install-guide/en_US entities.xml, 1.2, 1.3 fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml, 1.1, 1.2 fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml, 1.1, 1.2
Stuart Ellis (elliss)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Mar 29 21:19:25 UTC 2006
Author: elliss
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24914/en_US
Modified Files:
entities.xml fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml
fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
Log Message:
- Reenbled Sound Card section, as final release includes this screen (note that this requires a current screenshot).
Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- entities.xml 20 Mar 2006 13:34:10 -0000 1.2
+++ entities.xml 29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000 1.3
@@ -14,11 +14,11 @@
</entity>
<entity name="DOCVERSION">
<comment>Document version</comment>
- <text>1.26</text>
+ <text>1.27</text>
</entity>
<entity name="DOCDATE">
<comment>Document date</comment>
- <text>2006-03-14</text>
+ <text>2006-03-29</text>
</entity>
<entity name="DOCID">
<comment>Document ID string</comment>
Index: fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000 1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-adminoptions.xml 29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000 1.2
@@ -594,7 +594,7 @@
</tip>
<para>
&FED; includes a graphical application to create and modify
- Kickstart files by selecting the options you require. Use the
+ Kickstart files by selecting the options that you require. Use the
package <filename>system-config-kickstart</filename> to install
this utility. To load the &FED; Kickstart editor, choose
<menuchoice> <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guisubmenu>System
@@ -765,8 +765,7 @@
include the extensions <filename>.zip</filename>, or
<filename>.tar.gz</filename>. To extract the contents of a
zipped file with a &FED; system, choose <menuchoice>
- <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guisubmenu>System
- Tools</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Archive
+ <guimenu>Applications</guimenu> <guisubmenu>Accessories</guisubmenu><guimenuitem>Archive
Manager</guimenuitem></menuchoice>.
</para>
</note>
Index: fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000 1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-firstboot.xml 29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000 1.2
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@
that are valid for your hardware.
</para>
<tip>
- <title>Resetting the display</title>
+ <title>Resetting the Display</title>
<para>
To reconfigure your system after the installation has completed,
choose <menuchoice> <guimenu>System</guimenu>
@@ -501,7 +501,7 @@
secure password.
</para>
<tip>
- <title>Creating extra user accounts</title>
+ <title>Creating Extra User Accounts</title>
<para>
To add additional user accounts to your system after the
installation is complete, choose <menuchoice>
@@ -515,29 +515,7 @@
user information, select <guibutton>Use Network
Login...</guibutton>.
</para>
-
- <para>
- After you configure login services, select
- <guilabel>Finish</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen.
- Your &FC; system is now ready for use.
- </para>
-
- <important>
- <title>Update Your System</title>
-
- <para>
- To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
- after the installation completes.
- <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
- &FED; system.
- </para>
- </important>
-
-
</section>
-
-<!-- SE: This screen is not enabled.
-
<section id="sn-firstboot-soundcard">
<title>Sound Card</title>
@@ -574,6 +552,7 @@
check your speakers and try again. In some cases, you may need to
alter the additional settings to obtain the best sound quality.
</para>
+
<para>
A sound card may provide multiple audio input and output devices.
To change the <guilabel>Default PCM device</guilabel>, select a
@@ -598,10 +577,23 @@
Detection</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
</para>
</tip>
+ <para>
+ After you configure the sound card, select
+ <guilabel>Finish</guilabel> to proceed to the login screen. Your
+ &FC; system is now ready for use.
+ </para>
- </section>
+ <important>
+ <title>Update Your System</title>
--->
+ <para>
+ To ensure the security of your system, run a package update
+ after the installation completes.
+ <xref linkend="ch-next-steps" /> explains how to update your
+ &FED; system.
+ </para>
+ </important>
+ </section>
</chapter>
<!--
Index: fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml 17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000 1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-nextsteps.xml 29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000 1.2
@@ -37,15 +37,15 @@
<para>
To update your system with the latest packages, use the
<indexterm>
- <primary>Package Updater</primary>
+ <primary>Software Updater</primary>
</indexterm>
- <application>Package Updater</application>:
+ <application>Software Updater</application>:
</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
Choose <menuchoice><guimenu>Applications</guimenu>
- <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Package
+ <guisubmenu>System Tools</guisubmenu> <guimenuitem>Software
Updater</guimenuitem> </menuchoice>.
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -244,7 +244,7 @@
</para>
</section>
<section id="sn-community">
- <title>Joining The &FED; Community</title>
+ <title>Joining the &FED; Community</title>
<para>
The &FP; is driven by the individuals that contribute to it.
Index: fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/en_US/fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 17 Mar 2006 19:40:20 -0000 1.1
+++ fedora-install-guide-packageselection.xml 29 Mar 2006 21:19:18 -0000 1.2
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
<title>Core Network Services</title>
<para>
- All Fedora Core installation include the following network services:
+ All Fedora Core installations include the following network services:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
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