install-guide fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,1.5,1.6

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	12 May 2005 23:55:56 -0000	1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-abouttoinstall-en.xml	15 May 2005 16:11:11 -0000	1.6
@@ -2,21 +2,20 @@
 
 <chapter id="ch-abouttoinstall">
   <title>About to Install</title>
-
+    
   <warning>
-    <title>This is the last point at which you can decide to stop the
-      installation</title>
+    <title>Last Chance to Abort</title>
     <para>
-      No changes will be made to your computer until you click the
+      No changes are made to your computer until you click the
       <guilabel>Next</guilabel> button.  If you abort the installation
-      process after leaving this screen the &FC; system will be
-      incomplete and unusable.
+      process after that point, the &FC; system will be incomplete and
+      unusable.
     </para>
   </warning>
  
   <para>
-    You can still return to previous screens to alter any details by
-    selecting <guilabel>Back</guilabel>.
+    You may return to previous screens to alter any details by selecting
+    <guilabel>Back</guilabel>.
   </para>
 
   <figure id="fig-about-to-install">
@@ -41,12 +40,11 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    For installations requiring more than one disc, an extra dialog will
-    list all of the discs that you will need in order to
-    complete the installation process.  If
-    you do not have all of the necessary discs, select
-    <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to abort the installation.
-    Otherwise, choose <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to carry out the installation.
+    If your installation requires more than one disc, &FED; displays a
+    list of all discs required to complete the process.  If you do not
+    have all of the necessary discs, select
+    <guibutton>Reboot</guibutton> to abort the installation. Otherwise,
+    choose <guibutton>Continue</guibutton> to proceed with installation.
   </para>
 
 </chapter>