install-guide fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,1.6,1.7

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 22 13:28:01 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv1575

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml 
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Index: fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	14 May 2005 22:35:27 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-firewallconfig-en.xml	22 May 2005 13:27:59 -0000	1.7
@@ -47,14 +47,14 @@
     <para>
       By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
       that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
-      block incoming connections from other systems.  By making changes
-      on this screen, you can allow access to specific network services
-      on your &FED; system.
+      block incoming connections from other systems.  You may make
+      changes on this screen to allow access to specific network
+      services on your &FED; system.
     </para>
 
     <para>
       To enable access to services listed on this screen, click the
-      checkbox next to the service name.  After installation is
+      check box next to the service name.  After installation is
       complete, you can enable access to other services as well.
     </para>
 
@@ -64,11 +64,10 @@
     </para>
 
     <tip>
-      <title>Changing the firewall settings</title>
+      <title>Changing the Firewall Settings</title>
       <para>
-	To change these settings later, use the
-	<application>system-config-securitylevel</application> utility.
-	From the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+	To change these settings later, from the main menu, choose
+	<menuchoice>
 	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
 	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Security
 	    Level and Firewall</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
@@ -88,9 +87,10 @@
       </indexterm> <firstterm>&SEL;</firstterm> (Security Enhanced
       Linux) framework is part of &FC;. &SEL; limits the actions of both
       users and programs by enforcing security policies throughout the
-      operating system. Without &SEL; software bugs or configuration
-      changes can render a system more vulnerable.  The restrictions
-      imposed by &SEL; policies provide an extra line of defense.
+      operating system. Without &SEL;, software bugs or configuration
+      changes may render a system more vulnerable.  The restrictions
+      imposed by &SEL; policies provide extra security against
+      unauthorized access.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -98,41 +98,59 @@
       a &FED; system. For this reason, &FC; uses targeted policies,
       which only affect specific network services.  These services
       cannot perform actions that are not part of their normal
-      functions.  This means that &SEL; can be active without causing
-      users any inconvenience.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      To use the targeted &SEL; policy on your &FED; system, set the
-      &SEL; mode to <guilabel>Active</guilabel>.  This is the default
-      mode for &FED; installations.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      Because &SEL; is a new technology, a diagnostic mode is provided.
-      If you set &SEL; to <guilabel>Warn</guilabel>, the system is
-      configured, but any breach of security policies only causes an
-      error message to appear.  No activities are actually prohibited
-      when &SEL; is installed in this mode.  You may change the &SEL;
-      mode to active at any time after booting.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      If you choose the <guilabel>Disabled</guilabel> mode for &SEL;,
-      &FED; does not configure the access control system at all.  To
-      make &SEL; active later, from the main menu, select <menuchoice>
-	<guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
-	<guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
-	<guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
-      </menuchoice>.
-    </para>
+      functions.  The targeted policies reduce or eliminate any
+      inconvenience &SEL; might cause users.  Set the &SEL; mode to one
+      of the following:
+    </para>
+
+    <variablelist>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Active</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    Select this mode to use the targeted &SEL; policy on your
+	    &FED; system.  This is the default mode for &FED;
+	    installations.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Warn</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    Because &SEL; is a new technology, this diagnostic mode is
+	    provided.  In this mode, the system is configured with
+	    &SEL;, but a breach of security policies only causes an
+	    error message to appear.  No activities are actually
+	    prohibited when &SEL; is installed in this mode. You may
+	    change the &SEL; mode to <guilabel>Active</guilabel> at any
+	    time after booting.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+      <varlistentry>
+	<term><guilabel>Disabled</guilabel></term>
+	<listitem>
+	  <para>
+	    If you choose this mode for &SEL;, &FED; does not configure
+	    the access control system at all. To make &SEL; active
+	    later, from the main menu, select
+	    <menuchoice>
+	      <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
+	      <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
+	      <guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
+	    </menuchoice>.
+	  </para>
+	</listitem>
+      </varlistentry>
+    </variablelist>
 
     <tip>
       <title>Changing the &SEL; policy</title>
       <para>
 	&SEL; is unique in that it cannot be bypassed, even by the
-	system administrators.  You can configure the behavior of &SEL;
-	with the <application>system-config-securitylevel</application>
-	utility.  From the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
+	system administrators.  To change the behavior of &SEL; after
+	installation, from the main menu, choose <menuchoice>
 	  <guimenu>Desktop</guimenu>
 	  <guisubmenu>System Settings</guisubmenu>
 	  <guimenuitem>Security Level and Firewall</guimenuitem>
@@ -142,8 +160,6 @@
 
   </section>
 
-
-
 </chapter>
 
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