release-notes/FC4 Makefile,1.1,1.2 splash.xml,1.1,1.2

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 29 19:43:13 UTC 2005


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv30137

Modified Files:
	Makefile splash.xml 
Log Message:
Fixes some formatting issues in the new splash page.  Not sure why, but the XSL was making everything in the <listitem> come out as a single paragraph regardless of <para> separaters.


Index: Makefile
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/Makefile,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- Makefile	26 May 2005 20:33:10 -0000	1.1
+++ Makefile	29 May 2005 19:43:11 -0000	1.2
@@ -30,7 +30,8 @@
         java.xml kernel.xml misc-server.xml multimedia.xml              \
         networking.xml overview.xml package-movement.xml                \
         package-notes.xml printing.xml project-overview.xml samba.xml   \
-        security.xml server-tools.xml web-servers.xml xorg.xml
+        security.xml server-tools.xml web-servers.xml xorg.xml          \
+	splash.xml
 
 # README-${LANG}.pdf: README-en.xml
 # README-${LANG}.html: README-en.xml


Index: splash.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/splash.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- splash.xml	29 May 2005 19:28:03 -0000	1.1
+++ splash.xml	29 May 2005 19:43:11 -0000	1.2
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
     &FC; is a completely free, user friendly, and secure general
     purpose platform based on Linux. &FP; is an open source
     project that pioneers leading edge technology and concepts
-    sponsored by &RHI; and supported by the &FED; community.  Refer to
+    sponsored by &RH; and supported by the &FED; community.  Refer to
     these webpages to find out more information about &FED;:
   </para>
   <itemizedlist>
@@ -48,97 +48,95 @@
     <para>
       &FC; &LOCALVER; is the latest version of the free and popular &FC;
       platform with a number of unique features and significant
-      improvements over previous versions.  This section is the major
-      highlights in this release.
+      improvements over previous versions.  This section provides an
+      overview of the major highlights in this release.
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Desktop Enhancements
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  The &FED; desktop brings to you the latest software such as
-	  GNOME 2.10 and KDE 3.4 with a new look and feel.  Clearlooks
-	  is the new simple and elegant default theme that is inspired
-	  by the classic Red Hat Bluecurve theme.
+	  Desktop Enhancements — The &FED; desktop brings to you
+	  the latest software such as GNOME 2.10 and KDE 3.4 with a new
+	  look and feel.  Clearlooks is the new simple and elegant
+	  default theme that is inspired by the classic Red Hat
+	  Bluecurve theme.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
 	  Improved Productivity
 	</para>
-	<para>
-	  Evince (<ulink
-	    url="http://www.gnome.org/projects/evince/">http://www.gnome.org/projects/evince/</ulink>) 
-	  is a document viewer for multiple document formats such as
-	  pdf, postscript, and many others.  Evince replaces a whole
-	  category of document viewers with  a single simple
-	  application.
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  OpenOffice.org 2.0 (<ulink
-	    url="http://www.openoffice.org/product2/index.html">http://www.openoffice.org/product2/index.html</ulink>) 
-	  is an office productivity suite.  This latest version includes
-	  several enhancements such as improved Microsoft Office
-	  compatibility, completely revamped Impress presentation
-	  software, and native support for the OpenDocument format. This
-	  version also introduces Base, a fully integrated database
-	  management software. You can find the extensive list of new
-	  features at <ulink
-	    url="http://marketing.openoffice.org/2.0/featureguide.html">http://marketing.openoffice.org/2.0/featureguide.html</ulink>.</para>
-	<para>
-	  Eclipse 3.1 is an open and extensible platform and Integrated
-	  Development Environment (<acronym>IDE</acronym>) that can be
-	  used to develop software in any language. 
-	</para>
+	<itemizedlist>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>
+	      Evince (<ulink
+		url="http://www.gnome.org/projects/evince/">http://www.gnome.org/projects/evince/</ulink>) 
+	      is a document viewer for multiple document formats such as
