install-guide/devel/en_US beginninginstallation.xml, 1.3, 1.4 other-instmethods.xml, 1.2, 1.3

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun Apr 29 18:35:02 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv17433

Modified Files:
	beginninginstallation.xml other-instmethods.xml 
Log Message:
Remove dead xref elements.  Instructions for locating mirrors will be included in the network installation chapter where they require less "page flipping."


Index: beginninginstallation.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- beginninginstallation.xml	7 Oct 2006 17:20:38 -0000	1.3
+++ beginninginstallation.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:35:00 -0000	1.4
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
     to start the installation program.  Once you start the installation
     program, you may be able to install from a completely different
     piece of media.  For more information on finding and creating
-    bootable media, refer to <xref linkend="ch-preparing-media"/>.
+    bootable media, refer to <xref linkend="ch-new-users"/>.
   </para>
 
   <para>


Index: other-instmethods.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/other-instmethods.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- other-instmethods.xml	27 Aug 2006 18:36:39 -0000	1.2
+++ other-instmethods.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:35:00 -0000	1.3
@@ -281,10 +281,7 @@
 
     <para>
       You can install from a Web, FTP, or NFS server either on your
-      local network or, if you are connected, on the Internet.  To use a
-      public server, or mirror website, refer to <xref
-      linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation"/> for information on
-      valid server names and directory paths.
+      local network or, if you are connected, on the Internet.
     </para>
     <note>
       <title>Large Download</title>
@@ -363,7 +360,7 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-ftp-install-settings">
-    <title> FTP Installation Setup</title>
+    <title>FTP Installation Setup</title>
 
     <para>
       To install from a FTP server, select <guilabel>FTP</guilabel> from
@@ -391,15 +388,11 @@
     </figure>
     <para>
       Enter the name or IP address of the FTP server and the directory
-      where the installation files reside.  Refer to <xref
-      linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation"/> for information on
-      how to locate a FTP mirror and enter its information here.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      The FTP service setup dialog also has a <guilabel>Use
-	non-anonymous ftp</guilabel> option. If your FTP server does not
-      provide anonymous access, select this check box.  You must have an
-      account on the FTP server to use this option.
+      where the installation files reside.  The FTP service setup dialog
+      also has a <guilabel>Use non-anonymous ftp</guilabel> option. If
+      your FTP server does not provide anonymous access, select this
+      check box.  You must have an account on the FTP server to use this
+      option.
     </para>
     <para>
       Select <guibutton>OK</guibutton> to continue.  If you are using the
@@ -462,12 +455,8 @@
 
     <para>
       Enter the name or IP address of the Web server and the directory
-      where the installation files reside.  Refer to <xref
-      linkend="sn-installing-networkinstallation"/> for information on
-      how to locate a Web mirror and enter its information here.
-    </para>
-    <para>
-      Select <guilabel>OK</guilabel> to continue.  Proceed with <xref
+      where the installation files reside.  Select
+      <guilabel>OK</guilabel> to continue.  Proceed with <xref
 	linkend="ch-welcome"/>.
     </para>
   </section>




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