release-notes/en ArchSpecific-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Colophon-en.xml, 1.5, 1.6 FileSystems-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Installer-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Networking-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 OverView-en.xml, 1.3, 1.4 Printing-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Welcome-en.xml, 1.4, 1.5

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Mon Feb 13 15:41:53 UTC 2006


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv8719/en

Modified Files:
	ArchSpecific-en.xml Colophon-en.xml FileSystems-en.xml 
	Installer-en.xml Networking-en.xml OverView-en.xml 
	Printing-en.xml Welcome-en.xml 
Log Message:
Final cleanup, hopefully


Index: ArchSpecific-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/ArchSpecific-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- ArchSpecific-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 01:56:43 -0000	1.4
+++ ArchSpecific-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-ArchSpecific">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/ArchSpecific</title>
+    <title>Archictecture Specific</title>
     <para>This section provides notes that are specific to the supported hardware architectures of Fedora Core. </para>
     <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
       href="ArchSpecificPPC-en.xml" xpointer="element(sn-ArchSpecificPPC)" />


Index: Colophon-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Colophon-en.xml,v
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diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
--- Colophon-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 02:58:02 -0000	1.5
+++ Colophon-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.6
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Colophon">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Colophon</title>
+    <title>Colophon</title>
     <note>
       <title>Draft</title>
       <para>