+	      pdf, postscript, and many others.  Evince replaces a whole
+	      category of document viewers with  a single simple
+	      application.
+	    </para>
+	  </listitem>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>
+	      OpenOffice.org 2.0 (<ulink
+		url="http://www.openoffice.org/product2/index.html">http://www.openoffice.org/product2/index.html</ulink>) 
+	      is an office productivity suite.  This latest version
+	      includes several enhancements such as improved Microsoft
+	      Office compatibility, completely revamped Impress
+	      presentation software, and native support for the
+	      OpenDocument format. This version also introduces Base, a
+	      fully integrated database management software. You can
+	      find the extensive list of new features at <ulink
+		url="http://marketing.openoffice.org/2.0/featureguide.html">http://marketing.openoffice.org/2.0/featureguide.html</ulink>.</para>
+	  </listitem>
+	  <listitem>
+	    <para>
+	      Eclipse 3.1 is an open and extensible platform and
+	      Integrated Development Environment
+	      (<acronym>IDE</acronym>) that can be used to develop
+	      software in any language. 
+	    </para>
+	  </listitem>
+	</itemizedlist>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Improved Security
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  &SEL; is a security architecture that protects applications
-	  and uses through finely grained security controls.  The
-	  targeted policy that has been active since &FC; 3 has been
-	  improved to cover dozens of more daemons.  You can read more
-	  in the technical release notes <xref linkend="sn-overview"/>.
+	  Improved Security — &SEL; is a security architecture
+	  that protects applications and uses through finely grained
+	  security controls.  The targeted policy that has been active
+	  since &FC; 3 has been improved to cover dozens of more
+	  daemons.  You can read more in the technical release notes
+	  <xref linkend="sn-overview"/>.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Integrated Clustering Technology
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  Global File System (<acronym>GFS</acronym>) is an open source
-	  clustering file system that allows a cluster of Linux servers
-	  to share a common storage pool. &FC; &LOCALVER; has integrated
-	  GFS within the system to manage your storage in an efficient
-	  way.  You can read more at <ulink
+	  Integrated Clustering Technology — Global File System
+	  (<acronym>GFS</acronym>) is an open source clustering file
+	  system that allows a cluster of Linux servers to share a
+	  common storage pool. &FC; &LOCALVER; has integrated GFS within
+	  the system to manage your storage in an efficient way.  You
+	  can read more at <ulink
 	    url="http://www.redhat.com/software/rha/gfs/">http://www.redhat.com/software/rha/gfs/</ulink>.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Built-in Virtualization
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  Xen is a virtual machine that can securely run multiple
-	  operating systems in their own sandboxed domains.  Xen has
-	  been integrated into &FC; to work in a seamless fashion.  You
-	  can read more about Xen at <ulink
+	  Built-in Virtualization — Xen is a virtual machine that
+	  can securely run multiple operating systems in their own
+	  sandboxed domains.  Xen has been integrated into &FC; to work
+	  in a seamless fashion.  You can read more about Xen at <ulink
 	    url="http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/virtualization/">http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/virtualization/</ulink>.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>
-	  Solid Platform
-	</para>
-	<para>
-	  &FC; &LOCALVER; includes and integrates the latest 4.0 version
-	  of GNU Compiler Collection which has a rewritten optimisation
-	  infrastructure and improved support for a native Free Java
-	  software stack.  This includes parts of OpenOffice.org 2.0.,
-	  Eclipse, and Apache Jakarta, among others.
+	  Solid Platform — &FC; &LOCALVER; includes and integrates
+	  the latest 4.0 version of GNU Compiler Collection which has a
+	  rewritten optimisation infrastructure and improved support for
+	  a native Free Java software stack.  This includes parts of
+	  OpenOffice.org 2.0., Eclipse, and Apache Jakarta, among
+	  others.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>




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