release-notes/devel/en_US BackwardsCompatibility.xml, 1.12, 1.13 Colophon.xml, 1.16, 1.17 DatabaseServers.xml, 1.12, 1.13 Desktop.xml, 1.12, 1.13 Devel.xml, 1.4, 1.5 Entertainment.xml, 1.9, 1.10 Feedback.xml, 1.12, 1.13 FileSystems.xml, 1.10, 1.11 I18n.xml, 1.11, 1.12 Installer.xml, 1.13, 1.14 Java.xml, 1.12, 1.13 Kernel.xml, 1.19, 1.20 Live.xml, 1.2, 1.3 OverView.xml, 1.15, 1.16 PackageChanges.xml, 1.13, 1.14 PackageNotes.xml, 1.10, 1.11 Xorg.xml, 1.13, 1.14

Karsten Wade (kwade) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed Apr 4 11:53:59 UTC 2007


Author: kwade

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv15893

Modified Files:
	BackwardsCompatibility.xml Colophon.xml DatabaseServers.xml 
	Desktop.xml Devel.xml Entertainment.xml Feedback.xml 
	FileSystems.xml I18n.xml Installer.xml Java.xml Kernel.xml 
	Live.xml OverView.xml PackageChanges.xml PackageNotes.xml 
	Xorg.xml 
Log Message:
this all should build; there are inconsistencies in the XML usage to clean-up


Index: BackwardsCompatibility.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/BackwardsCompatibility.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- BackwardsCompatibility.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:38:44 -0000	1.12
+++ BackwardsCompatibility.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.13
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 <?xml version="1.0"?>
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
-<section id="sn-BackwardsCompatibility">
+<section id="sn-Backwards-Compatibility">
   <title>Backwards Compatibility</title>
 
   <para>


Index: Colophon.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Colophon.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- Colophon.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:44:00 -0000	1.16
+++ Colophon.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.17
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
 
   <para/>
 
-  <section id="sn-contributors">
+  <section id="sn-Contributors">
     <title>Contributors</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@
     </para>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="sn-production-methods">
+  <section id="sn-Production-Methods">
     <title>Production Methods</title>
     <para>
       Beat writers produce the release notes directly on the Fedora


Index: DatabaseServers.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/DatabaseServers.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- DatabaseServers.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:50:54 -0000	1.12
+++ DatabaseServers.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.13
@@ -4,36 +4,36 @@
 <section id="sn-DatabaseServers">
   <title>Database Servers</title>
 
-  <section id="sn-mysql">
+  <section id="sn-MySQL">
     <title>MySQL</title>
     <para>
-      Fedora now provides <application>MySQL</application> 5.0. For a
+      Fedora now provides MySQL 5.0. For a
       list of the enhancements provided by this version, refer to <ulink
 	url='http://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/5.0/en/mysql-5-0-nutshell.html'/>.
     </para>
     <para>
       For more information on upgrading databases from previous releases
-      of <application>MySQL</application>, refer to the
-      <application>MySQL</application> website at <ulink
+      of MySQL, refer to the
+      MySQL website at <ulink
 	url='http://dev.mysql.com/doc/refman/5.0/en/upgrade.html'/>.
     </para>
-    <section id="sn-mysql-dbd">
+    <section id="sn-MySQL-DBD">
       <title>DBD Driver</title>
       <para>
-        The <application>MySQL</application> DBD driver has been
-	dual-licensed and the related licensing issues have been <ulink
-	  url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=222237'>resolved</ulink>. 
+        The MySQL DBD driver has been
+	dual-licensed and the related licensing issues have been resolved (<ulink
+	  url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=222237'/>). 
 	The resulting <package>apr-util-mysql</package> package is now
 	included in the Fedora software repositories.
       </para>
     </section>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-PostgreSQL">
     <title>PostgreSQL</title>
     <para>
       This release of Fedora includes
-      <application>PostgreSQL</application> 8.2. For more information on
+      PostgreSQL 8.2. For more information on
       this new version, refer to <ulink
 	url='http://www.postgresql.org/docs/whatsnew'/>.
     </para>


Index: Desktop.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Desktop.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- Desktop.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:56:33 -0000	1.12
+++ Desktop.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.13
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
 
-  <section id="sn-software-management">
+  <section id="sn-Software-Management">
     <title>Software Management</title>
     <para>
       The performance for the <command>yum</command> software management
@@ -55,27 +55,27 @@
     </para>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-GNOME">
     <title>GNOME</title>
     <para>
       This release features
-      <ulink url='http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/'>GNOME</ulink> 2.18.
+      GNOME 2.18 (<ulink url='http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/'>http://www.gnome.org/start/2.18/</ulink>)
     </para>
     <para>
       The GNOME splash screen has been disabled upstream intentionally.
       To enable it, use <command>gconf-editor</command> or the following
       command:
     </para>
-    <screen><![CDATA[gconftool-2 --set /apps/gnome-session/options/show_splash_screen --type bool true]]></screen>
+<screen><![CDATA[gconftool-2 --set /apps/gnome-session/options/show_splash_screen --type bool true]]></screen>
     <para>
       The lock screen dialog theme is not connected to the selected
       screensaver in this release. To enable it, use
       <command>gconf-editor</command> or the following command:
     </para>
-    <screen><![CDATA[gconftool-2 --set  --type string /apps/gnome-screensaver/lock_dialog_theme  "system"]]></screen>
+<screen><![CDATA[gconftool-2 --set  --type string /apps/gnome-screensaver/lock_dialog_theme  "system"]]></screen>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Web-Browsers">
     <title>Web Browsers</title>
     <para>
       This release of Fedora includes version 2.0 of the popular
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
     </para>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Mail-Clients">
     <title>Mail Clients</title>
     <para>
       The <package>mail-notification</package> package has been split.


