release-notes/FC4 README-en.xml,1.3,1.4
Karsten Wade (kwade)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon May 30 20:27:46 UTC 2005
Author: kwade
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv29566
Modified Files:
README-en.xml
Log Message:
Quick lookover yields these, the rest are either correct or not ...
Index: README-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/FC4/README-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- README-en.xml 30 May 2005 19:47:11 -0000 1.3
+++ README-en.xml 30 May 2005 20:27:44 -0000 1.4
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@
<articleinfo>
<title>&DISTRO; &DISTROVER; README</title>
<copyright>
- <year>2004</year>
+ <year>2005</year>
<holder>&FORMAL-RHI;</holder>
</copyright>
<legalnotice id="legalnotice">
- <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2004 &PROJ; and
+ <para>The contents of this CD-ROM are Copyright © 2005 &PROJ; and
others. Refer to the End User License Agreement and individual
copyright notices in each source package for distribution terms.</para>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
</legalnotice>
</articleinfo>
- <sect1 id="dir-org">
+ <section id="dir-org">
<title>DIRECTORY ORGANIZATION</title>
<para>&DISTRO; is delivered on multiple CD-ROMs consisting of installation
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
CD-ROM):</para>
<screen arch="x86">
- <remark os="test">(x86)</remark>
+ <!-- <remark os="test">(x86)</remark> -->
<computeroutput>
/mnt/cdrom
|----> Fedora
@@ -91,24 +91,24 @@
`----> RPM-GPG-KEY -- GPG signature for packages from Red Hat
</computeroutput>
</screen>
-
+<!-- repetitive for the moment
<screen arch="x86_64">
<remark os="test">(x86_64)</remark>
<computeroutput>
/mnt/cdrom
- |----> Fedora
- | |----> RPMS -- binary packages
- | `----> base -- information on this release of Fedora
+ |- - - -> Fedora
+ | |- - - -> RPMS - - binary packages
+ | `- - - -> base - - information on this release of Fedora
| Core used by the installation process
- |----> images -- boot disk ISO image
- |----> isolinux -- files necessary to boot from CD-ROM
- |----> README -- this file
- |----> RELEASE-NOTES -- the latest information about this release
+ |- - - -> images - - boot disk ISO image
+ |- - - -> isolinux - - files necessary to boot from CD-ROM
+ |- - - -> README - - this file
+ |- - - -> RELEASE-NOTES - - the latest information about this release
| of Fedora Core
- `----> RPM-GPG-KEY -- GPG signature for packages from Red Hat
+ `- - - -> RPM-GPG-KEY - - GPG signature for packages from Red Hat
</computeroutput>
- </screen>
-
+ </screen>
+ -->
<para>The remaining Installation CD-ROMs are similar to Installation CD-ROM
1, except that only the <filename>Fedora</filename> subdirectory is
present.</para>
@@ -152,9 +152,9 @@
<para><command>umount /mnt/cdrom</command></para>
</listitem>
</orderedlist>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
- <sect1 id="installing">
+ <section id="installing">
<title>INSTALLING</title>
<para>Many computers can now automatically boot from CD-ROMs. If you have
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
CD-ROM directly. After booting, the &DISTRO; installation program will
start, and you will be able to install your system from the CD-ROM.</para>
- <para arch="x86;x86_64"><remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> The
+ <para arch="x86;x86_64"><!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> --> The
<filename>images/</filename> directory contains the file
<filename>boot.iso</filename>. This file is an ISO image that can be used
to boot the &DISTRO; installation program. It is a handy way to start
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@
must then burn <filename>boot.iso</filename> onto a recordable/rewriteable
CD-ROM.</para>
- <para arch="x86;x86_64"><remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> Another image
+ <para arch="x86;x86_64"><!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> --> Another image
file contained in the <filename>images/</filename> directory is
<filename>diskboot.img</filename>. This file is designed for use with USB
pen drives (or other bootable media with a capacity larger than a diskette
@@ -181,14 +181,14 @@
<note arch="x86;x86_64">
<title>Note</title>
- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark>
+ <!-- <remark os="test">(x86;x86_64)</remark> -->
<para>The ability to use this image file with a USB pen drive depends on
the ability of your system's BIOS to boot from a USB device.</para>
</note>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
- <sect1 id="get-help">
+ <section id="get-help">
<title>GETTING HELP</title>
<para>For those that have web access, see <ulink
@@ -197,9 +197,9 @@
<para><ulink
url="https://listman.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/">https://listman.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink></para>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
- <sect1 id="export-ctl">
+ <section id="export-ctl">
<title>EXPORT CONTROL</title>
<para>The communication or transfer of any information received with this
@@ -209,9 +209,9 @@
country listed in such applicable laws, regulations and rules unless
properly authorized. The obligations under this paragraph shall survive
in perpetuity.</para>
- </sect1>
-
- <sect1 id="s1-test" os="test">
+ </section>
+<!--
+ <section id="s1-test" os="test">
<title>README Feedback Procedure</title>
<para>(This section will disappear when the final &DISTRO; release is
@@ -277,12 +277,15 @@
%%%</remark>
<para>These links point to Bugzilla entries for the information preceding
- the link. This makes it easier for people to contribute — just
+ the link. This makes it easier for people to contribute — just
point your browser at the link, add your comments to the bug, and commit
your changes.</para>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
+-->
+<!--
<ackno>(
<emphasis arch="x86">x86</emphasis>
<emphasis arch="x86_64">x86_64</emphasis>
)</ackno>
+-->
</article>
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