translation-guide-windows/en_US rpm-info.xml, 1.2, 1.3 translate-windows.xml, 1.3, 1.4
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue Aug 14 15:16:02 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/translation-guide-windows/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4894/en_US
Modified Files:
rpm-info.xml translate-windows.xml
Log Message:
* 0.1.6
- Numerous style and grammar edits
- DocBook usage edits (sectN -> section)
- Procedures use DocBook <procedure> elements
Index: rpm-info.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-guide-windows/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- rpm-info.xml 15 Jul 2007 13:50:16 -0000 1.2
+++ rpm-info.xml 14 Aug 2007 15:15:59 -0000 1.3
@@ -23,6 +23,10 @@
<title>Translate Fedora in Microsoft Windows</title>
<desc>How to translate Fedora resources using Microsoft Windows</desc>
<changelog order="newest-first">
+ <revision date="2007-08-14" number="0.1.6">
+ <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
+ <details>Editorial changes throughout for style, grammar, usage</details>
+ </revision>
<revision date="2007-07-15" number="0.1.5">
<author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
<details>Update file sources to current FDP standards</details>
View full diff with command:
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Index: translate-windows.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/translation-guide-windows/en_US/translate-windows.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- translate-windows.xml 15 Jul 2007 14:00:57 -0000 1.3
+++ translate-windows.xml 14 Aug 2007 15:15:59 -0000 1.4
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
<xi:fallback>rpm-info.xml file is missing</xi:fallback>
</xi:include>
- <sect1 id="s1-intro">
+ <section id="s1-intro">
<title>Introduction</title>
<indexterm>
@@ -21,52 +21,50 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- To join the Fedora translation team and work with people around
- the world is easy in <trademark
- class="registered">Microsoft</trademark> <trademark
- class="registered">Windows</trademark> as well. To achieve this,
- several tools are needed:
+ People who use <trademark class="registered">Microsoft</trademark>
+ <trademark class="registered">Windows</trademark> can also join
+ the Fedora translation team and work with people around the world.
+ To participate, you need several tools:
</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
<para>
- A Web Browser that supports cookies
+ A web browser that supports cookies
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
A <application>Concurrent Versions System</application>
- (<acronym>CVS</acronym>) client — This artical uses
- <application>TortoiseCVS</application>
+ (<acronym>CVS</acronym>) client. This article uses
+ <application>TortoiseCVS</application>.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- An editor for <filename>.po</filename> files — This
- article uses <application>poEdit</application>
+ An editor for <filename>.po</filename> files. This
+ article uses <application>poEdit</application>.
</para>
</listitem>
<listitem>
<para>
- A Secury Shell (<acronym>ssh</acronym>) client — This
- article uses <application>puttygen</application> which is a
- free utility that generates personalized digital ID, using
- public key infrastructure. This utility is bundled within
- <application>TortoiseCVS</application>
+ A Secure Shell (<acronym>ssh</acronym>) client. This article
+ uses <application>puttygen</application>, a free utility that
+ generates a personalized digital ID using a public key
+ infrastructure. This utility is bundled within
+ <application>TortoiseCVS</application>.
</para>
</listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>
- This article will introduce you where to find and download these
- tools, how to install and setup, and even a brief description of
- how to use them.
+ This article shows you where to find and download these tools, how
+ to install and configure them, and how to use them.
</para>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
- <sect1 id="s1-cvs">
+ <section id="s1-cvs">
<title>Download and Install
<application>TortoiseCVS</application></title>
@@ -80,9 +78,9 @@
</indexterm>
<para>
- To download <application>TortoiseCVS</application>, go to <ulink
+ To download <application>TortoiseCVS</application>, visit <ulink
url="http://www.tortoisecvs.org/download.shtml">http://www.tortoisecvs.org/download.shtml</ulink>.
- For demonstration purpose, this artical uses
+ For demonstration purposes, this article uses
<filename>TortoiseCVS-1.6.14</filename>.