Index: Devel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Devel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- Devel.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.4
+++ Devel.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.5
@@ -2,75 +2,63 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Devel">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Devel</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Development</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     This section covers various development tools and features.
   </para>
-
-  <para>
-    <para/>
-    <section>
-      <title>Runtime</title>
+<!--
+  <section id="sn-Runtime">
+    <title>Runtime</title>
       <para>
-        These are the new features in <code>glibc</code>:
+        These are the new features in <package>glibc</package>:
       </para>
       <para>
         <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
+    </para>
+  </section>
+-->
+  <section id="sn-Tools">
+    <title>Tools</title>
+    <para>
+    <section id="sn-GCC-Compiler-Collection">
+      <title>GCC Compiler Collection</title>
+      <para>
+	This release of Fedora has been built with GCC 4.1, which is
+	included with the distribution.
       </para>
+<!--
+      <section id="sn-">
+	<title>Caveats</title>
+	<para>
+	  <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
+	</para>
+      </section>
+      <section id="sn-">
+	<title>Code Generation</title>
+	<para>
+	  <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
+	</para>
+      </section>
+      <section id="sn-">
+	<title>Language Extensions</title>
+	<para>
+	  <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
+	</para>
+      </section>
+-->
     </section>
 
-    <para/>
-    <section>
-      <title>Tools</title>
+    <section id="sn-Eclipse">
+      <title>Eclipse</title>
       <para>
-        <para/>
-        <section>
-          <title>GCC Compiler Collection</title>
-          <para>
-            This release of Fedora has been built with GCC 4.1, which is
-            included with the distribution.
-          </para>
-          <para/>
-          <section>
-            <title>Caveats</title>
-            <para>
-              <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
-            </para>
-            <para/>
-          </section>
-          <section>
-            <title>Code Generation</title>
-            <para>
-              <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
-            </para>
-            <para/>
-          </section>
-          <section>
-            <title>Language Extensions</title>
-            <para>
-              <emphasis>No content</emphasis>
-            </para>
-          </section>
-        </section>
-
-        <para/>
-        <section>
-          <title>Eclipse</title>
-          <para>
-            This release of Fedora includes Fedora Eclipse, based on the
-            <ulink url='http://www.eclipse.org'>Eclipse</ulink> SDK
-            version 3.2.2. The "New and Noteworthy" page for the 3.2.x
-            series of releases can be accessed at
-            <ulink url='http://download.eclipse.org/eclipse/downloads/drops/R-3.2-200606291905/new_noteworthy/eclipse-news.html'>http://download.eclipse.org/eclipse/downloads/drops/R-3.2-200606291905/new_noteworthy/eclipse-news.html</ulink>.
-            Release notes specific to 3.2.2 are available at
-            <ulink url='http://www.eclipse.org/eclipse/development/readme_eclipse_3.2.2.html'>http://www.eclipse.org/eclipse/development/readme_eclipse_3.2.2.html</ulink>.
+	This release of Fedora includes Fedora Eclipse, based on the Eclipse SDK version 3.2.2 (<ulink
+	  url='http://www.eclipse.org'>http://www.eclipse.org</ulink>). The
+	"New and Noteworthy" page for the 3.2.x series of releases can be
+	accessed at <ulink
+	  url='http://download.eclipse.org/eclipse/downloads/drops/R-3.2-200606291905/new_noteworthy/eclipse-news.html'>http://download.eclipse.org/eclipse/downloads/drops/R-3.2-200606291905/new_noteworthy/eclipse-news.html</ulink>. 
+	Release notes specific to 3.2.2 are available at <ulink
+	  url='http://www.eclipse.org/eclipse/development/readme_eclipse_3.2.2.html'>http://www.eclipse.org/eclipse/development/readme_eclipse_3.2.2.html</ulink>.
           </para>
           <para>
             The Eclipse SDK is known variously as "the Eclipse
@@ -112,9 +100,9 @@
           <para>
             Fedora also includes plugins and features that are
             particularly useful to FLOSS hackers,
-            <ulink url='/wiki/ChangeLog'>ChangeLog</ulink> editing with
-            <code>eclipse-changelog</code>, and Bugzilla interaction
-            with <code>eclipse-mylar-bugzilla</code>. Our CDT package
+            ChangeLog editing with
+            <package>eclipse-changelog</package>, and Bugzilla interaction
+            with <package>eclipse-mylar-bugzilla</package>. Our CDT package
             also includes the work-in-progress GNU Autotools plugin.
             This plugin allows end-users to use Eclipse to build and
             maintain C/C++ projects that use GNU autotools. Enhancements
@@ -146,8 +134,7 @@
             Each language is packed into a separate package, such as
             <code>eclipse-sdk-nls-ko</code> for the Korean translation.
           </para>
-          <para/>
-          <section>
+                    <section id="sn-">
             <title>Non-packaged Plugins/Features</title>
             <para>
               Fedora Eclipse contains a patch to allow non-root users to
@@ -156,39 +143,35 @@
               are installed in the user's home directory under the
               <code>.eclipse</code> directory. Please note, however,
               that these plugins do not have associated GCJ-compiled
-              bits and may therefore run slower than expected.
-            </para>
-            <para/>
-          </section>
-          <section>
-            <title>Alternative Java Runtime Environments</title>
-            <para>
-              The Fedora free JRE does not satisfy every user, so Fedora
-              does allow the installation of alternative JREs. A caveat
-              exists, however, for installing proprietary JREs on 64-bit
-              machines.
-            </para>
-            <para>
-              The 64-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on x86_64
-              systems in Fedora do not run on 32-bit proprietary JREs.
-              In other words, do not try to run Fedora's x86_64 Eclipse
-              packages on Sun's 32-bit JRE. They fail in confusing ways.
-              Either switch to a 64-bit proprietary JRE, or install the
-              32-bit version of the packages, if available. To install a
-              32-bit version, use the following command:
-            </para>
+	  bits and may therefore run slower than expected.
+	</para>
+      </section>
+      <section id="sn-Alternative-Java-Runtime-Environments">
+	<title>Alternative Java Runtime Environments</title>
+	<para>
+	  The Fedora free JRE does not satisfy every user, so Fedora does allow
+	  the installation of alternative JREs. A caveat exists, however, for
+	  installing proprietary JREs on 64-bit machines.
+	</para>
+	<para>
+	  The 64-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on x86_64 systems in
+	  Fedora do not run on 32-bit proprietary JREs. In other words, do not
+	  try to run Fedora's x86_64 Eclipse packages on Sun's 32-bit JRE. They
+	  fail in confusing ways. Either switch to a 64-bit proprietary JRE, or
+	  install the 32-bit version of the packages, if available. To install a
+	  32-bit version, use the following command:
+	</para>
 <screen><![CDATA[yum install <package_name>.i386 
 ]]></screen>
-            <para>
-              Likewise, the 32-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on
-              ppc64 systems do not run with a 64-bit JRE. To install the
-              64-bit version, use the following command:
-            </para>
+	<para>
+	  Likewise, the 32-bit JNI libraries shipped by default on ppc64 systems
+	  do not run with a 64-bit JRE. To install the 64-bit version, use the
+	  following command:
+	</para>
 <screen><![CDATA[yum install <package_name>.ppc64 
 ]]></screen>
-            <para/>
-          </section>
-          <section>
+      </section>
+      <section id="sn-Europa-Eclipse">
             <title>Europa/Eclipse 3.3</title>
             <para>
               In June 2007, the Eclipse community is releasing the


