release-notes/en Entertainment-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Multimedia-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Networking-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 Samba-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 SystemDaemons-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Feb 13 03:42:54 UTC 2006 

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv9995/en

Modified Files:
	Entertainment-en.xml Multimedia-en.xml Networking-en.xml 
	Samba-en.xml SystemDaemons-en.xml 
Log Message:
More quick and dirty editing


Index: Entertainment-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Entertainment-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Entertainment-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.4
+++ Entertainment-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.5
@@ -7,11 +7,7 @@
   <section id="sn-Entertainment">
     <title>Games and Entertainment</title>
     <para>Fedora Core and Fedora Extras provide a selection of games that cover a variety of genres.  By default, Fedora Core includes a small package of games for GNOME (called <command>gnome-games</command>).  For a list of other games that are available for installation through <command>yum</command>, open a terminal and enter the following command: </para>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
         <screen>yum groupinfo "Games and Entertainment"</screen>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
     <para>For help using <command>yum</command> to install the assorted game packages, refer to the guide available at: </para>
     <para>
       <ulink url='http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/'>http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/yum/</ulink>


Index: Multimedia-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Multimedia-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Multimedia-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.4
+++ Multimedia-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.5
@@ -10,23 +10,17 @@
     <section>
       <title>Multimedia Players</title>
       <para>By default, Fedora Core installs with <emphasis role='strong'>Rhythm Box</emphasis>, <emphasis role='strong'>Totem</emphasis>, and <emphasis role='strong'>Helix Player</emphasis> for media playback.  In addition, many other programs are available in the Fedora Core and Fedora Extras repositories, including the popular <emphasis role='strong'>XMMS</emphasis> package.  Both GNOME and KDE also have specific sets of programs that can be used with a variety of formats.  Other popular programs, such as Adobe/Macromedia's <emphasis role='strong'>Flash Player</emphasis>, <emphasis role='strong'>Real Player</emphasis>, <emphasis role='strong'>VLC</emphasis>, <emphasis role='strong'>MPlayer</emphasis>, and <emphasis role='strong'>Xine</emphasis>, can also be installed, but are excluded from the Fedora repositories since they are not compatible with Fedora's licensing or are usually distributed with support for restricted formats.  For more on this, refer to: the <ulink ur!
 l='/http'>//fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Multimedia#Excluded_Multimedia_Software:Excluded Multimedia Software</ulink> section. </para>
-      <para>Fedora Core is also equipped to take full advantage of the Advanced Linux Sound Architecture (ALSA) sound system.  This means that many programs can play sound simultaneously, which was once difficult on Linux systems.  When all multimedia software is configured to use ALSA for sound support, the old limitation disappears.  For more information about ALSA, visit the project website: </para>
-      <para>
-        <ulink url='http://www.alsa-project.org/'>http://www.alsa-project.org/</ulink>
+      <para>Fedora Core is also equipped to take full advantage of the Advanced Linux Sound Architecture (ALSA) sound system.  This means that many programs can play sound simultaneously, which was once difficult on Linux systems.  When all multimedia software is configured to use ALSA for sound support, the old limitation disappears.  For more information about ALSA, visit the project website at <ulink url='http://www.alsa-project.org/'>http://www.alsa-project.org/</ulink>.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>Ogg and Xiph.Org Foundation Formats</title>
-      <para>Fedora includes complete support for the Ogg media container format, the Vorbis audio, Theora video, Speex audio, and FLAC lossless audio formats.  More information on these formats and how to use them can be found at the Xiph.Org Foundation's web site: </para>
-      <para>
-        <ulink url='http://www.xiph.org/'>http://www.xiph.org/</ulink>
+      <para>Fedora includes complete support for the Ogg media container format, the Vorbis audio, Theora video, Speex audio, and FLAC lossless audio formats.  More information on these formats and how to use them can be found at the Xiph.Org Foundation's web site at <ulink url='http://www.xiph.org/'>http://www.xiph.org/</ulink>.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
       <title>MP3 & DVD Support</title>
-      <para>Fedora Core and Fedora Extras cannot include support for MP3 or DVD playback or recording, because the MP3 and MPEG (DVD) formats are patented, and the patent owners have not provided the necessary licenses.  For more information, refer to: </para>
-      <para>
-        <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Multimedia#Excluded_Multimedia_Software'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Multimedia#Excluded_Multimedia_Software</ulink>
+      <para>Fedora Core and Fedora Extras cannot include support for MP3 or DVD playback or recording, because the MP3 and MPEG (DVD) formats are patented, and the patent owners have not provided the necessary licenses.  For more information, refer to <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Multimedia#Excluded_Multimedia_Software'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Multimedia#Excluded_Multimedia_Software</ulink>.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>
@@ -34,9 +28,7 @@
       <anchor id='Excluded_Multimedia_Software'/>
       <para>
       </para>
-      <para>Several programs are excluded from Fedora Core and Fedora Extras due to patent or license restrictions.  These include programs which provide MP3 and DVD support, Flash Player, and Real Player.  For more on this subject, please see: </para>
-      <para>
-        <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems</ulink>
+      <para>Several programs are excluded from Fedora Core and Fedora Extras due to patent or license restrictions.  These include programs which provide MP3 and DVD support, Flash Player, and Real Player.  For more on this subject, please see <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/ForbiddenItems</ulink>.
       </para>
     </section>
     <section>


