release-notes/devel/en_US ProjectOverview.xml,1.10,1.11

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv11084

Modified Files:
	ProjectOverview.xml 
Log Message:
ready for test4


Index: ProjectOverview.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/ProjectOverview.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- ProjectOverview.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.10
+++ ProjectOverview.xml	4 Apr 2007 04:33:50 -0000	1.11
@@ -2,14 +2,8 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-ProjectOverview">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/ProjectOverview</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Fedora Project </title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     The goal of the Fedora Project is to work with the Linux community
     to build a complete, general-purpose operating system exclusively
@@ -69,13 +63,12 @@
   </itemizedlist>
 
   <para>
-    To subscribe to any of these lists, send an email with the word
-    "subscribe" in the subject to
-    <emphasis><listname>-request</emphasis>, where
-    <emphasis><listname></emphasis> is one of the above list names.
-    Alternately, you can subscribe to Fedora mailing lists through the
-    Web interface at
-    <ulink url='http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/'>http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink>.
+    To subscribe to any of these lists, send an email with the word "subscribe"
+    in the subject to <replaceable><listname>-request</replaceable>, where
+    <replaceable><listname></replaceable> is one of the above list names.
+    Alternately, you can subscribe to Fedora mailing lists through the Web
+    interface at <ulink
+      url='http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/'>http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/</ulink>.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -91,23 +84,24 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    Fedora Project participants frequent the <code>#fedora</code>
-    channel on the Freenode network, while Fedora Project developers may
-    often be found on the <code>#fedora-devel</code> channel. Some of
-    the larger projects may have their own channels as well. This
-    information may be found on the webpage for the project, and at
-    <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate</ulink>.
+    Fedora Project participants frequent the #fedora channel on the Freenode
+    network, while Fedora Project developers may often be found on the
+    #fedora-devel channel. Some of the larger projects may have their own
+    channels as well. This information may be found on the webpage for the
+    project, and at <ulink
+      url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate</ulink>.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    In order to talk on the <code>#fedora</code> channel, you need to
-    register your nickname, or <emphasis>nick</emphasis>. Instructions
-    are given when you <code>/join</code> the channel.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition("note", "IRC Channels", "The Fedora Project and Red Hat
-    have no control over the Fedora Project IRC channels or their
-    content.")]]
-  </para>
+    In order to talk on the #fedora channel, you need to
+    register your nickname, or <firstterm>nick</firstterm>. Instructions
+    are given when you <command>/join</command> the channel.
+  </para>
+  <note>
+    <title>IRC Channels</title>
+    <para>
+      The Fedora Project and Red Hat have no control over the Fedora Project IRC
+      channels or their content.
+    </para>
+  </note>
 </section>