Index: Entertainment.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Entertainment.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- Entertainment.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.9
+++ Entertainment.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.10
@@ -2,18 +2,13 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Entertainment">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Entertainment</title>
-  </articleinfo>
 
   <title>Games and Entertainment</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     Fedora provides a selection of games that cover a variety of genres.
     Users can install a small package of games for GNOME (called
-    <code>gnome-games</code>) and KDE (<code>kdegames</code>). There are
+    <package>gnome-games</package>) and KDE (<package>kdegames</package>). There are
     also many additional games that span every major genre available in
     the repositories.
   </para>
@@ -27,37 +22,30 @@
 
   <para>
     For a list of other games that are available for installation, use
-    the <emphasis role='strong'>Pirut</emphasis> graphical utility
-    (<emphasis>Applications > Add/Remove Software</emphasis>), or via
+    the <application>Pirut</application> graphical utility
+    (<guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove Software</guimenuitem>), or via
     the command line:
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[yum groupinfo "Games and Entertainment" 
 ]]></screen>
 
   <para>
-    For help using <code>yum</code> to install the assorted game
-    packages, refer to the guide available at:
+    For help using <command>yum</command> to install the assorted game
+    packages, refer to the guide available at:x
   </para>
 
   <para>
     <ulink url='http://docs.fedoraproject.org/yum/'>http://docs.fedoraproject.org/yum/</ulink>
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-haxima">
     <title>Haxima</title>
     <para>
-      Fedora 7 includes version 0.5.6 of the
-      <emphasis role='strong'>Nazghul</emphasis> old-school role playing
-      game engine and its companion game Haxima. This version is not
-      compatible with saved games from previous
-      <emphasis role='strong'>Nazghul</emphasis> versions, so those with
-      Haxima games in progress need to restart their games after
-      updating to Fedora 7.
+      Fedora 7 includes version 0.5.6 of the Nazghul old-school role playing
+      game engine and its companion game Haxima. This version is not compatible
+      with saved games from previous Nazghul versions, so those with Haxima
+      games in progress need to restart their games after updating to Fedora 7.
     </para>
   </section>
 </section>


Index: Feedback.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Feedback.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- Feedback.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.12
+++ Feedback.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.13
@@ -2,23 +2,15 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Feedback">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Feedback</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Feedback</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     Thank you for taking the time to provide your comments, suggestions,
     and bug reports to the Fedora community. By doing so, you help
     improve the state of Fedora, Linux, and free software worldwide.
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Providing-Feedback-on-Fedora-Software">
     <title>Providing Feedback on Fedora Software</title>
     <para>
       To provide feedback on Fedora software or other system elements,
@@ -28,21 +20,23 @@
       is available from
       <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/F7Common'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/F7Common</ulink>.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="Providing-Feedback-on-Release-Notes">
     <title>Providing Feedback on Release Notes</title>
-    <para>
-      [[Admonition("important", "Feedback for Release Notes Only", "This
-      section concerns feedback on the release notes themselves.")]]
-    </para>
+    <important>
+      <title>Feedback for Release Notes Only</title>
+      <para>
+	This
+	section concerns feedback on the release notes themselves.
+      </para>
+    </important>  
     <para>
       If you feel these release notes could be improved in any way, you
       can provide your feedback directly to the beat writers. Here are
       several ways to do so, in order of preference:
     </para>
-    <itemizedlist>
+    <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           If you have a Fedora account, edit content directly at
@@ -64,6 +58,6 @@
           <ulink url='mailto:relnotes at fedoraproject.org'>relnotes at fedoraproject.org</ulink>
         </para>
       </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
+    </orderedlist>
   </section>
 </section>


Index: FileSystems.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/FileSystems.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- FileSystems.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.10
+++ FileSystems.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.11
@@ -2,86 +2,81 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-FileSystems">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/FileSystems</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>File Systems</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     Fedora 7 provides basic support for encrypted swap partitions and
     non-root file systems. To use it, add entries to
-    <code>/etc/crypttab</code> and reference the created devices in
-    <code>/etc/fstab</code>.
+    <filename>/etc/crypttab</filename> and reference the created devices in
+    <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>.
   </para>
 