Index: Networking-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Networking-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- Networking-en.xml	12 Feb 2006 16:13:16 -0000	1.3
+++ Networking-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.4
@@ -40,20 +40,11 @@
           </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
         <para>All existing congestion control modules have been converted to this new infrastructure and the BIC congestion control has received enhancements from BICTCP 1.1 to handle low latency links. </para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
-            <para>
-              <inlinemediaobject>
-                <imageobject>
-                  <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-                </imageobject>
-                <textobject>
-                  <phrase><!></phrase>
-                </textobject>
-              </inlinemediaobject> Affecting the Congestion Control Algorithm </para>
+	<note>
+            <title>
+Affecting the Congestion Control Algorithm </title>
             <para>An interesting addition for developers is that the congestion control algorithm is socket specific and can be changed via the socket option <command>TCP_CONGESTION</command>.  </para>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
+	</note>
       </section>
       <section>
         <title>Queue Avoidance upon Carrier Loss</title>
@@ -91,17 +82,18 @@
     <section>
       <title>Userspace Tools</title>
       <para>The IPv4 address deletion algorithm did not take the prefix length into account up to kernel version 2.6.12. Since this has changed, the iproute2 tool now issues a warning if no prefix length is provided to warn about possible unintended deletions: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <screen>ip addr list dev eth0 4: eth0: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP> mtu 1500 qdisc pfifo_fast qlen 1000inet 10.0.0.3/24 scope global eth0su -c 'ip addr del 10.0.0.3 dev eth0'Warning: Executing wildcard deletion to stay compatible with oldscripts. Explicitly specify the prefix length (10.0.0.3/32) toavoid this warning. This special behaviour is likely to disappearin further releases, fix your scripts!</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+<screen>
+<userinput>ip addr list dev eth0</userinput>
+<computeroutput>4: eth0: <BROADCAST,MULTICAST,UP> mtu 1500 qdisc pfifo_fast qlen 1000
+inet 10.0.0.3/24 scope global eth0</computeroutput>
+<userinput>su -c 'ip addr del 10.0.0.3 dev eth0'</userinput>
+<computeroutput>Warning: Executing wildcard deletion to stay compatible with old
+scripts. Explicitly specify the prefix length (10.0.0.3/32) to
+avoid this warning. This special behaviour is likely to disappear
+in further releases, fix your scripts!</computeroutput>
+</screen>
       <para>The correct method of deleting the address and thus avoiding the warning is: </para>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <screen>su -c 'ip addr del 10.0.0.3/24 dev eth0'</screen>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+<screen>su -c 'ip addr del 10.0.0.3/24 dev eth0'</screen>
       <para>Previously, it has not been possible to tell if an interface is down administratively or because no carrier can be found (cable unplugged). The flag <command>NO-CARRIER</command> has been introduced that shows up as a link flag if the link is administratively up but no carrier can be found. </para>
       <para>The ip command now supports a batch mode via the argument <command>-batch</command> that works similar to the tc command to speed up batches of tasks.  </para>
     </section>


Index: Samba-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Samba-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Samba-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.4
+++ Samba-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,12 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Samba">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Samba</title>
-    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
-    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para>
-    <para>
-    </para>
-  </section>
+    <title>Samba</title>
   <section>
     <title>Samba (Windows Compatibility)</title>
     <para>This section contains information related to Samba, the suite of software that enables Linux to interact with Microsoft Windows systems. </para>
@@ -23,11 +18,8 @@
           </emphasis> replacing <emphasis>localhost</emphasis> with the name of the computer on which <emphasis>Samba</emphasis> is installed. </para>
         <para>For more information about SWAT navigate here, <ulink url='http://us4.samba.org/samba/docs/man/Samba-HOWTO-Collection/SWAT.html'>http://us4.samba.org/samba/docs/man/Samba-HOWTO-Collection/SWAT.html</ulink>
         </para>
-        <para>More Information such as a detailed How-To Install, Configure etc will follow soon. </para>
-        <para>
-          <ulink url='/CategoryDocumentation'>CategoryDocumentation</ulink>
-        </para>
       </section>
     </section>
   </section>
+  </section>
 </article>


Index: SystemDaemons-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/SystemDaemons-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- SystemDaemons-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:28:20 -0000	1.3
+++ SystemDaemons-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.4
@@ -5,13 +5,17 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-SystemDaemons">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/SystemDaemons</title>
-    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
-    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para>
-    <para>
+    <title>System Daemons</title>
+<!--    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
+    <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions -->
+<!--    about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can -->
+<!--    be taken to a bugzilla report for discussion to resolution, or to -->
+<!--    fedora-docs-list for wider discussions. </para> -->
+    <para><emphasis>No changes to report.</emphasis>
     </para>
   </section>
   <section>
     <title>System Services</title>
+    <para><emphasis>No changes to report.</emphasis></para>
   </section>
 </article>

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