install-guide/devel/en_US timezone.xml,1.4,1.5

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Wed May 23 00:55:18 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv4579

Modified Files:
	timezone.xml 
Log Message:
Moving indexterms before the affected para, while very slightly less
granular, is far easier to edit, so I recommend it.



Index: timezone.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/timezone.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
retrieving revision 1.5
diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5
--- timezone.xml	23 May 2007 00:50:43 -0000	1.4
+++ timezone.xml	23 May 2007 00:55:16 -0000	1.5
@@ -42,16 +42,15 @@
   </section>
   <section id="sn-utc">
     <title>Universal Co-ordinated Time (UTC)</title>
-
-    <para>
-      <indexterm>
+    <indexterm>
       <primary>UTC (Universal Co-ordinated time)</primary>
-      </indexterm> Universal Co-ordinated Time is also known as
-      <indexterm>
+    </indexterm>
+    <indexterm>
       <primary>GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)</primary>
       <see>UTC</see>
-      </indexterm> Greenwich Mean Time (GMT).
-    </para>
+    </indexterm>
+    <para>For purposes of addressing time zones, Universal Co-ordinated
+      Time is also known as Greenwich Mean Time (GMT).</para>
 
     <para>
       If &FC; is the only operating system on your computer, select
@@ -67,9 +66,9 @@
 
       <para>
         Do not enable the <guilabel>System clock uses UTC</guilabel>
-        option if your machine also runs Microsoft Windows. Microsoft
-        operating systems change the BIOS clock to match local time
-        rather than UTC. This may cause unexpected behavior under &FC;.
+	option if your machine also runs Microsoft Windows. Microsoft
+	operating systems change the BIOS clock to match local time
+	rather than UTC. This may cause unexpected behavior under &FC;.
       </para>
     </caution>
 




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