+  <note>
+    <title>Encrypted FS Support Unavailable During
+    Install</title>
+    <para>
+      Enable file system encryption after installation.
+      <application>Anaconda</application> does not have support for creating encrypted block
+    devices.
+    </para>
+  </note>
   <para>
-    [[Admonition("note", "Encrypted FS Support Unavailable During
-    Install", "Enable file system encryption after installation.
-    Anaconda does not have support for creating encrypted block
-    devices.")]]
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    The following example shows an <code>/etc/crypttab</code> entry for
+    The following example shows an <filename>/etc/crypttab</filename> entry for
     a swap partition:
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[my_swap /dev/hdb1 /dev/urandom swap,cipher=aes-cbc-essiv:sha256 
 ]]></screen>
 
   <para>
     This creates an encrypted block device
-    <code>/dev/mapper/my_swap</code>, which can be referenced in
-    <code>/etc/fstab</code>. The next example shows an entry for a
+    <filename>/dev/mapper/my_swap</filename>, which can be referenced in
+    <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>. The next example shows an entry for a
     filesystem volume:
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[my_volume /dev/hda5 /etc/volume_key cipher=aes-cbc-essiv:sha256 
 ]]></screen>
 
   <para>
-    The <code>/etc/volume_key</code> file contains a plaintext
-    encryption key. You can also specify <code>none</code> as the key
+    The <filename>/etc/volume_key</filename> file contains a plaintext
+    encryption key. You can also specify <filename>none</filename> as the key
     file name, and the system instead asks for the encryption key during
     boot.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The recommended method is to use <emphasis>LUKS</emphasis> for file
-    system volumes: (using LUKS you can drop the cipher= part in
-    crypttab).
+    The recommended method is to use <firstterm>LUKS</firstterm> for file system
+    volumes: (using LUKS you can drop the
+    <computeroutput>cipher=</computeroutput> part in
+    <filename>crypttab</filename>).
   </para>
 
-  <orderedlist numeration='arabic'>
-    <listitem>
+  <procedure>
+    <step>
       <para>
-        Create the encrypted volume using <code>cryptsetup
-        luksFormat</code>
+        Create the encrypted volume using <command>cryptsetup
+        luksFormat</command>
       </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
+    </step>
+    <step>
       <para>
-        Add the necessary entry to <code>/etc/crypttab</code>
+        Add the necessary entry to <filename>/etc/crypttab</filename>
       </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>
+    </step>
+    <step>
       <para>
-        Set up the volume manually using <code>cryptsetup
-        luksOpen</code> or reboot
+        Set up the volume manually using <command>cryptsetup
+        luksOpen</command> or reboot
       </para>
-    </listitem>
-    <listitem>Create a filesystem on the encrypted volume </listitem>
-    <listitem>
+    </step>
+    <step>
+      <para>Create a filesystem on the encrypted volume</para> 
+    </step>
+    <step>
       <para>
-        Set up an <code>/etc/fstab</code> entry
+        Set up an <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> entry
       </para>
-    </listitem>
-  </orderedlist>
+    </step>
+  </procedure>
 </section>


Index: I18n.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/I18n.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.11
retrieving revision 1.12
diff -u -r1.11 -r1.12
--- I18n.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.11
+++ I18n.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.12
@@ -2,32 +2,24 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-I18n">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/I18n</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Internationalization (i18n)</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
   <para>
     This section includes information on language support under Fedora.
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Input-Methods">
     <title>Input Methods</title>
     <para>
       When upgrading from earlier releases of Fedora, it is strongly
-      recommended to install <code>scim-bridge-gtk</code>, which works
+      recommended to install <package>scim-bridge-gtk</package>, which works
       well with 3rd party C++ applications linked against older versions
-      of <code>libstdc++</code>.
+      of <command>libstdc++</command>.
     </para>
     <para>
       When SCIM is installed, it runs by default for users of all
       locales. If SCIM is installed but you do not wish to run it on
-      your desktop, disable it using <code>im-chooser</code>.
+      your desktop, disable it using <command>im-chooser</command>.
     </para>
     <para>
       The following table lists the default trigger hotkeys for
@@ -40,78 +32,78 @@
         <colspec colname='xxx2'/>
         <tbody>
           <row>
-<entry><para><emphasis role='strong'>Language</emphasis></para></entry>
-<entry><para><emphasis role='strong'>Trigger hotkeys</emphasis></para></entry>
+	    <entry><para>Language</para></entry>
+	    <entry><para>Trigger hotkeys</para></entry>
           </row>
           <row>
-<entry><para>all</para></entry>
-<entry><para><code>Ctrl-Space</code></para></entry>
+	    <entry><para>all</para></entry>
+	    <entry><para><keycombo>
+		  <keycap>Ctrl</keycap>
+		  <keycap>Space</keycap>
+		</keycombo></para>
+	    </entry>
           </row>
           <row>
-<entry><para>Japanese</para></entry>
-<entry><para><code>Zenkaku_Hankaku</code> or <code>Alt-`</code></para></entry>
+	    <entry><para>Japanese</para></entry>
+	    <entry><para><keycombo>Zenkaku_Hankaku</keycombo> or <keycombo>
+		  <keycap>Alt</keycap>
+		  <keycap>`</keycap></keycombo></para></entry>
           </row>
           <row>
-<entry><para>Korean</para></entry>
-<entry><para><code>Shift-Space</code> or <code>Hangul</code></para></entry>
+	    <entry><para>Korean</para></entry>
+	    <entry><para><keycombo>
+		  <keycap>Shift</keycap>
+		  <keycap>Space</keycap></keycombo> or <keycombo>Hangul</keycombo></para></entry>
           </row>
         </tbody>
       </tgroup>
     </table>
-    <para/>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Language-Installation">
       <title>Language Installation</title>
       <para>
-        To install additional language support from the
-        <emphasis role='strong'>Languages</emphasis> group, use
-        <emphasis role='strong'>Pirut</emphasis> via
-        <emphasis>Applications > Add/Remove Software</emphasis>, or run
-        this command:
+        To install additional language support from the Languages group, use
+	<application>Pirut</application> via
+	<guimenu>Applications</guimenu><guimenuitem>Add/Remove
+	  Software</guimenuitem>, or run this command:
       </para>
-      <para/>
 <screen><![CDATA[su -c 'yum groupinstall <language>-support' 
 ]]></screen>
       <para>
-        In the command above, <code><language></code> is one of
-        <code>assamese</code>, <code>bengali</code>,
-        <code>chinese</code>, <code>gujarati</code>, <code>hindi</code>,
-        <code>japanese</code>, <code>kannada</code>,
-        <code>korean</code>, <code>malayalam</code>,
-        <code>marathi</code>, <code>oriya</code>, <code>punjabi</code>,
-        <code>sinhala</code>, <code>tamil</code>, <code>thai</code>, or
-        <code>telegu</code>.
+        In the command above, <replaceable><language></replaceable> is one of
+        <option>assamese</option>, <option>bengali</option>,
+        <option>chinese</option>, <option>gujarati</option>, <option>hindi</option>,
+        <option>japanese</option>, <option>kannada</option>,
+        <option>korean</option>, <option>malayalam</option>,
+        <option>marathi</option>, <option>oriya</option>, <option>punjabi</option>,
+        <option>sinhala</option>, <option>tamil</option>, <option>thai</option>, or
+        <option>telegu</option>.
       </para>
-      <para/>
     </section>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-M17n-Changes">
     <title>M17n Changes</title>
     <para>
-      Package <emphasis role='strong'>m17n-db</emphasis>
+      Package <package>m17n-db</package>:
     </para>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Added ZWNJ (U+200d) needed in kn-* keymaps, resolved -
-          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=221965'>bugzilla
-          #221965</ulink>
+          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=221965'>https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=221965</ulink>
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Added itrans layout for Marathi, resolved -
-          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225561'>bugzilla
-          #225561</ulink>
+          Added itrans layout for Marathi, resolved - <ulink
+	    url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225561'>https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225561</ulink>
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          Added phonetic keymaps for Marathi & Oriya, resolved -
-          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225559'>bugzilla
-          #225559</ulink> and
-          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225562'>bugzilla
-          #225562</ulink>
+          Added phonetic keymaps for Marathi and Oriya, resolved -
+          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225559'>https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225559</ulink> and
+          <ulink url='https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225562'>https://bugzilla.redhat.com/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=225562</ulink>
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>


