen installation type are already
+      selected.  Select or remove any group of packages as desired.
+      <emphasis>No</emphasis> packages from a group will be installed
+      unless the checkbox next to the group is selected.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      No packages from a group will be installed unless the checkbox
-      next to the group is ticked.
-    </para>
-
-   <para>
-    To change which packages within a selected group will be installed,
-      click the <guilabel>Details</guilabel> link next to the name of
-      the group.  The <guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group are
-      automatically installed if the group is selected.
-      <guilabel>Optional Packages</guilabel> can be selected or
-      deselected by clicking the checkbox next to the name of the
-      individual package.
+      To change which packages within a selected group will be
+      installed, select the <guilabel>Details</guilabel> link next to
+      the name of the group.  &FED; automatically installs
+      <guilabel>Base Packages</guilabel> of a group if the group is
+      selected.  Change the selection of <guilabel>Optional
+	Packages</guilabel> by using the checkbox next to the name of
+      the individual package.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      Listed against each group is the number of packages are currently
-      slected for installation, and the total number of packages within that group.
+      &FED; lists with each group is the number of packages currently
+      selected for installation, and the total number of packages within
+      that group.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-package-selection-details">
@@ -135,11 +140,11 @@
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-lang-packages">
-    <title>Selecting Support for Additional Languages</title>
+  <section id="sn-lang-packages">
+    <title>Additional Language Support</title>
 
     <para>
       Your &FED; system automatically supports the language that you
@@ -149,57 +154,53 @@
       group.
     </para>
 
-    <para>
-      There is no limit to the number of languages that a &FED; system
-      can support.
-    </para>
-
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 
 
-  <sect1 id="s1-extreme-packagegroups">
+  <section id="sn-extreme-packagegroups">
     <title>Everything or Minimal Installations</title>
 
     <para>
       Two of the groups under the heading of
-      <guilabel>Miscellaneous</guilabel> are not compatible with the
-      others.  For this reason, selecting either of these groups
-      prevents you from using the other groups on the list.
+      <guilabel>Miscellaneous</guilabel> are incompatible with the
+      others.  If you select either of these groups, your other group
+      selections become invalid.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel> then all of the
-      packages provided with &FC; will be installed.  Note that many
-      network services are not automatically enabled on installation.
-      This option is useful for testing and development.
+      If you select <guilabel>Everything</guilabel>,
+      <emphasis>all</emphasis> of the packages provided with &FC; will
+      be installed.  Although many additional network services are
+      installed, however, some will not be enabled after installation.
+      This option may be useful for some testing and development
+      purposes.
     </para>
 
     <caution>
-      <title><guilabel>Everything</guilabel> requires 7Gb of free disk
-	space</title>
+      <title>Storage Requirements</title>
       <para>
-	The <guilabel>Everything</guilabel> installation fills 6.9Gb of
-	free disk space, and temporarily requires an additional 175Mb of
-	disk space during the installation process.  See the Release
-	Notes for more information about storage requirements.
+	The <guilabel>Everything</guilabel> installation fills
+	approximately 6.9Gb of free disk space, and temporarily requires
+	an additional 175Mb of disk space during the installation
+	process.  Refer to the Release Notes for more information about
+	storage requirements.
       </para>
     </caution>
 
     <para>
       The <guilabel>Minimal</guilabel> package group provides only the
-      essential packages to create a bootable system.  No graphical
-      interface is installed with this option.
+      essential packages to create a bootable system.  This package
+      group provides no graphical interface.
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      When you are satisfied with the packages selected for
-      installation, click <guilabel>Next</guilabel>.  The installation
-      system checks your selection, and automatically adds any extra
-      packages required for the software that you have selected, before
-      moving on to the next screen.
+      After you have selected the desired packages, select
+      <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed.  &FED; checks your
+      selection, and automatically adds any extra packages required to
+      use the software you have selected.
     </para>
 
-  </sect1>
+  </section>
 </chapter>
 
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