install-guide/devel/en_US entities.xml, 1.10, 1.11 expert-quickstart.xml, 1.2, 1.3 new-users.xml, 1.3, 1.4 rpm-info.xml, 1.8, 1.9

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Tue May 1 02:17:31 UTC 2007 

Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv20151/install-guide/en_US

Modified Files:
	entities.xml expert-quickstart.xml new-users.xml rpm-info.xml 
Log Message:
Some window dressing updates.  Still not ready for POT.


Index: entities.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/entities.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.10
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.10 -r1.11
--- entities.xml	29 Apr 2007 20:16:10 -0000	1.10
+++ entities.xml	1 May 2007 02:17:29 -0000	1.11
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!DOCTYPE entities SYSTEM "../../../docs-common/common/entities/entities.dtd">
+<!DOCTYPE entities PUBLIC "-//Fedora//DTD Docs ENTITIES V1.0//EN" "http://docs.fedoraproject.org/dtds/entities.dtd">
 
 <entities>
   <title>These entities are local to the Fedora Installation Guide.</title>


Index: expert-quickstart.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/expert-quickstart.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- expert-quickstart.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:37:27 -0000	1.2
+++ expert-quickstart.xml	1 May 2007 02:17:29 -0000	1.3
@@ -87,24 +87,28 @@
     </indexterm>
     <para>Back up any user data you need to preserve, and if necessary,
       resize existing partitions to make room for &DISTRO;. To resize
-      your NTFS partition from the &DISTRO; installer, use
+      your NTFS partition from the &DISTRO; installer, use the
+      <command>ntfsresize</command> and <command>fdisk</command>
+      commands.</para>
+    <para>Use
 	<keycombo>
 	<keycap function="control">Ctrl</keycap>
 	<keycap function="alt">Alt</keycap>
 	<keycap>F2</keycap>
-	</keycombo> to switch to a virtual terminal, and use the
-      <command>ntfsresize</command> and <command>fdisk</command>
-      commands.  Perform any resize operations before proceeding to the
-      installer's partitioning options.</para>
+	</keycombo> to switch to a virtual terminal from the
+      installation program if you are not using a Live CD.  Perform any
+      resize operations before proceeding to the installer's
+      partitioning options.</para>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-expert-install">
     <title>Install &DISTRO;</title>
     <para>Boot from the desired media, with any options appropriate for
-      your hardware and installation mode. If you boot from the Live CD,
-      select the "Install to Hard Disk" option from the menu to run the
-      installation program. If you boot from minimal media or a
-      downloaded kernel, select a network or hard disk resource from
-      which to install.</para>
+      your hardware and installation mode. Refer to <xref
+    linkend="ap-admin-options"/> for more information about boot
+      options.  If you boot from the Live CD, select the "Install to
+      Hard Disk" option from the menu to run the installation program.
+      If you boot from minimal media or a downloaded kernel, select a
+      network or hard disk resource from which to install.</para>
     <para>Proceed through all the steps of the installation program. The
       installation program does not change your system until you make a
       final confirmation to proceed. When installation is finished,


Index: new-users.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- new-users.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:50:11 -0000	1.3
+++ new-users.xml	1 May 2007 02:17:29 -0000	1.4
@@ -12,6 +12,16 @@
 
