release-notes/devel/en_US Desktop.xml, 1.17, 1.18 Installer.xml, 1.20, 1.21 Live.xml, 1.7, 1.8 RELEASE-NOTES.xml, 1.14, 1.15 Virtualization.xml, 1.17, 1.18

[Paul W. Frields (pfrields)]

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv15842/devel/en_US

Modified Files:
	Desktop.xml Installer.xml Live.xml RELEASE-NOTES.xml 
	Virtualization.xml 
Log Message:
Import latest changes into devel branch as well


Index: Desktop.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Desktop.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- Desktop.xml	31 May 2007 03:10:29 -0000	1.17
+++ Desktop.xml	22 Jun 2007 02:14:14 -0000	1.18
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     <para>If you do not want default folders to be created, remove the
-      <package>xdg-user-dirs</package> package and associated
+      <package>xdg-user-dirs-gtk</package> package and associated
       dependencies.</para>
     <para><ulink
 	url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software_2fxdg_2duser_2ddirs"/></para>


Index: Installer.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Installer.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.20
retrieving revision 1.21
diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21
--- Installer.xml	31 May 2007 15:23:09 -0000	1.20
+++ Installer.xml	22 Jun 2007 02:14:14 -0000	1.21
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Use of <filename class="devicefile">/dev/hdX</filename> is
-	  deprecated on i386 and x86_64 for IDE drives, and has
+	  deprecated on i386 and and x86_64 for IDE drives, and has
 	  changed to <filename class="devicefile">/dev/sdX</filename>
 	  except on PPC. See note about the importance of labeling
 	  devices for upgrades from FC6.</para>
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
 	  file must also be modified:</para>
 	<screen><![CDATA[su -c 'gedit /boot/grub/grub.conf']]></screen>
 	<para>A matching example kernel grub line is:</para>
-	<screen><![CDATA[kernel /vmlinuz-2.6.20-1.2948.fc6 ro root=f7-slash rhgb quiet]]></screen>
+	<screen><![CDATA[kernel /vmlinuz-2.6.20-1.2948.fc6 ro root=LABEL=f7-slash rhgb quiet]]></screen>
       </section>
       <section id="test-changed-labels">
 	<title>Test changes made to labels</title>
@@ -319,9 +319,13 @@
       <listitem>
 <screen><![CDATA[rpm -qa --last > RPMS_by_Install_Time.txt 
 ]]></screen>
-      <para>Inspect the end of the output for packages that pre-date the
-      upgrade.  Remove or upgrade those packages from third-party repositories,
-      or otherwise deal with them as necessary.</para>
+	  <para>Inspect the end of the output for packages that pre-date
+	    the upgrade.  Remove or upgrade those packages from
+	    third-party repositories, or otherwise deal with them as
+	    necessary. Some previously installed packages may no longer
+	    be available in any configured repository. To list of all
+	    these packages, use the following command:</para>
+<screen><![CDATA[su -c 'yum list extras']]></screen>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
     </section>


Index: Live.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -r1.7 -r1.8
--- Live.xml	31 May 2007 01:52:35 -0000	1.7
+++ Live.xml	22 Jun 2007 02:14:14 -0000	1.8
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
       <listitem>
 	<para>Fedora 7 x86_64 Desktop DVD.  This is a DVD sized image
 	  for x86_64 machines.  The feature set is the same as in the
-	  i386 Desktop CD and includes multilib packages.</para>
+	  i686 Desktop CD and includes multilib packages.</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
 	<para>Fedora 7 i686 KDE Desktop CD.  This is a CD sized image
@@ -54,19 +54,24 @@
 	  <systemitem>i586</systemitem>, you must use the classic
 	  installation method.</para>
       </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+	<para>Fedora 7 x86_64 KDE Desktop DVD. This is a DVD sized image
+	  for x86_64 machines. The feature set is the same as in the
+	  i686 KDE Desktop CD and includes multilib packages.</para>
+      </listitem>
     </orderedlist>
   </section>
 
   <section id="sn-Usage-Information">
     <title>Usage Information</title>
     <para>
-      The Live images should boot on any machine that supports booting
-      from CD-ROM. Upon booting the CD, you can log in and use the
-      desktop environment as the <systemitem
-	class="username">fedora</systemitem> user.  Leave the password
-      prompt blank to login.  The Live images do not automatically login
-      so users can select a preferred language.  After logging in, if
-      you wish to install the contents of the live image to your hard
+      To boot from the Live image, insert it into your computer and
+      restart. To log in and use the desktop environment, enter the
+      username <systemitem class="username">fedora</systemitem>. Hit
+      <keycap>Enter</keycap> at the password prompt, since there is no
+      password on this account. The Live images do not automatically
+      login so users can select a preferred language. After logging in,
+      if you wish to install the contents of the live image to your hard
       drive, click on the <guilabel>Install to Hard Drive</guilabel>
       icon on the desktop.
     </para>
@@ -83,9 +88,9 @@
       Another way to use these Live images is to put them on a USB
       stick. To do this, install the <package>livecd-tools</package> package
       from the development repository. Then, run the
-      <command>livecd-iso-to-stick</command> script:
+      <command>livecd-iso-to-disk</command> script:
     </para>
-    <screen><![CDATA[/usr/bin/livecd-iso-to-stick /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1]]></screen>
+    <screen><![CDATA[/usr/bin/livecd-iso-to-disk /path/to/live.iso /dev/sdb1]]></screen>
     <para>
       Replace <replaceable>/dev/sdb1</replaceable> with the partition where
       you want to put the image.




Index: Virtualization.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Virtualization.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.17
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- Virtualization.xml	31 May 2007 02:36:53 -0000	1.17
+++ Virtualization.xml	22 Jun 2007 02:14:14 -0000	1.18
@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@
   <section id="sn-Guest-Operating-Systems">
     <title>Guest Operating Systems</title>
     <para>
-      The Fedora 7 development team has tested Xen with Fedora 6, Fedora
-      7, and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4.5 and 5.0 guests. Other guests
-      have not been tested. With full virtualization, users can expect
-      reasonable success with a larger variety of operating systems,
-      including some proprietary operating systems.
+      The Fedora 7 development team has tested Xen with Fedora Core 6,
+      Fedora 7, and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 4.5 and 5.0 guests. Other
+      guests have not been tested. With full virtualization, users can
+      expect reasonable success with a larger variety of operating
+      systems, including some proprietary operating systems.
     </para>
   </section>