jargon-buster jargon-buster-en.xml,1.9,1.10

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/jargon-buster
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4026/jargon-buster

Modified Files:
	jargon-buster-en.xml 
Log Message:
quick style edit, bump to 1.9.3


Index: jargon-buster-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/jargon-buster/jargon-buster-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- jargon-buster-en.xml	7 Sep 2005 12:55:34 -0000	1.9
+++ jargon-buster-en.xml	7 Sep 2005 22:20:46 -0000	1.10
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN SYSTEM "../docs-common/common/fedora-entities-en.ent">
 %FEDORA-ENTITIES-EN;
 
-<!ENTITY BOOKID "jargon-buster-1.9.2 (2005-08-26)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
+<!ENTITY BOOKID "jargon-buster-1.9.3 (2005-09-07)"> <!-- change version of manual and date here -->
 
 ]>
 
@@ -170,6 +170,16 @@
 	  </para>
 	</revdescription>
       </revision>
+      <revision>
+	<revnumber>1.9.3</revnumber>
+	<date>7 Sep 2005</date>
+	<authorinitials>PaulWFrields</authorinitials>
+	<revdescription>
+	  <para>
+	    Style editing.
+	  </para>
+	</revdescription>
+      </revision>
     </revhistory>
     
   </articleinfo>
@@ -870,17 +880,16 @@
             To use a disk device such as a CD, USB drive, or floppy
             diskette, you must first <command>mount</command> it.  &FED;
             uses a single unified file system for all attached devices.
-            This is in direct contrast to Windows systems, which use a
-            "drive letter" for each disk device, such as
-            <systemitem>A:</systemitem> or <systemitem>C:</systemitem>.
-            When you <command>mount</command> a disk device, its file
-            system becomes part of the unified file system on &FED;.
-            The device is mounted on a <firstterm>mount
-            point</firstterm>, which is a directory that points to that
-            device, such as <filename>/media/floppy</filename>.  You
-            must also unmount the file system before you eject or remove
-            the disk, to insure all file information is safely written
-            to the device.
+            Windows systems, on the other hand, use a "drive letter" for
+            each disk device, such as <systemitem>A:</systemitem> or
+            <systemitem>C:</systemitem>.  When you
+            <command>mount</command> a disk device, its file system
+            becomes part of the unified file system on &FED;.  The
+            device is mounted on a <firstterm>mount point</firstterm>,
+            which is a directory that points to that device, such as
+            <filename>/media/floppy</filename>.  You must also unmount
+            the file system before you eject or remove the disk, to
+            insure all file information is safely written to the device.
           </para>
 	  <para>
 	    Since these functions are often handled through