install-guide/devel/en_US diskpartitioning.xml,1.8,1.9

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat May 19 15:38:33 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13704

Modified Files:
	diskpartitioning.xml 
Log Message:
Fix typo and make less judgment about the results.



Index: diskpartitioning.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- diskpartitioning.xml	19 May 2007 15:34:39 -0000	1.8
+++ diskpartitioning.xml	19 May 2007 15:38:31 -0000	1.9
@@ -188,10 +188,11 @@
 	disks at installation time is not vital, disconnect them to
 	avoid any confusion.</para>
       <tip>
-	<title>Post-installtion Usage</title>
-	<para>Connecting and configuring external FireWire and USB disks
-	  after installation is very easy, and is highly
-	  recommended.</para>
+	<title>Post-installation Usage</title>
+	<para>You can connect and configure external FireWire and USB
+	  hard disks after installation.  Most such devices are
+	  recognized by the kernel and available for use at that
+	  time.</para>
       </tip>
     </section>
   </section>




More information about the Fedora-docs-commits mailing list