release-notes about-fedora.xml,1.2,1.3

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv10617

Modified Files:
	about-fedora.xml 
Log Message:
Light editing and proper crediting



Index: about-fedora.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/about-fedora.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- about-fedora.xml	15 Feb 2006 03:00:53 -0000	1.2
+++ about-fedora.xml	15 Feb 2006 03:47:40 -0000	1.3
@@ -6,16 +6,12 @@
   <title>About Fedora</title>
   <articleinfo>
     <authorgroup>
-      <author>
+      <corpauthor>The Fedora Project community</corpauthor>
+      <editor>
 	<firstname>Paul</firstname>
 	<othername>W.</othername>
 	<surname>Frields</surname>
-      </author>
-      <author>
-	<affiliation>
-	  The Fedora Project community
-	</affiliation>
-      </author>
+      </editor>
     </authorgroup>
     <copyright>
       <year>2006</year>
@@ -78,7 +74,8 @@
   <section id="sn-about-triage">
     <title>Fedora Bug Squad</title>
     <para>
-      Our primary mission is to track down and clear bugs in <ulink
+      The primary mission of the Fedora Bug Squad is to track down and
+      clear bugs in <ulink
 	url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla">Bugzilla</ulink> that
       are related to Fedora, and act as a bridge between users and
       developers. Visit our Web page at <ulink