install-guide/devel/en_US beginninginstallation.xml, 1.4, 1.5 new-users.xml, 1.6, 1.7 pxe-server.xml, 1.1, 1.2

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 6 18:21:36 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv25744/en_US

Modified Files:
	beginninginstallation.xml new-users.xml pxe-server.xml 
Log Message:
- Some refactoring
- Add @id to new appendix and create xref
- Remove some redundancies



Index: beginninginstallation.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/beginninginstallation.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- beginninginstallation.xml	29 Apr 2007 18:35:00 -0000	1.4
+++ beginninginstallation.xml	6 May 2007 18:21:34 -0000	1.5
@@ -14,50 +14,6 @@
 <chapter id="ch-beginninginstallation">
   <title>Beginning the Installation</title>
 
-  <para>
-    To begin installation of &FC;, boot the computer from the bootable
-    media.  The bootable media provides the necessary programs and files
-    to start the installation program.  Once you start the installation
-    program, you may be able to install from a completely different
-    piece of media.  For more information on finding and creating
-    bootable media, refer to <xref linkend="ch-new-users"/>.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    If you boot from the first installation disc of the &FC;
-    distribution, you may choose a different source for installation.
-    The default source is the CDs themselves.  To change this behavior,
-    enter <userinput>linux askmethod</userinput> at the
-    <computeroutput>boot:</computeroutput> prompt.  If you boot from
-    other media, the installation program <emphasis>always</emphasis>
-    asks you to choose the installation source.
-  </para>
-  
-  <para>
-    The <indexterm>
-      <primary>BIOS (Basic Input/Output System)</primary>
-    </indexterm> <firstterm>BIOS</firstterm> (Basic Input/Output System)
-    on your computer must support the type of boot media you select. The
-    BIOS controls access to some hardware devices during boot time. Any
-    computer that meets the minimum recommended specification for &FC;
-    can boot from a CD or DVD drive with the first disc.  USB drives and
-    flash media are newer technologies, but many computers can use them
-    as boot media. Some network cards and chipsets include support for
-    network booting with
-    <indexterm>
-      <primary>PXE (Pre-boot eXecution Environment)</primary>
-    </indexterm> <firstterm>PXE</firstterm>.  PXE (pronounced "pixie")
-    allows a computer to load boot files from a network server instead
-    of directly-connected hardware.
-  </para>
-
-  <para>
-    If you are not sure what capabilities your computer has, or how to
-    configure the BIOS, consult the documentation provided by the
-    manufacturer.  Detailed information on hardware specifications and
-    configuration is beyond the scope of this document.
-  </para>
-
   <note>
     <title>Aborting the Installation</title>
     <para>
@@ -69,6 +25,26 @@
     </para>
   </note>
 
+  <para>The following table summarizes the different boot methods and
+    recommended installation methods to use with each:</para>
+
+  <segmentedlist>
+    <segtitle>Boot Method</segtitle>
+    <segtitle>Installation Method</segtitle>
+    <seglistitem>
+      <seg>DVD</seg>
+      <seg>DVD, network, or hard disk</seg>
+    </seglistitem>
+    <seglistitem>
+      <seg>Minimal boot CD or USB</seg>
+      <seg>Network or hard disk</seg>
+    </seglistitem>
+    <seglistitem>
+      <seg>Live CD or USB</seg>
+      <seg><application>Install to Hard Disk</application>
+	application</seg>
+    </seglistitem>
+  </segmentedlist>
 
   <section id="sn-booting-from-disc">
     <title>Booting from CD, DVD, or USB Media</title>
@@ -86,8 +62,7 @@
 	  the USB media.</para>
       </step>
       <step>
-	<para>A boot screen appears, with a <prompt>boot:</prompt>
-	  prompt at the bottom.</para>
+	<para>A boot screen appears.</para>
       </step>
     </procedure>
 
@@ -100,6 +75,7 @@
       </para>
     </note>
 
+<!--
     <figure id="fig-boot">
       <title>Boot Screen</title>
       <mediaobject>
@@ -116,8 +92,19 @@
 	</textobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
+-->
 
