install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,1.1,1.2

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 18:21:40 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv10992

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml 
Log Message:
Style editing - a slight element reorg flows better as a readable
guide, but the change is mostly trivial



Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	6 Feb 2006 21:35:02 -0000	1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps-en.xml	10 Feb 2006 18:21:32 -0000	1.2
@@ -152,12 +152,8 @@
     </para>
 
     <para>
-      The Website for the official forums is:
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      <ulink
-	  url="http://forums.fedoraforum.org/"/>
+      The Website for the official forums is <ulink
+	url="http://forums.fedoraforum.org/"/>.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -165,65 +161,72 @@
       &FED;:
     </para>
 
-    <variablelist>
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-	    The FAQ on the &FP; website
-	  </term>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <ulink
-	  url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ/"/>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-	   The documents available from the &FDP; website 
-	  </term>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <ulink
-	  url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/"/>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-         The Linux Documentation Project (LDP)	   
-	  </term>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <ulink
-	  url="http://www.tldp.org/"/>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-
-      <varlistentry>
-        <term>
-         The &RHEL; documentation, much of which also applies to &FED;
-	  </term>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-            <ulink
-	url="http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/"/>
-          </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </varlistentry>
-    </variablelist>
+    <itemizedlist>
+      <listitem>
+	<variablelist>
+	  <varlistentry>
+	    <term>
+	      The FAQ on the &FP; website
+	    </term>
+	    <listitem>
+	      <para>
+		<ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ/"/>
+	      </para>
+	    </listitem>
+	  </varlistentry>
+	</variablelist>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<variablelist>
+	  <varlistentry>
+	    <term>
+	      The documents available from the &FDP; website 
+	    </term>
+	    <listitem>
+	      <para>
+		<ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/"/>
+	      </para>
+	    </listitem>
+	  </varlistentry>
+	</variablelist>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<variablelist>
+	  <varlistentry>
+	    <term>
+	      The Linux Documentation Project (LDP)	   
+	    </term>
+	    <listitem>
+	      <para>
+		<ulink url="http://www.tldp.org/"/>
+	      </para>
+	    </listitem>
+	  </varlistentry>
+	</variablelist>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<variablelist>
+	  <varlistentry>
+	    <term>
+	      The &RHEL; documentation, much of which also applies to
+	      &FED;
+	    </term>
+	    <listitem>
+	      <para>
+		<ulink
+		  url="http://www.redhat.com/docs/manuals/enterprise/"/>
+	      </para>
+	    </listitem>
+	  </varlistentry>
+	</variablelist>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>
       Many other organizations and individuals also provide tutorials
       and HOWTOs for &FED; on their Websites. You can locate information
-      on any topic by using Google:
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      <ulink
-	  url="http://www.google.com/linux/"/>
+      on any topic by using Google's Linux search site, located at
+      <ulink url="http://www.google.com/linux/"/>.
     </para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-community">




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