install-guide fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml, 1.6, 1.7 fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.19, 1.20

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Nov 20 22:06:49 UTC 2005


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv30582

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml 
	fedora-install-guide-en.xml 
Log Message:
Time to change some entities.  FCLOCALVER incremented since it looks
like we're gearing up for FC5.  Changed up a couple of others to beat
a path to the new standards.




Index: fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml	20 Nov 2005 19:48:10 -0000	1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-beginninginstallation-en.xml	20 Nov 2005 22:06:30 -0000	1.7
@@ -108,11 +108,13 @@
 
     <para>
       If you hit <keycap>Enter</keycap>, the installation runs in
-      default mode.  In the default mode, the installation runs from CD
-      or DVD discs, and uses a graphical interface if possible. To
-      change the installation mode, at the <prompt>boot:</prompt>
-      prompt, type <userinput>linux</userinput> followed by one or more
-      of the following options:
+      default mode.  In the default mode, the installation uses a
+      graphical interface if possible.  If the installation program runs
+      from the &FC; installation CD or DVD media, in default mode it
+      uses these media as the installation source.  To change the
+      installation mode, at the <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt, type
+      <userinput>linux</userinput> followed by one or more of the
+      following options:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -131,7 +133,9 @@
 	<para>
 	  To retry installation because the installation aborted at an
 	  early stage, add the directive
-	  <userinput>acpi=off</userinput>.
+	  <userinput>acpi=off</userinput>.  ACPI is responsible for many
+	  kinds of installation errors.  If you turn ACPI off, you may
+	  be able to overcome some of these errors.
 	</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>


Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml	14 Jun 2005 22:36:46 -0000	1.19
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml	20 Nov 2005 22:06:30 -0000	1.20
@@ -4,17 +4,18 @@
 <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY VERSION "1.0"> <!-- version for this document -->
-
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "fedora-install-guide-en-&VERSION; (2005-06-10-T16:20-0700)"> <!-- change date here and VERSION entity everytime a change is made-->
+<!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
+<!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.01rc">
+<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2005-11-20">
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
 
 <!ENTITY LEGALNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/legalnotice-en.xml">
 
 <!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
 <!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
-<!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "4">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0">
-<!ENTITY DRAFTNOTICE SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/draftnotice-en.xml">
+<!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "5">
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.0"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
 
 
 <!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">




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