install-guide/devel/en_US welcome.xml,1.3,1.4

Paul W. Frields (pfrields) fedora-docs-commits at redhat.com
Thu May 24 02:20:00 UTC 2007


Author: pfrields

Update of /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv24351

Modified Files:
	welcome.xml 
Log Message:
- Improve sectioning and admonition
- Make admonition clearer



Index: welcome.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/docs/install-guide/devel/en_US/welcome.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- welcome.xml	11 May 2007 18:51:34 -0000	1.3
+++ welcome.xml	24 May 2007 02:19:58 -0000	1.4
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
     After the installation program loads its next stage, a welcome
     dialog appears. Select <guilabel>Next</guilabel> to continue.
   </para>
-  <section id="ch-initialize-hdd">
+  <section id="sn-initialize-hdd">
     <title>Initializing the Hard Disk</title>
     <para>If no readable partition tables are found on existing hard
       disks, the installation program asks to initialize the hard disk.
@@ -26,16 +26,19 @@
       unreadable.  If your system has a brand new hard disk with no
       operating system installed, or you have removed all partitions on
       the hard disk, answer <guilabel>Yes</guilabel>.</para>
+  </section>
+  <section id="sn-raid-config">
+    <title>RAID or Other Nonstandard Configurations</title>
+    <para>Certain RAID systems or other nonstandard configurations may
+      be unreadable to the installation program and the aforementioned
+      prompt may appear.  The installation program responds to the
+      physical disk structures it is able to detect.</para>
     <warning>
-      <title>RAID or Other Nonstandard Configurations</title>
-      <para>Certain RAID systems or other nonstandard configurations may
-	be unreadable to the installation program and the aforementioned
-	prompt may appear.  The installation program responds to the
-	physical disk structures it is able to detect.</para>
-      <para><emphasis>If you have a nonstandard disk configuration that
-	  can be detached during installation and configured afterward,
-	  power off the system, detach it, and restart the
-	  installation.</emphasis></para>
+      <title>Detach Unneeded Disks</title>
+      <para>If you have a nonstandard disk configuration that can be
+	detached during installation and detected and configured
+	afterward, power off the system, detach it, and restart the
+	installation.</para>
     </warning>
   </section>
 </chapter>




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