Index: Installer.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Installer.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- Installer.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.13
+++ Installer.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.14
@@ -2,106 +2,97 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-Installer">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/Installer</title>
-  </articleinfo>
-
   <title>Installation Notes</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition("important", "Fedora Installation Guide", "To learn how
-    to install Fedora, refer to
-    <ulink url='http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/'>http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/</ulink>.")]]
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition("tip", "Installation issues not covered in these
-    release notes", "If you encounter a problem or have a question
-    during installation that is not covered in these relese notes, refer
-    to
-    <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink>
-    and
-    <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common</ulink>")]]
-  </para>
-
+  <important>
+    <title>Fedora Installation Guide</title>
+    <para>
+      To learn how to install Fedora, refer to <ulink
+	url='http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/'>http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/</ulink>.
+    </para>
+  </important>
+  <tip>
+    <title>Installation issues not covered in these release notes</title>
+    <para>
+      If you encounter a problem or have a question during installation that is
+      not covered in these relese notes, refer to <ulink
+	url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/FAQ</ulink> 
+      and <ulink
+	url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Bugs/Common</ulink>.
+    </para>
+  </tip>
   <para>
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> is the name of the
+    <application>Anaconda</application> is the name of the
     Fedora installer. This section outlines issues related to
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> and installing Fedora 7.
+    <application>Anaconda</application> and installing Fedora 7.
   </para>
-
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition("note", "Downloading Large Files", "If you intend to
-    download the Fedora DVD ISO image, keep in mind that not all file
-    downloading tools can accommodate files larger than 2 GiB in size.
-    <code>wget</code> 1.9.1-16 and above, <code>curl</code>, and
-    <code>ncftpget</code> do not have this limitation, and can
-    successfully download files larger than 2 GiB.
-    <emphasis role='strong'><ulink url='/wiki/BitTorrent'>BitTorrent</ulink></emphasis>
-    is another method for downloading large files. For information about
-    obtaining and using the torrent file, refer to
-    <ulink url='http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/'>http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/</ulink>.")]]
-  </para>
-
+  <note>
+    <title>Downloading Large Files</title>
+    <para>
+      If you intend to download the Fedora DVD ISO image, keep in mind that not
+      all file downloading tools can accommodate files larger than 2 GiB in
+      size. Tools without this limitation include <command>wget</command>
+      1.9.1-16 and above, <command>curl</command>, and
+      <command>ncftpget</command>. <application>BitTorrent</application> is
+      another method for downloading large files. For information about
+      obtaining and using the torrent file, refer to <ulink
+	url='http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/'>http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/</ulink>.
+    </para>
+  </note>
   <para>
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> tests the integrity of
+    <application>Anaconda</application> tests the integrity of
     installation media by default. This function works with the CD, DVD,
     hard drive ISO, and NFS ISO installation methods. The Fedora Project
     recommends that you test all installation media before starting the
     installation process and before reporting any installation-related
     bugs. Many of the bugs reported are actually due to
-    improperly-burned CDs. To use this test, type <code>linux
-    mediacheck</code> at the <code>boot:</code> prompt.
+    improperly-burned CDs. To use this test, type <command>linux
+    mediacheck</command> at the <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt.
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    The <code>mediacheck</code> function is highly sensitive, and may
+    The <option>mediacheck</option> function is highly sensitive, and may
     report some usable discs as faulty. This result is often caused by
     disc writing software that does not include padding when creating
-    discs from ISO files. For best results with <code>mediacheck</code>,
+    discs from ISO files. For best results with <option>mediacheck</option>,
     boot with the following option:
   </para>
-
-  <para/>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[linux ide=nodma mediacheck 
 ]]></screen>
 
