selinux-faq/F-8/en_US selinux-faq.xml,1.3,1.4

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/selinux-faq/F-8/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv31201

Modified Files:
	selinux-faq.xml 
Log Message:
Correct some grammar and style problems.



Index: selinux-faq.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/selinux-faq/F-8/en_US/selinux-faq.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- selinux-faq.xml	18 Nov 2007 07:40:48 -0000	1.3
+++ selinux-faq.xml	23 Dec 2007 20:26:28 -0000	1.4
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
       <title>This FAQ is specific to &FC; &LOCALVER;</title>
       <para>
         If you are looking for the FAQ for other versions of &FC;, refer to
-	<ulink url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq/"/>.
+	<ulink url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/selinux-faq/"/>.
       </para>
     </note>
     <para>
@@ -115,18 +115,20 @@
       <title>Making changes/additions to the &FED; &SEL; FAQ</title>
       <para>
         This FAQ is available at <ulink
-          url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq-fc8/">http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq-fc8/</ulink>.
+          url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/selinux-faq/"/>.
       </para>
       <para>
         For changes or additions to the &FED; &SEL; FAQ, use this <ulink
-          url="&BUG-URL;">bugzilla template</ulink>, which pre-fills most of the
-        bug report. Patches should be a <command>diff -u</command> against the
-        XML, which is available from CVS (refer to <ulink
-          url="http://fedora.redhat.com/projects/docs/" /> for details on
-        obtaining the fedora-docs/selinux-faq module from anonymous CVS; you can
-        get just the <filename>fedora-docs/selinux-faq</filename> module if you
-        don't want the entire <filename>fedora-docs</filename> tree.) Otherwise,
-        plain text showing before and after is sufficient.
+	  url="&BUG-URL;">bugzilla template</ulink>, which pre-fills
+	most of the bug report. Patches should be a <command>diff
+	  -u</command> against the XML, which is available from CVS
+	(refer to <ulink
+	  url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/documentation-guide" /> for
+	details on obtaining the fedora-docs/selinux-faq module from
+	anonymous CVS; you can get just the
+	<filename>fedora-docs/selinux-faq</filename> module if you don't
+	want the entire <filename>fedora-docs</filename> tree.)
+	Otherwise, plain text showing before and after is sufficient.
       </para>
       <para>
 	For a list of all bug reports filed against this FAQ, refer to <ulink
@@ -940,15 +942,13 @@
 	      </para>
 	    </note>
 	    <para>
-	    In &FED; 8 there is the introduction of a graphical interface that 
-	    steps you through creating policies.  To install the graphical 
-	    <screen>
-	    <computeroutput>$ su -c 'yum install selinux-polgengui'
-	    Password:</computeroutput>
-	    </screen>
+	      &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; introduces a graphical tool that
+	      steps you through creating policies.  To install the
+	      graphical tool, run the following command:
+	      <screen><command>su -c 'yum install selinux-polgengui'</command></screen>
 	    </para>
 	    <para>
-	    The Policy Generation Graphical Tool is intended to make it easier
+	    The Policy Generation Graphical Tool makes it easier
 	    to create policies to restrict applications and users using &SEL;.
 	    The process described earlier can be completed using the interface
 	    to make your system more or less restrictive for users and 
@@ -1342,7 +1342,7 @@
 	      <filename>/etc/httpd/conf/httpd.conf</filename>.  This process
 	      only covers serving static Web content.  For more information
 	      about &APACHE; and &SEL;, refer to <ulink
-		url="http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-apache-fc3/" />.
+		url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/selinux-apache-fc3/" />.
             </para>
             <procedure>
               <step>
@@ -1644,13 +1644,15 @@
 	      install and enable the audit daemon, in which case AVC
 	      messages will be in
 	      <filename>/var/log/audit/audit.log</filename>.
-	      In &FED; 7 &SEL; you can install setroubleshoot browser which 
+	      &FC; 7 introduced the <package>setroubleshoot</package> browser, which 
 	      enables you to see denials in a graphical browser.  To install
-	      setroubleshoot browser run the following in the console or 
-	      using add/remove programs in the application menu. 
-	      <command>su -c 'yum install setroubleshoot'</command> some useful 
-	      plugins can be added by installing setroubleshoot plugins.
-	      <command>su -c 'yum install setroublshoot-plugins'</command>
+	      <package>setroubleshoot</package>, run the
+	      <application>Add/Remove Programs</application> tool or use
+	      the following command: 
+	      <screen><command>su -c 'yum install setroubleshoot'</command></screen> 
+	      You can add plugins by installing the
+	      <package>setroubleshoot-plugins</package> package:
+	      <screen><command>su -c 'yum install setroublshoot-plugins'</command></screen>
             </para>
           </answer>
         </qandaentry>