 <chapter id="ch-new-users">
   <title>New Users</title>
+  <para>This chapter explains how to get the files you need to install
+    and run &DISTRO; on your computer.  Some of the concepts in this
+    chapter may be new, since you may never have downloaded a complete
+    free operating system.</para>
+  <tip>
+    <title>Additional Help</title>
+    <para>If you have trouble with this chapter, you may be able to find
+      help by visiting the Fedora Forums at <ulink
+	url="http://www.fedoraforum.org/"/></para>
+  </tip>
   <section id="sn-howto-download">
     <title>How Do I Download Installation Files?</title>
     <para>The &FP; distributes &DISTRO; in many ways, most of which are
@@ -70,13 +80,14 @@
 	mirrors by geographic location. You may want to choose a mirror
 	that is geographically close to you for faster speed.</para>
       <para>Mirrors publish &DISTRO; software under a well-organized
-	hierarchy of folders. For example, the &DISTRO; 7 distribution
-	normally appears in the directory fedora/linux/core/7/. This
-	directory contains a folder for each architecture supported by
-	that release of &DISTRO;. CD and DVD media files appear inside
-	that folder, in a folder called iso/. For example, you can find
-	the file for the DVD distribution of &DISTRO; 7 for x86_64 at
-	fedora/linux/core/7/x86_64/iso/F-7-x86_64-DVD.iso.</para>
+	hierarchy of folders. For example, the &DISTRO; &DISTROVER;
+	distribution normally appears in the directory
+	&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/. This directory contains a
+	folder for each architecture supported by that release of
+	&DISTRO;. CD and DVD media files appear inside that folder, in a
+	folder called iso/. For example, you can find the file for the
+	DVD distribution of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; for x86_64 at
+	&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/x86_64/iso/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso.</para>
     </section>
     <section id="sn-which-download-bt">
       <title>From BitTorrent</title>
@@ -96,37 +107,44 @@
 	you download using BitTorrent, as a courtesy you should seed the
 	torrent at least until you have uploaded at least the same
 	amount of data you downloaded.</para>
-      <para>You do not need to find a special mirror for BitTorrent
-	files. The BitTorrent protocol ensures that your computer
-	participates in a nearby group. To download and use the &DISTRO;
-	BitTorrent files, visit <ulink
-	  url="http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/"/>.</para>
       <para>If your computer does not have software installed for
 	BitTorrent, visit the BitTorrent home page at <ulink
 	  url="http://bitconjurer.org/bittorrent/"/> to download it.
 	BitTorrent client software is available for Windows, Mac OS,
 	Linux, and many other operating systems.</para>
+      <para>You do not need to find a special mirror for BitTorrent
+	files. The BitTorrent protocol ensures that your computer
+	participates in a nearby group. To download and use the &DISTRO;
+	BitTorrent files, visit <ulink
+	  url="http://torrent.fedoraproject.org/"/>.</para>
     </section>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-which-arch">
     <title>Which Architecture Is My Computer?</title>
-    <para>Releases are separated by architecture, or type of computer
-      processor. Use the following table to determine the architecture
-      of your computer according to the type of processor. Consult your
-      manufacturer’s documentation for details on the processor if
-      necessary.</para>
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>architecture</primary>
+    </indexterm>
+    <para>Releases are separated by <firstterm>architecture</firstterm>,
+      or type of computer processor. Use the following table to
+      determine the architecture of your computer according to the type
+      of processor. Consult your manufacturer’s documentation for
+      details on the processor if necessary.</para>
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>architecture</primary>
+      <secondary>determining</secondary>
+    </indexterm>
     <segmentedlist>
       <title>Processor and Architecture Types</title>
       <segtitle>Processor Manufacturer and Model</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Architecture Type for &DISTRO;</segtitle>
       <seglistitem>
-	<seg>Intel (except Xeon, Core 2 Duo, or Centrino Core 2 Duo),
+	<seg>Intel (except Core 2 Duo, Centrino Core 2 Duo, or Xeon),
 	  AMD (except 64 or x2 dual-core), VIA C4, Apple MacBook
 	  Pro</seg>
 	<seg><systemitem>i386</systemitem></seg>
       </seglistitem>
       <seglistitem>
-	<seg>Intel Xeon, Core 2 Duo, and Centrino Core 2 Duo; AMD
+	<seg>Intel Core 2 Duo, Centrino Core 2 Duo, and Xeon; AMD
 	  Athlon64/x2, Sempron64/x2, Duron64</seg>
 	<seg><systemitem>x86_64</systemitem></seg>
       </seglistitem>
@@ -136,9 +154,13 @@
 	<seg><systemitem>ppc</systemitem></seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
-    <para>If you are unsure what type of processor your computer has,
-      and you are not using an Apple Macintosh, choose
-      <systemitem>i386</systemitem>.</para>
+    <tip>
+      <title><systemitem>i386</systemitem> Works for Most Windows
+	Compatible Computers</title>
+      <para>If you are unsure what type of processor your computer has,
+	and you are not using an Apple Macintosh, choose
