install-guide fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml, 1.11, 1.12

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv25770

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml 
Log Message:
- Better yet, combine into better overall admonition
- Some autofill artifacts, sorry



Index: fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	29 May 2005 16:44:42 -0000	1.11
+++ fedora-install-guide-diskpartitioning-en.xml	29 May 2005 16:48:41 -0000	1.12
@@ -354,26 +354,26 @@
       </indexterm> <firstterm>RAID</firstterm> and
       <indexterm>
 	<primary>LVM</primary>
-      </indexterm> <firstterm>LVM</firstterm> to provide more
-      extensible and reliable data storage.
+      </indexterm> <firstterm>LVM</firstterm> to provide more extensible
+      and reliable data storage.
     </para>
 
     <figure id="fig-disk-setup">
-    <title>
-      Disk Setup Screen
-    </title>
-    <mediaobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <imageobject>
-        <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
-      </imageobject>
-      <textobject>
-        <phrase>disk setup screen</phrase>
-      </textobject>
-    </mediaobject>
-  </figure>
+      <title>
+	Disk Setup Screen
+      </title>
+      <mediaobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.eps" format="EPS"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<imageobject>
+	  <imagedata align="center" fileref="figs/disk-setup.png" format="PNG"/>
+	</imageobject>
+	<textobject>
+	  <phrase>disk setup screen</phrase>
+	</textobject>
+      </mediaobject>
+    </figure>
 
     <para>
       <application>Disk Druid</application> displays the following
@@ -393,7 +393,7 @@
 	    on the system, choose which disks the partition may inhabit.
 	    Indicate a size in megabytes for the partition.
 	  </para>
-	  <note>
+	  <important>
 	    <title>Illegal Partitions</title>
 	    <para>
 	      <indexterm>
@@ -402,25 +402,22 @@
 	      </indexterm> The <filename>/bin/</filename>,
 	      <filename>/dev/</filename>, <filename>/etc/</filename>,
 	      <filename>/lib/</filename>, <filename>/proc/</filename>,
-	      <filename>/root/</filename>, and <filename>/sbin/</filename>
-	      directories may not be used for separate partitions in
-	      <application>Disk Druid</application>.  These directories
-	      reside on the
+	      <filename>/root/</filename>, and
+	      <filename>/sbin/</filename> directories may not be used
+	      for separate partitions in <application>Disk
+		Druid</application>.  These directories reside on the
 	      <indexterm>
 		<primary>partition</primary>
 		<secondary>root</secondary>
 	      </indexterm> <filename>/</filename> (root) partition.
 	    </para>
-	  </note>
-          <important>
-           <title>LVM and <filename>/boot</filename></title>
-           <para>
+	    <para>
 	      The <filename>/boot</filename> partition may not reside on
 	      an LVM volume group.  Create the
 	      <filename>/boot</filename> partition before configuring
 	      any volume groups.
-           </para>
-          </important>
+	    </para>
+	  </important>
 	  <para>
 	    You may also choose from three options for sizing your
 	    partition: