release-notes/devel/en_US Live.xml,1.15,1.16

[Murray McAllister (mdious)]

Author: mdious

Update of /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US
In directory cvs-int.fedora.redhat.com:/tmp/cvs-serv6657/en_US

Modified Files:
	Live.xml 
Log Message:
minor revisions as per wiki content



Index: Live.xml
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RCS file: /cvs/docs/release-notes/devel/en_US/Live.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.15
retrieving revision 1.16
diff -u -r1.15 -r1.16
--- Live.xml	17 Mar 2008 22:54:45 -0000	1.15
+++ Live.xml	7 Apr 2008 21:50:31 -0000	1.16
@@ -135,6 +135,13 @@
         any other data to be stored on the media.
       </para>
     </section>
+    
+    <section id="Tool-Changes">
+	    <title>Tool Changes</title>
+	    <para>
+		    Work has continued to better integrate the Live images with the rest of the system, and improve the tools used for building them. The <command>livecd-creator</command> utility now provides an API for building alternative front-ends, as well as tools for other types of images.
+	    </para>
+    </section>
 
     <section id="sn-Differences-From-a-Regular-Fedora-Install">
       <title>Differences From a Regular Fedora Install</title>
@@ -147,29 +154,17 @@
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Live images provide a subset of packages available in the
-            regular DVD image. Both connect to the same repository that
-            has all the packages.
+		  Live images provide a subset of packages available in the regular DVD image. Both connect to the same repository that has all the packages.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            SSH is disabled by default and NetworkManager is enabled by
-            default in the Live images. SSH is disabled because the
-            default username in the Live images does not have any
-            password. Installation to hard disk prompts for creating a
-            new user name and password however. NetworkManager is
-            enabled by default since Live images target desktop users.
+		  SSH is disabled by default. SSH is disabled because the default username in the Live images does not have any password; however, installation to hard disk prompts for creating a new username and password.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            Live image installations do not allow any package selection
-            or upgrade capability since they copy entire the filesystem
-            from media to hard disk or USB disks. After the installation
-            is complete and rebooted, packages can be added and removed
-            as desired with <command>yum</command> or the other software
-            management tools.
+		  Live image installations do not allow any package selection or upgrade capability since they copy the entire file system from media or USB disks, to the hard disk. After the installation is complete, and your system has been rebooted, packages can be added and removed as desired with <command>yum</command>, or the other software management tools.
           </para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>