release-notes/devel/en_US Extras.xml,1.9,1.10

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv18710

Modified Files:
	Extras.xml 
Log Message:
Good for FC6


Index: Extras.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Extras.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- Extras.xml	24 Sep 2006 20:41:49 -0000	1.9
+++ Extras.xml	25 Sep 2006 07:29:49 -0000	1.10
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     <listitem override='none'>
 <!--GetVal-macro not supported by the docbook formatter, but giving it a shot anyway-->
       <para>
-        Fedora Extras is an extension of Fedora Core which provides many
+        Fedora Extras is an extension of Fedora Core that provides many
         additional packages for users of the Fedora distribution.
       </para>
     </listitem>
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@
       review to Fedora Extras. After a successful review, import it to
       Extras and you can maintain it there. If you don't know how to
       create RPM packages, there are many other ways to get involved in
-      Fedora Extras and help drive it forward.
+      Fedora Extras and help the project.
     </para>
     <para>
       To learn more about how to use Fedora Extras or how to get
@@ -214,7 +214,7 @@
   <section>
     <title>Package Updates</title>
     <para>
-      This section discusses changes in Fedora Extras packages which
+      This section discusses changes in Fedora Extras packages that
       affect this release of Fedora Core.
     </para>
     <section>
@@ -224,8 +224,8 @@
         provided in Fedora Extras 6. It was the original implementation
         of
         <ulink url='http://fedora-test.fedoraproject.org/fedora-docs/fedora-docs/SpamAssassin'>SpamAssassin</ulink>
-        integration with Exim, and was functionally similar to sendmail
-        'milters' or postfix filters. However, that functionality is
+        integration with Exim, and was functionally similar to <code>sendmail</code>
+        milters or <code>postfix</code> filters. However, that functionality is
         rather limited, and Exim now has far better support for content
         checking, fully integrated into its general-purpose Access
         Control Lists.