install-guide/devel/en_US intro.xml,1.4,1.5
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sun May 6 21:05:10 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv23335
Modified Files:
intro.xml
Log Message:
Replace old intro with new one and fix up parent accordingly
Index: intro.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/intro.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
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--- intro.xml 7 Oct 2006 17:00:44 -0000 1.4
+++ intro.xml 6 May 2007 21:05:08 -0000 1.5
@@ -1,67 +1,102 @@
-<?xml version="1.0" encoding="utf-8"?>
+<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
+<!DOCTYPE chapter PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN"
+"http://www.docbook.org/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
-<!DOCTYPE preface PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.4//EN"
- "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.4/docbookx.dtd" [
-
-<!ENTITY % FEDORA-ENTITIES SYSTEM "fdp-entities.ent">
-%FEDORA-ENTITIES;
+<!ENTITY % FDP-ENTITIES SYSTEM "fdp-entities.ent">
+%FDP-ENTITIES;
<!ENTITY % DOC-ENTITIES SYSTEM "entities.ent">
%DOC-ENTITIES;
]>
-<!-- $Id: -->
-
-<preface id="ch-intro">
+<chapter lang="en-US">
<title>Introduction</title>
- <section>
- <title>About &FC;</title>
- <para>
- &FC; is a complete desktop and server operating system created
- entirely with open source software.
- </para>
- <caution>
- <title>&FC; Lifecycle</title>
-
- <para>
- &FC; is a rapidly evolving system which follows the latest
- technical developments. &FC; may not be appropriate for use in
- business-critical applications in your organization.
- </para>
- </caution>
- <para>
- For complete access to information about &FC;, refer to the
- official project wiki at <ulink url="http://fedoraproject.org/"/>
- and <xref linkend="ch-next-steps"/>.
- </para>
+ <para>This guide covers installation of &DISTRO;, a Linux distribution
+ built on free and open source software. This manual helps you
+ install &DISTRO; on desktops, laptops and servers. The installation
+ system is flexible enough to use even if you have no previous
+ knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If you select default
+ options, &DISTRO; provides a complete desktop operating system,
+ including productivity applications, Internet utilities, and desktop
+ tools.</para>
+ <para>This document does not detail all of the features of the
+ installation system.</para>
+ <section id="sn-background">
+ <title>Background</title>
+ <section id="sn-about-fedora">
+ <title>About &DISTRO;</title>
+ <para>To find out more about &DISTRO;, refer to <ulink
+ url="http://fedoraproject.org/"/>. To read other documentation
+ on &DISTRO; related topics, refer to <ulink
+ url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/"/>.</para>
+ </section>
+ <section id="sn-additional-help">
+ <title>Getting Additional Help</title>
+ <para>For information on additional help resources for &DISTRO;,
+ visit <ulink
+ url="http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Communicate"/>.</para>
+ </section>
</section>
- <section>
- <title>About this Manual</title>
- <para>
- This manual helps you install &FC; on desktops, laptops and
- servers. The installation system is flexible enough to use even if
- you have no previous knowledge of Linux or computer networks. If
- you select default options, &FC; provides a complete desktop
- operating system, including productivity applications, Internet
- utilities, and desktop tools.
- </para>
- <para>
- This document does not detail all of the features of the
- installation system.
- </para>
-
- &BUG-REPORTING;
-
- </section>
- <xi:include href="./acknowledgements.xml" xpointer="element(sn-acknowledgements)"
- xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-
-</preface>
-
-<!--
-Local variables:
-mode: xml
-fill-column: 72
-End:
--->
+ <section id="sn-about-document">
+ <title>About This Document</title>
+ <section id="sn-goals">
+ <title>Goals</title>
+ <para>This guide will help a reader:</para>
+ <orderedlist>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>understand how to locate the &DISTRO; distribution
+ online,</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>create configuration data that allows a computer to boot
+ &DISTRO;,</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>understand and interact with the &DISTRO; installation
+ program, and</para>
+ </listitem>
+ <listitem>
+ <para>complete basic post-installation configuration of a
+ &DISTRO; system.</para>
+ </listitem>
+ </orderedlist>
+ <tip>
+ <title>Other Sources of Documentation</title>
+ <para>This guide does not cover use of &DISTRO;. To learn how to
+ use an installed &DISTRO; system, refer to <ulink
+ url="http://docs.fedoraproject.org/"/> for other
+ documentation.</para>
+ </tip>
+ </section>
+ <section id="sn-audience">
+ <title>Audience</title>
+ <para>This guide is intended for new and intermediate &DISTRO;
+ users. Advanced &DISTRO; users with questions about detailed
+ operation of expert installation features should consult the
+ Anaconda development mailing list at <ulink
+ url="http://www.redhat.com/archives/anaconda-devel-list/"/>.</para>
+ </section>
+ </section>
+ <section id="sn-feedback">
+ <title>Feedback</title>
+ <indexterm>
+ <primary>FDP</primary>
+ <see>&FDP;</see>
+ </indexterm>
+ <indexterm>
+ <primary>&FDP;</primary>
+ </indexterm>
+ <para>The &FDP; (FDP) is a group of volunteer writers, editors,
+ translators, and other contributors who create content for free
+ and open source software. The FDP maintains this document and is
+ always interested in reader feedback.</para>
+ <para>To send feedback regarding this document, send email to <ulink
+ url="mailto:docs at fedoraproject.org">docs at fedoraproject.org</ulink>,
+ or visit <ulink url="https://bugzilla.redhat.com/"/> to file a bug
+ in &BZ;. To file a bug, fill in "&BZ-PROD;" as the Product, choose
+ the name of this document from the Component list, and choose
+ "devel" as the version. FDP volunteers receive your feedback, and
+ may contact you for additional information if necessary.</para>
+ </section>
+</chapter>
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