release-notes/devel/en_US OverView.xml,1.14,1.15

[Karsten Wade (kwade)]

Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv16408

Modified Files:
	OverView.xml 
Log Message:
ready for test4


Index: OverView.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
retrieving revision 1.15
diff -u -r1.14 -r1.15
--- OverView.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.14
+++ OverView.xml	4 Apr 2007 05:58:07 -0000	1.15
@@ -2,17 +2,9 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-OverView">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/OverView</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Release Highlights</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Fedora-Tour">
     <title>Fedora Tour</title>
     <para>
       You can find a tour filled with pictures and videos of this
@@ -22,70 +14,73 @@
     <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-New-in-Fedora">
     <title>New in Fedora</title>
     <para>
       This release includes significant new versions of many key
       components and technologies. The following sections provide a
       brief overview of major changes from the last release of Fedora.
     </para>
-    <para/>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Desktop">
       <title>Desktop</title>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            This release features
-            <ulink url='http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/notes/en/'>GNOME</ulink>
-            2.18 and KDE 3.5.6.
+            This release features GNOME 2.18 and KDE 3.5.6.
           </para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink
+	      url='http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/notes/en/'>http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/notes/en/</ulink>
+	  </para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url="http://kde.org/info/3.5.6.php">http://kde.org/info/3.5.6.php</ulink>
+	  </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Fedora 7 includes a refreshing new "Flying High" theme,
-            which is part of a continuous team effort from the community
-            and the
-            <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork'>Fedora
-            Artwork Project</ulink>.
+            Fedora 7 includes a refreshing new "Flying High" theme, which is
+	    part of a continuous team effort from the community and the Fedora
+	    Artwork Project:
           </para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink
+	      url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork</ulink>
+	  </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-      <para/>
     </section>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Performance">
       <title>Performance</title>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            In this release, the performance of <code>yum</code>,
-            <emphasis role='strong'>Pirut</emphasis>, and
-            <emphasis role='strong'>Pup</emphasis> has been
-            significantly improved.
+            In this release, the performance of <command>yum</command>,
+	    <application>Pirut</application>, and <application>Pup</application>
+	    have been significantly improved.
           </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-      <para/>
     </section>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-System-Administration">
       <title>System Administration</title>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Kernel-based Virtual Machine (KVM) technology has been
-            integrated with the Fedora graphical virtualization manager
-            tool, <code>virt-manager</code>. KVM provides
-            <ulink url='http://virt.kernelnewbies.org/HypervisorVsLinuxBased'>a
-            full virtualization solution</ulink>, and users have a
-            choice between KVM and Xen, along with Qemu, in this
-            release.
+            Kernel-based Virtual Machine (KVM) technology has been integrated
+	    with the Fedora graphical virtualization manager tool,
+	    <command>virt-manager</command>. KVM provides a full virtualization
+	    solution, and users have a choice between KVM and Xen, along with
+	    Qemu, in this release.  More on KVM:
           </para>
+	  <para>
+	    <ulink url='http://virt.kernelnewbies.org/HypervisorVsLinuxBased'>http://virt.kernelnewbies.org/HypervisorVsLinuxBased</ulink>
+	  </para>
         </listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
-      <para/>
     </section>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Road-Map">
     <title>Road Map</title>
     <para>
       The proposed plans for the next release of Fedora are available at