install-guide/en fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,1.10,1.11

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv18030

Modified Files:
	fedora-install-guide-intro.xml 
Log Message:
Minor style corrections



Index: fedora-install-guide-intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en/fedora-install-guide-intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	3 Mar 2006 02:43:40 -0000	1.10
+++ fedora-install-guide-intro.xml	3 Mar 2006 03:25:42 -0000	1.11
@@ -170,17 +170,17 @@
       <title>Storage</title>
 <!-- SE: There may also be additional considerations when installing on machines backed by a SAN. -->
       <para>
-        A &FED; system requires a minimum of 700Mb storage for a
-        command-line system. Assign at least 3Gb for a desktop system
-        with the default applications. You may install multiple copies
-        of &FED; on the same computer.
+        A &FED; system requires a minimum of 700 MB storage for a
+        command-line system. A desktop system with the default
+        applications requires at least 3 GB of storage. You may install
+        multiple copies of &FED; on the same computer.
       </para>
 
       <para>
         Configure any RAID functions provided by the mainboard of your
         computer, or attached controller cards, before you begin the
-        installation process. &FED; may automatically detect configured
-        RAID devices and use the storage that they provide.
+        installation process. &FED; can automatically detect many RAID
+        devices and use any storage they provide.
       </para>
     </section>
 
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@
       </para>
 
       <para>
-        To determine the complete the directory path for the
+        To determine the complete directory path for the
         installation files, add
         <filename>/&FCLOCALVER;/<replaceable>architecture</replaceable>/os/</filename>
         to the path shown on the webpage.
@@ -395,13 +395,13 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Hard drive, either attached by USB, or internal to the
+          hard drive, either attached by USB, or internal to the
           computer
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Network installation server, using either HTTP, FTP, or NFS
+          network installation server, using either HTTP, FTP, or NFS
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -431,7 +431,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Network interface (via PXE)
+          network interface (via PXE)
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -537,7 +537,6 @@
 <!--
 Local variables:
 mode: xml
-sgml-parent-document:("fedora-install-guide.xml" "book" "preface")
 fill-column: 72
 End:
 -->