     <para>
+      If you boot from the first installation disc of the &FC;
+      distribution, you may choose a different source for installation.
+      The default source is the CDs themselves.  To change this
+      behavior, enter <userinput>linux askmethod</userinput> at the
+      <computeroutput>boot:</computeroutput> prompt.  If you boot from
+      other media, the installation program <emphasis>always</emphasis>
+      asks you to choose the installation source.
+    </para>
+  
+    <para>
       If you hit <keycap>Enter</keycap>, the installation runs in
       default mode.  In the default mode, the installation uses a
       graphical interface if possible.  If the installation program runs
@@ -298,10 +285,9 @@
       To boot with <indexterm>
 	<primary>PXE (Pre-boot eXecution Environment)</primary>
       </indexterm> PXE, you need a properly configured server, and a
-      network interface in your computer that supports PXE. <!-- Refer
-      to <ulink url="SOME-URL">SOME-URL</ulink> for information on how
-      to configure a PXE server.  [When this tutorial exists, uncomment
-      this. - PWF.] -->
+      network interface in your computer that supports PXE.  For
+      information on how to configure a PXE server, refer to <xref
+	linkend="ap-pxe-server"/>.
     </para>
 
     <para>


Index: new-users.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/new-users.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.6
retrieving revision 1.7
diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7
--- new-users.xml	6 May 2007 14:14:53 -0000	1.6
+++ new-users.xml	6 May 2007 18:21:34 -0000	1.7
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
   <section id="sn-cannot-download">
-    <title>What If I Can't Download &DISTRO;?</title>
+    <title>What If I Cannot Download &DISTRO;?</title>
     <para>If you do not have a fast Internet connection, or if you have
       a problem creating boot media, downloading may not be an option.
       &DISTRO; DVD and CD distribution media is available from a number
@@ -338,6 +338,40 @@
       favorite Web search engine to locate a vendor, or refer to <ulink
 	url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Distribution/SponsoredMedia"/>.</para>
   </section>
+  <section id="sn-start-installation">
+    <title>How Do I Start the Installation Program?</title>
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>BIOS (Basic Input/Output System)</primary>
+    </indexterm>
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>CD/DVD media</primary>
+      <secondary>booting</secondary>
+    </indexterm>
+    <indexterm>
+      <primary>USB flash media</primary>
+      <secondary>booting</secondary>
+    </indexterm>
+    <para>To start the installation program from minimal boot media or
+      the distribution DVD, insert the media in your computer and turn
+      it on.  You may need to hit a specific key or combination of keys
+      to boot from the media, or configure your system's
+      <firstterm>Basic Input/Output System</firstterm>, or
+      <acronym>BIOS</acronym>, to boot from the media.</para>
+    <para>On most computers you must select the boot or BIOS option
+      promptly after turning on the computer.  Most Windows-compatible
+      computer systems use a special key such as <keycap>F1</keycap>,
+      <keycap>F2</keycap>, <keycap>F12</keycap>, or <keycap>Del</keycap>
+      to start the BIOS configuration menu.  On Apple computers, the
+      <keycap>C</keycap> key boots the system from the DVD drive.</para>
+    <tip>
+      <title>Configuring the BIOS</title>
+      <para>If you are not sure what capabilities your computer has, or
+	how to configure the BIOS, consult the documentation provided by
+	the manufacturer.  Detailed information on hardware
+	specifications and configuration is beyond the scope of this
+	document.</para>
+    </tip>
+  </section>
 </chapter>
 
 <!--


Index: pxe-server.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/pxe-server.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- pxe-server.xml	6 May 2007 17:06:44 -0000	1.1
+++ pxe-server.xml	6 May 2007 18:21:34 -0000	1.2
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 
 ]>
 
-<appendix>
+<appendix id="ap-pxe-server">
   <title>Setting Up a PXE Server</title>
   <note>
     <title>Experience Required</title>




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