release-notes/devel/en_US Welcome.xml,1.10,1.11

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Apr 4 04:06:06 UTC 2007


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv10420

Modified Files:
	Welcome.xml 
Log Message:
Welcome is ready for test4 notes


Index: Welcome.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Welcome.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- Welcome.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.10
+++ Welcome.xml	4 Apr 2007 04:06:04 -0000	1.11
@@ -2,14 +2,7 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Welcome">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Welcome</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Welcome to Fedora</title>
-
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     The Fedora Project is a Red Hat sponsored and community supported
     open source project. Its goal is the rapid progress of free and open
@@ -18,13 +11,14 @@
     transparency in pursuit of the best operating system and platform
     that free and open source software can provide.
   </para>
-
   <para>
-    [[Admonition(tip, "Latest Release Notes on the Web","These release
-    notes may be updated. Visit
-    <ulink url='http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/'>http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/</ulink>
-    to view the latest release notes for Fedora.")]]
-  </para>
+    <tip>
+      <title>Latest Release Notes on the Web</title>
+      <para>
+	These release notes may be updated. Visit <ulink
+	  url='http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/'>http://docs.fedoraproject.org/release-notes/</ulink> 
+	to view the latest release notes for Fedora.</para>
+    </tip>
 
   <para>
     You can help the Fedora Project community continue to improve Fedora
@@ -71,13 +65,15 @@
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition(note,"Document Links","Many links may not work properly
-    from within the installation environment, due to resource
-    constraints. The release notes are also available post-installation
-    as part of the desktop Web browser's default home page. If you are
-    connected to the internet, use these links to find other helpful
-    information about Fedora and the community that creates and supports
-    it.")]]
-  </para>
+  <note>
+    <title>Document Links</title>
+    <para>
+      Many links may not work properly from within the installation environment,
+      due to resource constraints. The release notes are also available
+      post-installation as part of the desktop Web browser's default home page.
+      If you are connected to the internet, use these links to find other
+      helpful information about Fedora and the community that creates and
+      supports it.
+    </para>
+  </note>
 </section>




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