Index: FileSystems-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/FileSystems-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- FileSystems-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
+++ FileSystems-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-FileSystems">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/FileSystems</title>
+    <title>File Systems</title>
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     <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions -->
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Index: Installer-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Installer-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Installer-en.xml	12 Feb 2006 16:13:16 -0000	1.4
+++ Installer-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -7,93 +7,27 @@
   <section id="sn-Installer">
     <title>Installation-Related Notes</title>
     <para>This section outlines those issues that are related to Anaconda (the Fedora Core installation program) and installing Fedora Core  in general. </para>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>
-        <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-          
-          <row>
-            <entry>
-              <para>
-                <inlinemediaobject>
-                  <imageobject>
-                    <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-                  </imageobject>
-                  <textobject>
-                    <phrase><!></phrase>
-                  </textobject>
-                </inlinemediaobject>
-                <emphasis role='strong'>Note</emphasis>
-              </para>
-            </entry>
-          </row>
-          <row>
-            <entry>
               <para> If you intend to download the Fedora Core 5 Test 2 DVD ISO image, keep in mind that not all file downloading tools can accommodate files larger than 2GB in size. For example, wget before version 1.9.1-16 in Fedora will exit with a File size limit exceeded error.                       </para>
-            </entry>
-          </row>
-          <row>
-            <entry>
               <para> Wget 1.9.1-16 and above, curl and ncftpget file downloading tools do not have this limitation, and can successfully download files larger than 2GB.                     </para>
-            </entry>
-          </row>
-          <row>
-            <entry>
               <para>Bittorrent is another method for downloading large files. For information about obtaining and using the torrent file refer to this website:        </para>
-            </entry>
-          </row>
-          <row>
-            <entry>
               <para>
                 <ulink url='http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/'>http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/</ulink>
               </para>
-            </entry>
-          </row>
-        </tbody></tgroup></table>
-      </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-  </section>
   <section>
     <title>Installer Notes</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>  The Fedora Core installation program has the ability to test the integrity of the installation media. It works with the CD, DVD, hard drive ISO, and NFS ISO installation methods. Fedora Project recommends that you test all installation media before starting the installation process, and before reporting any installation-related bugs (many of the bugs reported are actually due to improperly-burned CDs). To use this test, type linux mediacheck at the boot: prompt. </para>
         <para>The mediacheck function is highly sensitive, and may report some usable discs as faulty. This result is often caused by disc writing software that does not include padding when creating discs from ISO files. For best results with the mediacheck, boot with the option: </para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
             <screen>linux ide=nodma </screen>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
         <para>Use the sha1sum utility to verify discs before carrying out an installation. This test accurately identifies discs that are not valid or identical to the ISO image files. </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para> Memory testing may be performed prior to installing Fedora Core by entering memtest86 at the boot: prompt. This causes the Memtest86 standalone memory testing software to run. Memtest86 memory testing continues until the Esc key is pressed. </para>
-        <itemizedlist>
-          <listitem>
-            <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-              
-              <row>
-                <entry>
-                  <para>
-                    <inlinemediaobject>
-                      <imageobject>
-                        <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-                      </imageobject>
-                      <textobject>
-                        <phrase><!></phrase>
-                      </textobject>
-                    </inlinemediaobject>
-                    <emphasis role='strong'>Note</emphasis>
-                  </para>
-                </entry>
-              </row>
-              <row>
-                <entry>
+	<note>
+	  <title>Boot From Installation CD 1</title>
                   <para> You must boot from CD-ROM 1 (or a rescue CD-ROM) in order to use this feature.</para>
-                </entry>
-              </row>
-            </tbody></tgroup></table>
-          </listitem>
-        </itemizedlist>
+	</note>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para> Fedora Core  supports graphical FTP and HTTP installations. However, due to the necessity of containing the installer image in RAM, only systems with more than 128MB of RAM (or systems booted from CD-ROM 1, which contains the installer image) can use the graphical installer. Systems with 128MB or less will continue to use the text-based installer. </para>
@@ -128,11 +62,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para> Full support of dmraid (disabled by default). To enable that feature, add this option to the boot command line: </para>
-          <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem>
               <screen>dmraid </screen>
-            </listitem>
-          </itemizedlist>
           <para>For more information, check the <ulink url='/DmraidStatus'>DmraidStatus</ulink> page. </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
@@ -142,45 +72,19 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para> Certain hardware configurations (particularly those with LCD displays) may experience problems while starting the Fedora Core installation program. In these instances, restart the installation, and add the "nofb" option to the boot command line. </para>
-          <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem>
-              <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-                
-                <row>
-                  <entry>
-                    <para>
-                      <inlinemediaobject>
-                        <imageobject>
-                          <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-                        </imageobject>
-                        <textobject>
-                          <phrase><!></phrase>
-                        </textobject>
-                      </inlinemediaobject>
-                      <emphasis role='strong'>Note</emphasis>
-                    </para>
-                  </entry>
-                </row>
-                <row>
-                  <entry>
+	  <note>
+	    <title>CJK Language Support</title>
                     <para> Chinese, Japanese, and Korean graphical installations started using the "nofb" option will start in English, and then switch to the appropriate language once the graphical phase of the installation process begins. </para>
-                  </entry>
-                </row>
-              </tbody></tgroup></table>
-            </listitem>
-          </itemizedlist>
+	  </note>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para> Some Sony VAIO notebook systems may experience problems installing Fedora Core from CD-ROM. If this happens, restart the installation process and add the following option to the boot command line: </para>
-          <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem>
               <screen>pci=off ide1=0x180,0x386 </screen>
-            </listitem>
-          </itemizedlist>
           <para>This option allows the installation to proceed normally; any devices not detected due to the use of this option are configured the first time Fedora Core is booted. </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </section>
+    </section>
     <section>
       <title>Upgrading Related Issues</title>
       <para>Refer to <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DistributionUpgrades'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/DistributionUpgrades</ulink> page for detailedrecommended procedures for upgradation of Fedora. </para>
@@ -188,41 +92,14 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para> Before upgrading (or installing), back up the system completely.  In particular, preserve <emphasis>/etc</emphasis>, <emphasis>/home</emphasis>, and possibly <emphasis>/opt</emphasis> and <emphasis>/usr/local</emphasis> if customized packages are installed there.  Using a multi-boot approach with a "clone" of the old installation on alternate partition[s] as a fall-back might be considered.  Creating alternate boot media, such as GRUB floppy would be advisable.   </para>
-          <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem>
-              <table><title>FIXME</title><tgroup cols="1"><tbody>
-                
-                <row>
-                  <entry>
-                    <para>
-                      <inlinemediaobject>
-                        <imageobject>
-                          <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-                        </imageobject>
-                        <textobject>
-                          <phrase><!></phrase>
-                        </textobject>
-                      </inlinemediaobject>
-                      <emphasis role='strong'>Note</emphasis>
-                    </para>
-                  </entry>
-                </row>
-                <row>
-                  <entry>
+	  <note>
+	    <title>Make Backups!</title>
                     <para> Backups of configurations in <emphasis>/etc</emphasis> are also very useful in reconstructing system settings after a fresh install.</para>
-                  </entry>
-                </row>
-              </tbody></tgroup></table>
-            </listitem>
-          </itemizedlist>
+	  </note>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para> After completing the upgrade, run the command: </para>
-          <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem>
               <screen>rpm -qa --last > RPMS_by_Install_Time.txt </screen>
-            </listitem>
-          </itemizedlist>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para> Inspect the end of the output for packages that pre-date the upgrade and remove/upgrade those from 3rd party repos, or otherwise deal with them as necessary. </para>


Index: Networking-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Networking-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Networking-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 03:42:46 -0000	1.4
+++ Networking-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Networking">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Networking</title>
+    <title>Networking</title>
     <section>
       <title>Major Kernel Changes 2.6.11 - 2.6.14</title>
       <section>


