release-notes/FC4 intro.xml,1.2,1.3

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv25329

Modified Files:
	intro.xml 
Log Message:
Clarifying support stance, removing introductory cruft that is replaced by a real ToC.


Index: intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- intro.xml	28 May 2005 16:10:31 -0000	1.2
+++ intro.xml	30 May 2005 17:05:10 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,59 +1,25 @@
-  <section id="sn-intro">
-    <title>Introduction</title>
-
-    <para>The &PROJ; is an openly-developed project designed by &RH;, open for
-      general participation, led by a meritocracy, and following a set of
-      project objectives.  The results from this project include &DISTRO;, a
-      complete, general-purpose operating system built exclusively from open
-      source software.</para>
-
-    <note>
-      <title>Note</title>
-
-      <para>&DISTRO; is not a supported product of &FORMAL-RHI;</para>
-    </note>
-
-    <para>For more information, refer to the &PROJ; overview later in this
-      document.</para>
-
-    <para>The following topics related to &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; are covered in
-      this document:</para>
-
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem os="test">
-        <para>Release notes feedback procedure</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Introduction (this section)</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Hardware requirements</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Overview of this release</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Installation-related notes</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Package-specific notes</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Packages added/removed/deprecated</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para>An overview of the &PROJ;</para>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-
-  </section>
+<section id="sn-intro">
+  <title>Introduction</title>
+  <para>
+    The &PROJ; is an openly-developed project designed by &RH;, open for
+    general participation, led by a meritocracy, and following a set of
+    project objectives.  The results from this project include &DISTRO;,
+    a complete, general-purpose operating system built exclusively from
+    open source software.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+    <title>Note</title>
+    <para>
+      &FC; is a community supported project.
+    </para>
+    <para>
+      &FC; is not a commercially supported product of &FORMAL-RHI;.
+    </para>
+  </note>
+  <para>
+    For more information, refer to <xref linkend="sn-overview"/>.
+  </para>
+</section>
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