install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-en.xml, 1.6, 1.7 fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6 rpm-info-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Fri Feb 10 19:38:56 UTC 2006
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv14189/en
Modified Files:
fedora-install-guide-en.xml
fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml rpm-info-en.xml
Log Message:
- Updated for changes to First Boot.
Index: fedora-install-guide-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- fedora-install-guide-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 19:28:15 -0000 1.6
+++ fedora-install-guide-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 19:38:49 -0000 1.7
@@ -6,14 +6,14 @@
<!ENTITY DOCNAME "fedora-install-guide">
<!ENTITY DOCLANG "en">
-<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.20">
+<!ENTITY DOCVERSION "1.21">
<!ENTITY DOCDATE "2006-02-10">
<!ENTITY DOCID "&DOCNAME;-&DOCLANG;-&DOCVERSION; (&DOCDATE;)">
<!-- Bugzilla bug number for the draft notice -->
<!ENTITY BUG-NUM "129911">
<!ENTITY FCLOCALVER "5">
-<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.20"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
+<!ENTITY DOCLOCALVER "1.21"> <!-- what's this for again? -->
<!ENTITY FDP-INFO SYSTEM "fdp-info-en.xml" >
<!ENTITY INTRODUCTION SYSTEM "fedora-install-guide-intro-en.xml">
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 17:18:49 -0000 1.3
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 19:38:49 -0000 1.4
@@ -95,17 +95,11 @@
<para>
By default the firewall is enabled, with a simple set of rules
that allow connections to be made from your system to others, but
- permit only
- <indexterm>
- <primary>SSH (Secure SHell)</primary>
- <secondary>firewall configuration</secondary>
- </indexterm>
- SSH (Secure SHell) connections from other systems. You may make
+ block incoming connections from other systems. You may make
changes on this screen to allow access to specific network
services on your &FED; system.
</para>
-
- <figure id="fig-fboot-firewall">
+ <figure id="fig-fboot-firewall">
<title>Firewall Screen</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -121,23 +115,11 @@
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
-
<para>
To enable access to the services listed on this screen, click the
check box next to the service name.
</para>
- <important>
- <title>SSH Remote Access</title>
-
- <para>
- All &FED; systems automatically run the SSH remote access
- service. The default firewall configuration allows connections
- to this service, to ensure that administrators have immediate
- remote access to new systems.
- </para>
- </important>
-
<para>
To enable access to other services, enter the required ports in
the <guilabel>Other ports:</guilabel> field. For each port, you
@@ -169,8 +151,7 @@
</section>
<section id="sn-firstboot-selinux">
<title>&SEL;</title>
-
- <figure id="fig-fboot-selinux">
+ <figure id="fig-fboot-selinux">
<title>&SEL; Screen</title>
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
@@ -186,7 +167,6 @@
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
-
<para>
The
<indexterm>
@@ -269,7 +249,8 @@
</para>
</tip>
<para>
- For more information about &SEL;, refer to the &SEL; FAQ at <ulink
+ For more information about &SEL;, refer to the &SEL; FAQ at
+ <ulink
url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq/"/>.
</para>
</section>
@@ -494,67 +475,7 @@
<para>
After you configure login services, select
- <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to proceed.
- </para>
- </section>
- <section id="sn-firstboot-soundcard">
- <title>Sound Card</title>
-
- <para>
- The <application>Setup Agent</application> automatically attempts
- to identify the sound card in your computer.
- </para>
- <figure id="fig-fboot-sound">
- <title>Sound Card Screen</title>
- <mediaobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-sound.eps" format="EPS"/>
- </imageobject>
- <imageobject>
- <imagedata align="center" fileref="./figs/fboot-sound.png" format="PNG"/>
- </imageobject>
- <textobject>
- <phrase>
- Sound card screen.
- </phrase>
- </textobject>
- </mediaobject>
- </figure>
- <para>
- Click <guibutton>Play Test Sound</guibutton> to check the sound
- card configuration. If the configuration is correct, &FED; plays a
- sound sequence. If your sound card is identified, but you do not
- hear the sound, check your speakers and try again. In some cases,
- you may need to alter the additional settings to obtain the best
- sound quality.
- </para>
-<!-- SE: This may not be quite correct: somebody with a stronger grasp of Linux audio could do better. -->
- <para>
- Sound cards may act as multiple audio devices. To change the
- <guilabel>Default PCM device</guilabel>, select a new option from
- the drop-down list. By default, audio applications connect to a
- software mixer that manages the PCM devices. To enable
- applications to bypass the software mixer, select the option to
- <guilabel>Use only the hardware device</guilabel>.
- </para>
-
- <para>
- You may manually configure a &FC; system to use unsupported sound
- cards after the installation process is complete. Manual sound
- hardware configuration is beyond the scope of this document.
- </para>
- <tip>
- <title>Changing the Sound Card</title>
- <para>
- &FED; automatically attempts to detect a new sound card if
- you add one to your system. If you need to launch the detection
- process manually, choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
- <guisubmenu>Administration</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Soundcard
- Detection</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
- </para>
- </tip>
- <para>
- Click <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the final screen.
+ <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to proceed to the final screen.
</para>
<figure id="fig-fboot-finish">
<title>Finish Setup Screen</title>
Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 16:48:45 -0000 1.5
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 19:38:49 -0000 1.6
@@ -119,13 +119,8 @@
accept connections from other systems. Although Fedora connects to
NFS services on other systems, the NFS sharing component is
disabled by default. You may configure your Fedora system after
- installation to offer email, logging, NFS, or print services.
- </para>
-
- <para>
- The SSH service is enabled by default. This enables administrators
- to remotely access systems immediately after the installation
- process completes.
+ installation to offer email, logging, NFS, or print services. The
+ SSH service is enabled by default.
</para>
</section>
<section id="sn-package-selection">
@@ -174,7 +169,7 @@
base and mandatory packages for that group. To change which
optional packages within a selected group will be installed,
select the <guibutton>Optional Packages</guibutton> button under
- the description of the group. Then use the check box next to an
+ the description of the group. Then use the check box next to an
individual package name to change its selection.
</para>
<figure id="fig-package-selection-details">
@@ -217,11 +212,11 @@
<warning>
<title>Language Selection</title>
- <!-- We should find out if this is still true. - PWF 2006-02-10 -->
+<!-- We should find out if this is still true. - PWF 2006-02-10 -->
<para>
Select <emphasis>every</emphasis> language that you need for
- your system. Adding support for a language after installation is
- difficult, and not recommended.
+ your system. Adding support for a language after installation is
+ difficult, and not recommended.
</para>
</warning>
Index: rpm-info-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/rpm-info-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.5
retrieving revision 1.6
diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- rpm-info-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 14:28:28 -0000 1.5
+++ rpm-info-en.xml 10 Feb 2006 19:38:49 -0000 1.6
@@ -28,10 +28,15 @@
</translation>
</titles>
<changelog order="newest-first">
+ <revision date="2006-02-10" number="1.21" role="doc">
+ <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
+<!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
+ <details>Updated First Boot.</details>
+ </revision>
<revision date="2006-02-10" number="1.20" role="doc">
<author worker="StuartEllis"/>
<!--PLEASE SET "lang" ATTRIBUTE IN DETAILS WHERE NEEDED-->
- <details>Screenshot changes.</details>
+ <details lang="en">Screenshot changes.</details>
</revision>
<revision date="2006-02-10" number="1.19" role="doc">
<author worker="StuartEllis"/>
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