Index: OverView-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/OverView-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- OverView-en.xml	12 Feb 2006 16:13:16 -0000	1.3
+++ OverView-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.4
@@ -9,15 +9,11 @@
     <para>Welcome to Fedora. In this new exciting new release, we present you a sneak preview of Fedora Core 5 filled with pictures and videos available at <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Tours/FedoraCore5'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Tours/FedoraCore5</ulink>.  </para>
     <section>
       <title>What Has Changed Since Fedora Core 4</title>
+      <note>
+	<title>Your Participation Is Requested</title>
       <para>
-        <inlinemediaobject>
-          <imageobject>
-            <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/idea.png' depth='15'/>
-          </imageobject>
-          <textobject>
-            <phrase>(!)</phrase>
-          </textobject>
-        </inlinemediaobject> We request active participation from the community to test the following major changes with special care and provide feedback to the developers for a robust and cutting edge release of Fedora Core 5. You can provide feedback and discuss changes in the fedora-test (<ulink url='http://redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-test-list/'>http://redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-test-list/</ulink>) mailing list. Thank you for your interest and participation in the development of Fedora.  </para>
+We request active participation from the community to test the following major changes with special care and provide feedback to the developers for a robust and cutting edge release of Fedora Core 5. You can provide feedback and discuss changes in the fedora-test (<ulink url='http://redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-test-list/'>http://redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-test-list/</ulink>) mailing list. Thank you for your interest and participation in the development of Fedora.  </para>
+      </note>
       <section>
         <title>Desktop</title>
         <itemizedlist>


Index: Printing-en.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Printing-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Printing-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 04:10:24 -0000	1.4
+++ Printing-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Printing">
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Printing</title>
+    <title>Printing</title>
 <!--    <para>This page is a stub for content.  If you have a contribution for this release notes beat for the test release of Fedora Core, add it to this page or create a sub-page. </para>
     <para>Beat writers:  this is where you want to fill in with instructions -->
 <!--    about how to post relevant information.  Any questions that come up can -->


Index: Welcome-en.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/en/Welcome-en.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Welcome-en.xml	12 Feb 2006 16:13:16 -0000	1.4
+++ Welcome-en.xml	13 Feb 2006 15:41:45 -0000	1.5
@@ -5,45 +5,21 @@
     <title>Temp</title>
   </articleinfo>
   <section id="sn-Welcome">
-    <title>Welcome</title>
-    <section>
       <title>Welcome to Fedora Core</title>
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>
-          </para>
-          <para>
-            <inlinemediaobject>
-              <imageobject>
-                <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/attention.png' depth='15'/>
-              </imageobject>
-              <textobject>
-                <phrase><!></phrase>
-              </textobject>
-            </inlinemediaobject> This is a test release and is provided for developers and testers to participate and provide feedback. It is not meant for end users. </para>
-          <para>
-            <inlinemediaobject>
-              <imageobject>
-                <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/idea.png' depth='15'/>
-              </imageobject>
-              <textobject>
-                <phrase>(!)</phrase>
-              </textobject>
-            </inlinemediaobject> Subscribe to the fedora-test and fedora-devel mailings lists to keep track of important changes in the current development versions and provide feedback to the developers. Fedora Project requests you to file bug reports and enhancements to provide a improved final release to end users. See the following document for more information. </para>
+    <warning>
+      <title>Fedora Core Test Release</title>
+      <para>             This is a test release and is provided for developers and testers to participate and provide feedback. It is not meant for end users. </para>
+    </warning>
+    <tip>
+      <title>Join the Community for More Information</title>
+      <para>             Subscribe to the fedora-test and fedora-devel mailings lists to keep track of important changes in the current development versions and provide feedback to the developers. Fedora Project requests you to file bug reports and enhancements to provide a improved final release to end users. See the following document for more information. </para>
           <para>
             <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/BugsAndFeatureRequests</ulink>. Thank you for your participation. </para>
-          <para>
-            <inlinemediaobject>
-              <imageobject>
-                <imagedata width='15' fileref='/wiki/ntheme/img/idea.png' depth='15'/>
-              </imageobject>
-              <textobject>
-                <phrase>(!)</phrase>
-              </textobject>
-            </inlinemediaobject> Latest Release Notes on the Web </para>
+    </tip>
+    <important>
+      <title>Latest Release Notes on the Web</title>
           <para>These release notes may be updated. Visit <ulink url='http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/release-notes/'>http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/release-notes/</ulink> to view the latest release notes for Fedora Core . </para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
+    </important>
       <para>Refer to these webpages to find out more information about Fedora: </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
@@ -69,6 +45,5 @@
           <para> About the Fedora Project (<ulink url='http://fedora.redhat.com/About/'>http://fedora.redhat.com/About/</ulink>)  </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-    </section>
   </section>
 </article>




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