install-guide/devel/en_US diskpartitioning.xml,1.8,1.9
Paul W. Frields (pfrields)
fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Sat May 19 15:38:33 UTC 2007
Author: pfrields
Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv13704
Modified Files:
diskpartitioning.xml
Log Message:
Fix typo and make less judgment about the results.
Index: diskpartitioning.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/diskpartitioning.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.8
retrieving revision 1.9
diff -u -r1.8 -r1.9
--- diskpartitioning.xml 19 May 2007 15:34:39 -0000 1.8
+++ diskpartitioning.xml 19 May 2007 15:38:31 -0000 1.9
@@ -188,10 +188,11 @@
disks at installation time is not vital, disconnect them to
avoid any confusion.</para>
<tip>
- <title>Post-installtion Usage</title>
- <para>Connecting and configuring external FireWire and USB disks
- after installation is very easy, and is highly
- recommended.</para>
+ <title>Post-installation Usage</title>
+ <para>You can connect and configure external FireWire and USB
+ hard disks after installation. Most such devices are
+ recognized by the kernel and available for use at that
+ time.</para>
</tip>
</section>
</section>
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