   <para>
-    After you complete the <code>mediacheck</code> function
+    After you complete the <command>mediacheck</command> function
     successfully, reboot to return DMA mode to its normal state. On many
     systems, this results in a faster installation process from the
-    disc. You may skip the <code>mediacheck</code> option when
+    disc. You may skip the <option>mediacheck</option> option when
     rebooting.
   </para>
-
+  <important>
+    <title>BitTorrent Automatically Verifies File Integrity</title>
   <para>
-    [[Admonition("important", "Bit<code></code>Torrent Automatically
-    Verifies File Integrity", "If you use
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Bit<code></code>Torrent</emphasis>, any
+    If you use
+    <application>BitTorrent</application>, any
     files you download are automatically validated. If your file
     completes downloading, you do not need to check it. Once you burn
-    your CD, however, you should still use <code>mediacheck</code>.")]]
+    your CD, however, you should still use <command>mediacheck</command>.
   </para>
-
+</important>
   <para>
     You may perform memory testing before you install Fedora by entering
-    <code>memtest86</code> at the <code>boot:</code> prompt. This option
-    runs the <emphasis role='strong'>Memtest86</emphasis> standalone
+    <option>memtest86</option> at the <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt. This option
+    runs the <application>Memtest86</application> stand alone
     memory testing software in place of
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis>.
-    <emphasis role='strong'>Memtest86</emphasis> memory testing
-    continues until the <code>Esc</code> key is pressed.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    [[Admonition("note", "<code>Memtest86</code> Availability", "You
-    must boot from Installation Disc 1 or a rescue CD in order to use
-    this feature.")]]
+    <application>Anaconda</application>.
+    <application>Memtest86</application> memory testing
+    continues until the <keycap>Esc</keycap> key is pressed.
   </para>
-
+  <note>
+    <title>Memtest86 Availability</title>
+    <para>
+      You must boot from Installation Disc 1 or a rescue CD in order to use this
+      feature.
+    </para>
+  </note>
   <para>
     Fedora 7 supports graphical FTP and HTTP installations. However, the
     installer image must either fit in RAM or appear on local storage,
@@ -109,126 +100,132 @@
     192MiB of RAM, or which boot from Installation Disc 1, can use the
     graphical installer. Systems with 192MiB RAM or less fall back to
     using the text-based installer automatically. If you prefer to use
-    the text-based installer, type <code>linux text</code> at the
-    <code>boot:</code> prompt.
+    the text-based installer, type <command>linux text</command> at the
+    <prompt>boot:</prompt> prompt.
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Changes-in-Anaconda">
     <title>Changes in Anaconda</title>
     <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>New artwork for the installer. </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>New artwork for the installer.</para>
+      </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> now features the
+          <application>Anaconda</application> now features the
           ability to install packages from any
-          <code>yum</code>-compatible software repository.
+          <package>yum</package>-compatible software repository.
         </para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-      [[Admonition("note","Yum Repository Support","Only HTTP and FTP
-      repositories are supported; repositories on CDs or NFS are not
-      currently supported.")]]
-    </para>
+    <note>
+      <title>Yum Repository Support</title>
+      <para>
+	Only HTTP and FTP
+	repositories are supported; repositories on CDs or NFS are not
+	currently supported.
+      </para>
+    </note>    
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> uses SquashFS to
+          <application>Anaconda</application> uses SquashFS to
           compress and store packages on images.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> now supports
+          <application>Anaconda</application> now supports
           installation using IPv6.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda</emphasis> now supports
-          installation from <ulink url='/wiki/FireWire'>FireWire</ulink>
+          <application>Anaconda</application> now supports
+          installation from FireWire
           and USB storage devices.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis role='strong'>Anaconda's</emphasis> backend,
-          <code>yum</code>, has been updated to 3.0.x.
+          <application>Anaconda's</application> backend,
+          <command>yum</command>, has been updated to 3.0.x.
         </para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           The installer provides enhanced support for the
-          <code>ppc64</code> architecture.
+          ppc64 architecture.
         </para>
       </listitem>
-      <listitem>The installer now supports Apple Macintosh systems with Intel processors. </listitem>
-      <listitem>The installer now supports multipathing. </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>The installer now supports Apple Macintosh systems with Intel
+	processors.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>The installer now supports multipathing.</para>
+      </listitem>
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Vera fonts are retired and replaced by
-          <ulink url='/wiki/DejaVu'>DejaVu</ulink> as default for the
+          DejaVu as default for the
           installer.
         </para>
       </listitem>
-      <listitem>The installer is now translated in Greek, Kannada, Malayalam, Marathi and Oriya. </listitem>
+      <listitem>The installer is now translated in Greek, Kannada, Malayalam,
+      Marathi, and Oriya. </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Kickstart-Changes">
     <title>Kickstart Changes</title>
     <para>
-      Three new <code>kickstart</code> keywords have been added.
+      Three new <command>kickstart</command> keywords have been added.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <code>repo --name=<repoid>
-      [--baseurl=<url>|--mirrorlist=<url>] </code>
+      <option>repo --name=<repoid>
+      [--baseurl=<url>|--mirrorlist=<url>]</option>
     </para>
     <para>
-      The keyword <code>repo</code> specifies additional package
+      The keyword <option>repo</option> specifies additional package
       repositories to use for installation. The parameter
-      <code>baseurl</code> specifies the URL for the repository, while
-      <code>mirrorlist</code> specifies a list of mirrors. One and only
+      <parameter>baseurl</parameter> specifies the URL for the repository, while
+      <parameter>mirrorlist</parameter> specifies a list of mirrors. One and only
       one of these options may be specified per repository definition.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <code>services [--disabled=<list>] [--enabled=<list>]
-      </code>
+      <option>services [--disabled=<list>] [--enabled=<list>]
+      </option>
     </para>
     <para>
-      The keyword <code>services</code> modifies the default set of
+      The keyword <option>services</option> modifies the default set of
       services that are started in the default runlevel. The parameters
-      <code>enabled</code> and <code>disabled</code> take
-      comma-separated lists, with <code>enabled</code> services taking
+      <parameter>enabled</parameter> and <parameter>disabled</parameter> take
+      comma-separated lists, with <parameter>enabled</parameter> services taking
       priority.
     </para>
     <para>
-      <code>user --name=<username> [--groups=<list>]
-      [--homedir=<homedir>] [--password=<password>] [--iscrypted]
-      [--shell=<shell>] [--uid=<uid>] </code>
+      <option>user --name=<username> [--groups=<list>]
+      [--homedir=<homedir>] [--password=<password>] [--iscrypted]
+      [--shell=<shell>] [--uid=<uid>]</option>
     </para>
     <para>
-      The keyword <code>user</code> creates a new user with the
-      specified parameters. The parameter <code>name</code> is required;
+      The keyword <option>user</option> creates a new user with the
+      specified parameters. The parameter <parameter>name</parameter> is required;
       all other parameters are optional.
     </para>
     <para>
-      More documentation on <code>kickstart</code> is available in the
-      <code>anaconda</code> package. To install it, run the command
-      <code>su -c 'yum install anaconda'</code> and read the
-      <code>/usr/share/doc/anaconda*/kickstart-docs.txt</code> file for
+      More documentation on <command>kickstart</command> is available in the
+      <package>anaconda</package> package. To install it, run the command
+      <command>su -c 'yum install anaconda'</command> and read the
+      <filename>/usr/share/doc/anaconda*/kickstart-docs.txt</filename> file for
       more information.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="sn-Installation-Related-Issues">
     <title>Installation Related Issues</title>
-    <para/>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Sony-VAIO-Notebooks">
       <title>Sony VAIO Notebooks</title>
       <para>
         Some Sony VAIO notebook systems may experience problems
@@ -236,36 +233,32 @@
         installation process and add the following option to the boot
         command line:
       </para>
-      <para/>
 <screen><![CDATA[pci=off ide1=0x180,0x386 
 ]]></screen>
       <para>
         Installation should proceed normally, and any devices not
         detected are configured the first time Fedora is booted.
       </para>
-      <para/>
     </section>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-IDE-RAID">
       <title>IDE RAID</title>
       <para>
         Not all IDE RAID controllers are supported. If your RAID
-        controller is not yet supported by <code>dmraid</code>, you may
+        controller is not yet supported by <package>dmraid</package>, you may
         combine drives into RAID arrays by configuring Linux software
         RAID. For supported controllers, configure the RAID functions in
         the computer BIOS.
       </para>
-      <para/>
     </section>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Multiple-NICs-and-PXE-Installation">
       <title>Multiple NICs and PXE Installation</title>
       <para>
         Some servers with multiple network interfaces may not assign
         eth0 to the first network interface as BIOS knows it, which can
         cause the installer to try using a different network interface
         than was used by PXE. To change this behavior, use the following
-        in pxelinux.cfg/* config files:
+        in <filename>pxelinux.cfg/*</filename> config files:
       </para>
-      <para/>
 <screen><![CDATA[IPAPPEND 2 
 APPEND ksdevice=bootif
 ]]></screen>
@@ -280,20 +273,18 @@
         This option causes the installer to use the first network device
         it finds that is linked to a network switch.
       </para>
-      <para/>
     </section>
-    <section>
+    <section id="sn-Compaq-DL360-with-Smart-Array">
       <title>Compaq DL360 with Smart Array</title>
       <para>
         If you have difficulties with this installation not detecting
-        the Smart Array card, try entering <code>linux isa</code> on the
+        the Smart Array card, try entering <command>linux isa</command> on the
         installer prompt. This lets you manually select the card.
       </para>
-      <para/>
     </section>
   </section>
 