+	<systemitem>i386</systemitem>.</para>
+    </tip>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-which-files">
     <title>Which Files Do I Download?</title>
@@ -146,8 +168,8 @@
       options below to decide which is best for you.</para>
     <para>The architecture type appears in the name of the downloadable
       files for each &DISTRO; distribution. For example, the file for
-      the DVD distribution of &DISTRO; 7 for x86_64 is named
-      F-7-x86_64-DVD.iso.  Refer to <xref
+      the DVD distribution of &DISTRO; &DISTROVER; for x86_64 is named
+      &FCX;-&DISTROVER;-x86_64-DVD.iso.  Refer to <xref
 	  linkend="sn-which-arch"/> if you are unsure of your computer's
       architecture.</para>
     <note>
@@ -162,7 +184,7 @@
 	computer, download the “Live CD” version. If your computer
 	supports booting from CD, you can boot the operating system
 	without making any changes to your hard disk. The Live CD also
-	provides an “Install to Hard Disk” menu option. If you decide
+	provides an "Install to Hard Disk" menu option. If you decide
 	you like what you see, and want to install it, simply activate
 	the selection to copy &DISTRO; to your hard disk. You can then
 	customize the software as needed after you reboot from your
@@ -170,8 +192,8 @@
       <para>The Live CD is a single file in the ISO image format. An ISO
 	image is a file that represents an entire disc from beginning to
 	end. Use your favorite CD or DVD creation program to create the
-	disc directly from the image. This option is often labeled “Burn
-	ISO to disc” or “Create disc from image.”</para>
+	disc directly from the image. This option is often labeled "Burn
+	ISO to disc" or "Create disc from image."</para>
       <para>You can download the Live CD directly from a mirror, or
 	using BitTorrent.</para>
     </section>
@@ -212,34 +234,28 @@
 	<title>Locating Files</title>
 	<segtitle>Media Type</segtitle>
 	<segtitle>File Locations</segtitle>
-	<segtitle>Installation Sources Recommended</segtitle>
 	<seglistitem>
 	  <seg>Live CD</seg>
-	  <seg><filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/F-7-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-Live.iso</filename>, 
-	    <filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/F-7-KDE-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-Live.iso</filename></seg>
-	  <seg>Direct copy to hard disk</seg>
+	  <seg><filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-Live.iso</filename>, 
+	    <filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-KDE-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-Live.iso</filename></seg>
 	</seglistitem>
 	<seglistitem>
 	  <seg>Full distribution on CD or DVD</seg>
-	  <seg><filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/F-7-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-DVD.iso</filename> 
+	  <seg><filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Live/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/&FCX;-&DISTROVER;-<replaceable>arch</replaceable>-DVD.iso</filename> 
 	    (or use BitTorrent for CD version)</seg>
-	  <seg>CD/DVD, ISO file(s) on hard disk, network</seg>
 	</seglistitem>
 	<seglistitem>
 	  <seg>Minimal CD boot media</seg>
-	  <seg><filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/boot.iso</filename></seg>
-	  <seg>Network</seg>
+	  <seg><filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/boot.iso</filename></seg>
 	</seglistitem>
 	<seglistitem>
 	  <seg>Minimal USB boot media</seg>
-	  <seg><filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/bootdisk.img</filename></seg>
-	  <seg>Network</seg>
+	  <seg><filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/bootdisk.img</filename></seg>
 	</seglistitem>
 	<seglistitem>
 	  <seg>Minimal PXE boot media</seg>
-	  <seg><filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/pxelinux/vmlinuz</filename>, 
-	    <filename>fedora/linux/core/7/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/pxelinux/initrd.img</filename></seg>
-	  <seg>Network</seg>
+	  <seg><filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/pxelinux/vmlinuz</filename>, 
+	    <filename>&FEDLC;/linux/core/&DISTROVER;/Fedora/<replaceable>arch</replaceable>/os/images/pxelinux/initrd.img</filename></seg>
 	</seglistitem>
       </segmentedlist>
     </section>


Index: rpm-info.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/rpm-info.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- rpm-info.xml	29 Apr 2007 14:06:05 -0000	1.8
+++ rpm-info.xml	1 May 2007 02:17:29 -0000	1.9
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8" standalone="no"?>
-<!DOCTYPE rpm-info SYSTEM "../../../docs-common/packaging/rpm-info.dtd">
+<!DOCTYPE rpm-info PUBLIC "-//Fedora//DTD Docs RPM-INFO V1.0//EN" "http://docs.fedoraproject.org/dtds/rpm-info.dtd">
 <rpm-info>
   <colophon>
     <worker surname="Ellis" firstname="Stuart" othername="" id="StuartEllis" email="stuart at elsn.org" wholename="Stuart Ellis" initials="SE"/>
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <worker email="kwade at redhat.com" firstname="Karsten" id="quaid" initials="KW" surname="Wade" wholename="Karsten Wade"/>
   </colophon>
   <author worker="StuartEllis"/>
-  <editor worker="PaulWFrields"/>
+  <author worker="PaulWFrields"/>
   <license>
     <rights>OPL</rights>
     <version>1.0</version>

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