</para>
@@ -92,291 +90,288 @@
the installation process step by step:
</para>
- <itemizedlist>
- <listitem>
+ <procedure>
+ <step>
<para>
- Step 1: Welcome to TortoiseCVS setup (as shown in
- <xref linkend="fig-tortoise-setup1"/>). Press
- <guibutton>Next></guibutton> to continue.
+ The <guilabel>Welcome to TortoiseCVS setup</guilabel> screen
+ appears, as shown in
+ <xref linkend="fig-tortoise-setup1"/>. Press
+ <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to continue.
</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
+ <figure id="fig-tortoise-setup1">
+ <title>Welcome to TortoiseCVS setup</title>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image001.eps"
+ format="EPS"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image001.jpg"
+ format="JPG"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <textobject>
+ <phrase>
+ Welcome to TortoiseCVS setup.
+ </phrase>
+ </textobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </figure>
+ </step>
+ <step>
<para>
- Step 2: Select destination directory (as shown in <xref
- linkend="fig-tortoise-setup2"/>). Customize your directory
- or press <guibutton>Next></guibutton> to accept the default
+ Select a destination directory, as shown in <xref
+ linkend="fig-tortoise-setup2"/>. Customize your directory or
+ press <guibutton>Next</guibutton> to accept the default
setting.
</para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
+ <figure id="fig-tortoise-setup2">
+ <title>Select Destination Directory</title>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image002.eps"
+ format="EPS"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image002.jpg"
+ format="JPG"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <textobject>
+ <phrase>
+ Select destination directory.
+ </phrase>
+ </textobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </figure>
+ </step>
+ <step>
<para>
- Step 3: Select components (as shown in <xref
- linkend="fig-tortoise-setup3"/>). To accept
- <emphasis>full</emphasis> installation, press
- <guibutton>Next></guibutton>.
- </para>
- </listitem>
- <listitem>
+ Select components, as shown in <xref
+ linkend="fig-tortoise-setup3"/>. To accept the default
+ <guilabel>full</guilabel> installation, press
+ <guibutton>Next</guibutton>.</para>
+ <figure id="fig-tortoise-setup3">
+ <title>Select Components</title>
+ <mediaobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image003.eps"
+ format="EPS"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <imageobject>
+ <imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/image003.jpg"
+ format="JPG"/>
+ </imageobject>
+ <textobject>
+ <phrase>
+ Select components.
+ </phrase>
+ </textobject>
+ </mediaobject>
+ </figure>
[...2105 lines suppressed...]
- format="EPS"/>
+ format="EPS"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="./figs/tortoise/cvs_commit.jpg"
- format="JPG"/>
+ format="JPG"/>
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<phrase>
@@ -1528,9 +1539,9 @@
</figure>
<para>
- Again, you'll be prompted the passphrase of your private key.
- After files are successfully uploaded to server, you will see a
- screen similar to <xref
+ A prompt appears for the passphrase of your private key. After
+ files are successfully uploaded to server, a screen appears
+ similar to <xref
linkend="fig-cycle-11"/>.
</para>
<figure id="fig-cycle-11">
@@ -1538,11 +1549,11 @@
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="./figs/cycle/cvs_up_commit.eps"
- format="EPS"/>
+ format="EPS"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="./figs/cycle/cvs_up_commit.jpg"
- format="JPG"/>
+ format="JPG"/>
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<phrase>
@@ -1551,23 +1562,22 @@
</textobject>
</mediaobject>
</figure>
- </sect2>
+ </section>
- <sect2 id="s2-cycle-5">
- <title> Phase 5 </title>
+ <section id="s2-cycle-5">
+ <title>Phase 5</title>
<indexterm>
<primary>Status page</primary>
<secondary>release</secondary>
</indexterm>
<para>
- The phase is an optional one, only occurs when you decide to
- stop working on a file before it's fully translated. For
- example, you may go on a holiday and don't want to keep working
- on a file but would like others to be able to resume the work.
- To do so, you need to go to the Fedora status page, find the
- package you had taken, and click the package name to view the
- detail. On the bottom of that page, you would see the
- <guibutton>Release</guibutton> link, as shown in <xref
+ This phase is optional, and only occurs when you stop working on
+ a file before it is fully translated. For example, you may go on
+ a holiday, but would like others to be able to resume the work.