-  <section>
+  <section id="Upgrade-Related-Issues">
     <title>Upgrade Related Issues</title>
     <para>
       Refer to
@@ -312,28 +303,32 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
           Before you upgrade, back up the system completely. In
-          particular, preserve <code>/etc</code>, <code>/home</code>,
-          and possibly <code>/opt</code> and <code>/usr/local</code> if
+          particular, preserve <filename>/etc</filename>, <filename>/home</filename>,
+          and possibly <filename>/opt</filename> and <filename>/usr/local</filename> if
           customized packages are installed there. You may wish to use a
           multi-boot approach with a "clone" of the old installation on
           alternate partition(s) as a fallback. In that case, create
           alternate boot media, such as a GRUB boot floppy.
         </para>
+	<tip>
+	  <title>System Configuration Backups</title>
+	  <para>
+	    Backups of configurations in <filename>/etc</filename> are also
+	    useful in reconstructing system settings after a fresh installation.
+	  </para>
+	</tip>
       </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    <para>
-      [[Admonition("important", "System Configuration Backups", "Backups
-      of configurations in <code>/etc</code> are also useful in
-      reconstructing system settings after a fresh installation.")]]
-    </para>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>After you complete the upgrade, run the following command: </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
-    <para/>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>	After you complete the upgrade, run the following
+	command:</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
 <screen><![CDATA[rpm -qa --last > RPMS_by_Install_Time.txt 
 ]]></screen>
-    <itemizedlist>
-      <listitem>Inspect the end of the output for packages that pre-date the upgrade.  Remove or upgrade those packages from third-party repositories, or otherwise deal with them as necessary. </listitem>
+      <para>Inspect the end of the output for packages that pre-date the
+      upgrade.  Remove or upgrade those packages from third-party repositories,
+      or otherwise deal with them as necessary.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
 </section>


