release-notes/devel/en_US Feedback.xml,1.6,1.7
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
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Tue Aug 29 01:02:01 UTC 2006
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Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv7391
Modified Files:
Feedback.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Feedback.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- Feedback.xml 13 Aug 2006 16:59:58 -0000 1.6
+++ Feedback.xml 29 Aug 2006 01:01:57 -0000 1.7
@@ -3,65 +3,68 @@
<!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
<section id="sn-Feedback">
- <title>Providing Feedback for Release Notes</title>
+ <title>Feedback</title>
<para>
+ Thank you for taking the time to provide your comments, suggestions,
+ and bug reports to the &FED; community. By doing so, you help
+ improve the state of &FED;, Linux, and free software worldwide.
+ </para>
+
+ <section>
+ <title>Providing Feedback on &FED; Software</title>
+
+ <para>
+ To provide feedback on &FED; software or other system elements,
+ please refer to <ulink
+ url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests"/>. A
+ list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this release
+ is available from <ulink
+ url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/FC6Common"/>.
+ </para>
+ </section>
+
+ <section>
+ <title>Providing Feedback on Release Notes</title>
+
<important>
<title>Feedback for Release Notes Only</title>
<para>
This section concerns feedback on the release notes themselves.
- To provide feedback on Fedora software or other system elements,
- please refer to <ulink
- url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests"/>.
- A list of commonly reported bugs and known issues for this
- release is available from <ulink
- url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/FC6Common"/>.
</para>
</important>
- </para>
-
- <para>
- Thanks for your interest in giving feedback for these release notes.
- If you feel these release notes could be improved in any way, you
- can provide your feedback directly to the beat writers. Here are
- several ways to do so, in order of preference:
- </para>
-
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
- <para>
- Edit content directly at <ulink
- url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats'/>
- </para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>
- Fill out a bug request using this template: <ulink
- url='http://tinyurl.com/nej3u'/>. <emphasis
- role='strong'>This link is ONLY for feedback on the release
- notes themselves.</emphasis> (Refer to the admonition above
- for details.)
- </para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
- <para>
- Email <ulink
- url='mailto:relnotes at fedoraproject.org'>relnotes at fedoraproject.org</ulink>.
- </para>
- </listitem>
- </itemizedlist>
- <para>
- A release note beat is an area of the release notes that one or more
- content contributors oversee. For more information about beats,
- refer to <ulink
- url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DocsProject/ReleaseNotes/Beats'/>.
- </para>
+ <para>
+ If you feel these release notes could be improved in any way, you
+ can provide your feedback directly to the beat writers. Here are
+ several ways to do so, in order of preference:
+ </para>
+
+ <itemizedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ If you have a &FED; account, Edit content directly at <ulink
+ url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats'/>
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ Fill out a bug request using this template: <ulink
+ url='http://tinyurl.com/nej3u'/>. <emphasis
+ role='strong'>This link is ONLY for feedback on the release
+ notes themselves.</emphasis> Refer to the admonition above
+ for details.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>
+ Email <ulink
+ url='mailto:relnotes at fedoraproject.org'>relnotes at fedoraproject.org</ulink>.
+ </para>
+ </listitem>
+ </itemizedlist>
- <para>
- Thank you for your feedback!
- </para>
</section>
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