+ To do so, visit the Fedora status page, find the package you
+ previously took, and click the package name to view the detail.
+ On the bottom of that page, a <guibutton>Release</guibutton>
+ link appears, as shown in <xref
linkend="fig-cycle-12"/>.
</para>
<figure id="fig-cycle-12">
@@ -1575,11 +1585,11 @@
<mediaobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="./figs/cycle/fedora_released.eps"
- format="EPS"/>
+ format="EPS"/>
</imageobject>
<imageobject>
<imagedata fileref="./figs/cycle/fedora_released.jpg"
- format="JPG"/>
+ format="JPG"/>
</imageobject>
<textobject>
<phrase>
@@ -1594,12 +1604,12 @@
translation. We do hope you enjoy being with part of the open
source community and continue lending your support.
</para>
- </sect2>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
+ </section>
- <sect1 id="s1-resource">
+ <section id="s1-resource">
<title>Other Resources</title>
- <sect2 id="s2-resource-website">
+ <section id="s2-resource-website">
<title> Related Websites </title>
<indexterm>
<primary>resource</primary>
@@ -1608,76 +1618,71 @@
<variablelist>
<varlistentry>
- <term> Official website of
+ <term>Official website of
<application>TortoiseCVS</application></term>
<listitem>
<para>
- <ulink
- url="http://www.tortoisecvs.org/">http://www.tortoisecvs.org/</ulink>
+ <ulink url="http://www.tortoisecvs.org/"/>
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
- <term> Official website of
+ <term>Official website of
<application>poEdit</application></term>
<listitem>
<para>
- <ulink
- url="http://poedit.sourceforge.net/">http://poedit.sourceforge.net/</ulink>
+ <ulink url="http://poedit.sourceforge.net/"/>
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
- <term> Official website of
+ <term>Official website of
<application>PuTTY</application></term>
<listitem>
<para>
<ulink
- url="http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~sgtatham/putty/">http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~sgtatham/putty/</ulink>
+ url="http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~sgtatham/putty/"/>
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
- <term> <application>WinCvs</application> CVS Client </term>
+ <term><application>WinCvs</application> CVS Client</term>
<listitem>
<para>
<application>WinCvs</application> is an alternative CVS
client you can use. The following article describes its
- installation steps in detail. <ulink
- url="http://sourceforge.net/docman/display_doc.php?docid=766&group_id=1">http://sourceforge.net/docman/display_doc.php?docid=766&group_id=1</ulink>
+ installation steps in detail: <ulink
+ url="http://sourceforge.net/docman/display_doc.php?docid=766&group_id=1"/>
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>
- <term> A good CVS guide</term>
+ <term>A good CVS guide</term>
<listitem>
<para>
<ulink
- url="http://www.loria.fr/~molli/cvs/doc/cvs_toc.html">http://www.loria.fr/~molli/cvs/doc/cvs_toc.html</ulink>
+ url="http://www.loria.fr/~molli/cvs/doc/cvs_toc.html"/>
</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
</variablelist>
- </sect2>
+ </section>
- <sect2 id="s2-resource-feedback">
- <title> Your Feedback </title>
+ <section id="s2-resource-feedback">
+ <title>Your Feedback</title>
<para>
- Your feedback is always welcome! If you have spotted any typo or
- errors, please contact <ulink
+ Your feedback is always welcome. If you spot any typo or errors
+ in this document, please contact <ulink
url="mailto:ccheng at redhat.com?subject=[Fedora translation in
Windows] ">Chester Cheng</ulink>, or simply discuss it through
<ulink
url="http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-trans-list">
- Fedora Translation List</ulink>.
- </para>
-
- <para>
- Hope this article has helped you to set things up. Looking
- forward to hearing from you!
+ Fedora Translation List</ulink>. You can also file a bug in
+ &BZ; against the product "&FED; Documentation," and the
+ component "translation-guide-windows."
</para>
- </sect2>
- </sect1>
+ </section>
+ </section>
<index id="generated-index"></index>
</article>
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