Index: Java.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Java.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.12
retrieving revision 1.13
diff -u -r1.12 -r1.13
--- Java.xml	4 Apr 2007 08:54:16 -0000	1.12
+++ Java.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.13
@@ -110,7 +110,6 @@
     <para>
       Refer to the latest release notes pertaining to Eclipse at
       <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Devel/Tools/Eclipse'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Beats/Devel/Tools/Eclipse</ulink>.
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-Maven-v2">


Index: Kernel.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Kernel.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.19
retrieving revision 1.20
diff -u -r1.19 -r1.20
--- Kernel.xml	4 Apr 2007 08:54:16 -0000	1.19
+++ Kernel.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.20
@@ -74,8 +74,7 @@
       To obtain a list of these patches, download the source RPM package
       and run the following command against it:
     </para>
-    <para/>
-<screen><![CDATA[rpm -qpl kernel-<version>.src.rpm 
+    <screen><![CDATA[rpm -qpl kernel-<version>.src.rpm 
 ]]></screen>
   </section>
 
@@ -98,8 +97,7 @@
       Customizations made for the Fedora version are available from <ulink
 	url='http://cvs.fedoraproject.org'>http://cvs.fedoraproject.org</ulink>.
     </para>
-    <para/>
-  </section>
+      </section>
 
   <section id="sn-Kernel-Flavors">
     <title>Kernel Flavors</title>
@@ -144,8 +142,7 @@
       <package>/usr/src/kernels/<version>-[PAE|xen|kdump]-<arch>/</package>
       tree. Use the following command:
     </para>
-    <para/>
-<screen><![CDATA[su -c 'yum install kernel-{PAE,xen,kdump}-devel' 
+    <screen><![CDATA[su -c 'yum install kernel-{PAE,xen,kdump}-devel' 
 ]]></screen>
     <para>
       Select one or more of these flavors, separated by commas and no


Index: Live.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- Live.xml	4 Apr 2007 07:18:07 -0000	1.2
+++ Live.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.3
@@ -53,9 +53,8 @@
       hard drive, click on the <guilabel>Install to Hard
       Drive</guilabel> icon on the desktop.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
-
+  
   <section id="sn-Other-Methods-of-Booting">
     <title>Other Methods of Booting</title>
     <para>
@@ -64,7 +63,6 @@
       from the development repository. Then, run the
       <command>livecd-iso-to-stick</command> script:
     </para>
-    <para/>
 <screen><![CDATA[/usr/bin/livecd-iso-to-stick /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1 
 ]]></screen>
     <para>
@@ -76,7 +74,6 @@
       you currently have on your USB stick <emphasis>is
       preserved</emphasis>.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-Differences-From-a-Regular-Fedora-Install">


Index: OverView.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/OverView.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- OverView.xml	4 Apr 2007 05:58:07 -0000	1.15
+++ OverView.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.16
@@ -11,7 +11,6 @@
       exciting new release at
       <ulink url='http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Tours/Fedora7'>http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Tours/Fedora7</ulink>.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-New-in-Fedora">


Index: PackageChanges.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/PackageChanges.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- PackageChanges.xml	4 Apr 2007 01:29:33 -0000	1.13
+++ PackageChanges.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.14
@@ -2,34 +2,22 @@
 <!DOCTYPE section PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN" "http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd">
 
 <section id="sn-PackageChanges">
-  <articleinfo>
-    <title>Docs/Beats/PackageChanges</title>
-  </articleinfo>
 
   <title>Package Changes</title>
 
-  <para></para>
-
-  <para/>
-
-  <para/>
-
-  <para/>
-
+  <note>
+    <title>This list is automatically generated</title>
   <para>
-    [[Admonition("note", "This list is automatically generated", "This
-    list is automatically generated. It is not a good choice for
-    translation.")]]
+    This list is automatically generated. It is not a good choice for
+    translation.
   </para>
-
+</note>
   <para>
-    <emphasis>04-Apr-2007 This content is not generated for the XML
+    <emphasis>04-Apr-2007  This content is not generated for the XML
     output for translation. Insert this content before building the
     release notes for Fedora 7 test4.</emphasis>
   </para>
 
-  <para></para>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[This list was made using the {{{treediff}}} utility, ran as {{{treediff newtree oldtree}}} against the rawhide tree of 28 Feb. 2006.
 ]]></screen>
 
@@ -42,8 +30,6 @@
     <ulink url='http://distrowatch.com/fedora'>http://distrowatch.com/fedora</ulink>.
   </para>
 
-  <para></para>
-
 <screen><![CDATA[Insert treediff list here.
 ]]></screen>
 </section>


Index: PackageNotes.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/PackageNotes.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- PackageNotes.xml	4 Apr 2007 05:15:02 -0000	1.10
+++ PackageNotes.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.11
@@ -11,8 +11,6 @@
     that are shown in the installation system.
   </para>
 
-  <para/>
-
   <section id="sn-Licensing-Audit">
     <title>Licensing Audit</title>
     <para>
@@ -27,7 +25,6 @@
 
   <section id="sn-System-Tools">
     <title>System Tools</title>
-    <para/>
     <section>
       <title>apcupsd</title>
       <para>
@@ -44,7 +41,6 @@
 
   <section id="sn-Engineering-and-Scientific">
     <title>Engineering and Scientific</title>
-    <para/>
     <section>
       <title>paraview</title>
       <para>


Index: Xorg.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Xorg.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.13
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.13 -r1.14
--- Xorg.xml	4 Apr 2007 03:50:31 -0000	1.13
+++ Xorg.xml	4 Apr 2007 11:53:57 -0000	1.14
@@ -40,7 +40,6 @@
       present, X also automatically detects the appropriate driver, and assumes
       a 105-key US keyboard layout.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-"Intel-Driver-Notes">
@@ -79,7 +78,6 @@
       success reports, various chipsets may be switched to use the
       <filename>intel</filename> driver by default.
     </para>
-    <para/>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-Third-Party-Video-Drivers">




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